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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asma18


Thnx di, ..aap ko achcha laga. ..
aap ko pata hai ..

AB TOH AADATH SE HAI MUJHE KO AAISA. .LAMBE COMMENT LIKHNE
MEIN.
Aur aap k liye toh anytime. ...jab aap kaho. .
Mujhe achcha lagta hai. ...mere feelings share
karne Mein ki mujhe update padhti waqt kaisa laga Han
kabhi kabhi bahut zyada ho jata hai. . 😳 😉
aur aap se baat karke achcha lagta hai. ..
love you di ❤️



love u too Asma...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hi All!

Here is the teasing Teaser for the nxt updt😉

PART 6: KISME KITNA HAI DUM

To chalo guess maarna shuru kardo ke is updtme kya hoga...


Hey maanvir
please translate the teaser into English 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 9900


Hey maanvir
please translate the teaser into English😭



Its smhng lyk...WHO IS THE STRONGEST?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir



Its smhng lyk...WHO IS THE STRONGEST?

oh...
That means a fight is ahead😆
That would be awesome.
Thankyou so much
Please update soon 😃
Edited by 9900 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi All!

Kafi log is update keliye utsuk the to socha ke jaldi update kar doon...

Teaser padhke kayi logon ne guess karne ki koshish ki hai ke is update me kya hoga...

Unfortunately aksar logon ki assumptions galat nikli...bas do chaar ke tukke nishane pe lage hain...

To bhayi updt pado aur jaan lo ke kis kiske nishane sahi lage...




Part 6: Kisme Kitna Hai Dum



Urghhh...I just hate this & I hate that RKB...


Usi ke wajah se meri brand new cycle, jo ab bilkul bhi new nahi lag rahi, repair keliye di gayi hai.


Mujhe paidal ana pada aaj kyunki mere uthne se pehle Appa office keliye nikal gaye the.
Ye bhi us RKB ki wajah se hi hua kyunki wo mere sapne me aya aur is wajah se meri neend achhi nahi ho payi.
I hate him...I just hate him.


Uski bhalayi isi me hai ke aaj wo mujhe dikhayi na de. Warna pata nahi mai kya kar baithungi...urghhh...


Wow! Just great!
My day can't get better than this!
PS: Please note the sarcasm.


First thing...ermmm...person I had to see in the school campus is him...eee...


Control Ishita! Control!
Yaad nahi Raman ne kal rath sapne me kya kaha tha...
Use apni halat pe chod de aur tu bus aage badh.
Ignore him!

I told myself and acted upon my self thought ignoring his presence and trying to walk away.


"Oh hello! Excuse me"
Hello Mr...Don't you know I don't want to mess with you right now? I asked him mentally when I heard him calling me.

I did not pay heed and continued walking.


"Hey you!" He said blocking my way
"Behri ho? Sunayi nahi deta ke mai bula raha hun?"


"Andhe ho? Dikhayi nahi detha ke I am not interested" I retorted.


"Tumhari itni himmat ke RKB ko ignore karo" he fumed.


The fire in his eyes said that he was not backing off and I didn't want my day to begin with a fight.
So gathering all the patience I had, I told him as polite as I could be "Look. I don't want to mess with you and spoil my day. So please let me go"


"Smart ho samajh gayi that nobody messes with RKB" he said with a half smile...

Chalo samajh to gaya I thought letting out a sigh but was forced to stop in between as he continued
"But RKB messes with everyone" he smirked.


Oh great! Who were you expecting to understand Ishita? I mentally chided myself.


"Kya Bhai? Bachhi se kyun panga le rahe ho?" one of his cronies said supporting himself on RKB's shoulder "Dar jayegi bechari" he added looking at me with fake sympathy.


"Mai kisi se nahi darti" I said looking straight into his eyes.


"Ooo" his other cronies hooted


"Bhai...lagta hai apko takkar denewali agayi" one of them said


See...he knows...I told him mentally.



"Really???? 1950 ki model 21st millennium ke Stud ko kya takkar degi" RKB said shrugging off.


"Kya bhai? Is classic beauty ko aap 1950 ki model bol rahe ho...Not fair"
one of his irritating friends said trying to touch my face. I jerked him away angrily.


"Pssst...Tujhe ye adhe litre tel me banayi hui 2 chotiwali chashmish kis angle se beauty lagi" RKB said making fun of me.

The others laughed too and I glared at them.


One of them acted scared and commented "Bhai...chod do na bachhi ko. Bahut sanskari lag rahi hai"


"Sanskari! Oh I see!" RKB said observing from head to toe.


"To Miss Sanskari. Tumhe to pata hi hoga ke hamare desh me badon ki izzat ki jati hai. To apne sanskaronka ek namoona humein dikhao, hum sabke pair choo kar aur yahan se chalti bano" he smirked.



Sanskar you said...
Now I will show you my sanskar of dealing with hooligans like you...
Aa dekhein zara kisme kitna hai dum


I bent my head slightly to get ready to show him my sanskar and then lifted my right hand and with all my might and at the speed of 120 kmph landed it on his left cheek.

Slap...the sound echoed in the entire campus attracting everyone's attention.
It seemed like everyone except me had frozen for seconds after that.


He was definitely taken aback. His left hand remained on the spot where he had just received a blow and his mouth hung open.

"Agar kisi se izzat chahte ho, to pehle doosron ki izzat karna seekho. 'Give respect, take respect' seekha to hoga na school me. Oh mai bhi kisse pooch rahi hun? Apne attitude ko side me rakh ke dhyan doge to hi to yad rahega na ke kya seekha hai" I scoffed.


His cronies made way for my exit as soon as they saw me glare at them. Probably they were scared of tasting the fruit of messing with me which their friend had just dealt with.

I walked a step ahead, turned back and continued "Ab tak to tumhe pata chal hi gaya hoga ke nobody messes with me. So next time be careful" I warned imitating his attitude from the previous encounter.
Jam ke rakhna kadam mere sathiya


As I walked ahead, everyone ogled at me like I was the ruthless murderer who had just committed a crime in beech bazaar.
Ignoring them all I walked fearlessly towards my class while RKB still stood rooted to his spot.
Aage nikal aaye hum
Woh peeche reh gaye



As I climbed the stairs, I could hear students gossiping among themselves about what had just transpired.

I had reached my class & was getting in when a random student tapped my shoulder and said that someone was waiting for my downstairs.

I peeped down and found RKB standing there.
Upar chale aye hum
Woh neeche reh gaye


"Hey you! Come down immediately" he ordered.

Like I care...huh...I just shrugged and got into my class.


Minutes later he rammed into my classroom like a mad bull.
Everyone stopped doing whatever they were busy with, stood up and just looked on as he strode towards my seat.


"What do you think of yourself? You do not know who you have messed with?" He spat.

I continued doing my work nonchalantly.


That must have irked him.
He banged his fist on my table and before he could strangle me a voice was heard " What's going on here? And RKB what are you doing in this class? Vacate the class immediately" our teacher ordered.


He looked at the teacher, then at me and gritting his teeth said "Aaj bach gayi. Lekin mat bhoolo tum yahan nayi ho. Aur jis jagah khadi ho, wo jagah mere isharon pe chalta hai"
Saare sheher me hum hi hain
Hum sa koun hai



"To tumhe bhi patha hona chahye ke mai bhi yahin hoon. Dekhte hain tum kya kar lete ho" I gave back unafraid.
Dekho idhar hum yahin hain
Humsa koun hai



"RKB! Leave the room now. Or else I will call the Principal" the teacher yelled and he left the room after giving me a deadly glare.



That day onward I received special treatment at school.
By special I mean that nobody wanted to befriend me rather too afraid to befriend me coz none had the guts to be around the one who had messed with RKB and face his wrath.

But I did not care.
I did not need a friend coz I had a special friend who was always there for me.

"Thank you Raman and I love you because. ...

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake"


------To be continued------


So how was the update?
Let me know

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
manny di u r awesome u knw that right!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow that was awesome 😊
🤣
Seriously the slapping part was awesome. Can't even imagine the guts she has.
And also after that warning and ignoring RKB🤣
It's wonderful
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

manny di u r awesome u knw that right!


Am I? Really?😳
I didn't know...😛
Thanx to u...ab pata chal gaya😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 9900

Wow that was awesome 😊

🤣
Seriously the slapping part was awesome. Can't even imagine the guts she has.
And also after that warning and ignoring RKB🤣
It's wonderful
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part


Thnx pooja...

BTW hw did u undrstnd the dialogues...u said u dnt knw hindi right?
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Posted: 10 years ago
'Saare Shehar Mai Hum hi Hain
Hum Sa Kaun Hai'

'Dekho Idhar Hum Yaheen Hain,
Hum Sa Kaun Hai'


HahahaahahHahahaahah i loveee that scene..
Perfect.

If I am not wrong Raman ne to kaha tha na k Ab WO girls se respect se baat krega'
To Yeh esa kyun kar RHA hai..
RKB wala attitude. I understand ..
Acha Raman's pov kab milega...
Seriously want to know that usko ishita yaad Hai ya nahi...
Please write Raman's pov as early as possible..
Fantastic Update Mano..
👏

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