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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Third part...
I don't know how this part came to be. I had planned it differently but changed it all. There is some intense stuff.
I don't know if all will like it.. so I am scared..😆😆 but I promise this is not long..
The next one should be the last part..or depending on how the next one turns out..there maybe one more to it, though I am saying this, I definitely see 2 more cz I still have to bring in some sutff.😆 So yeah...😃😃

I will update the next one by the weekend for sure..😳😳

Enjoy. And please do leave back your feedback. Would love to read the comments..positive or negative! 😃😃

Anu!

NOT PROOF READ. So please excuse any mistakes! 😳

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Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

amezng update. But plz dnt separate ishra ohk.

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Awww. Ishu too is heart broken. Raman words hurted her. Can't wait to know about her past. Lets see what happens in the next update. How Raman stops her.

Edited by ..Mehak.. - 10 years ago

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

amazing part Aru..
aww..poor ishita.. raman have hurted her ..
well I m shocked for her..I hope Raman will get some sense into his mind.
continue soon
thanx for pm

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

WHO was that man in the end? And WHAT is Ishita's story?

I was so engrossed in the plot that I didn't like the fact that this part ended 😔 😆 Super update, Anu! 👏 👏 👏 I always love stories which play with IshRa's raw emotions of love, longing and passion ☺️ I also love strong Ishita who gives it back to Raman with her words 👏 😃 And I also love Raman who is so in control, yet so broken at the same time 😃

Next part sooner please 😳

Edited by -Nidoo- - 10 years ago

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Superb update... With so much emmosion...

Poor ishu...

Plz give Raman some sense...

But don't separate them...

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123
amezng update. But plz dnt separate ishra ohk.

Thank you! 😃
And IshRa..haha..next update!! 😳😳

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..
Awww. Ishu too is heart broken. Raman words hurted her. Can't wait to know about her past. Lets see what happens in the next update. How Raman stops her.

Thanks for the comment Mehak! 😃

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: desire_nikki
amazing part Aru..
aww..poor ishita.. raman have hurted her ..
well I m shocked for her..I hope Raman will get some sense into his mind.
continue soon
thanx for pm

Thank you so much..
As for Raman..ahh well its Raman atferalll..😆😆
Will update by weekend..

And no worries.! 😳😳