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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE

On the request of my reader... I've decided that Raman won't get murdered in fact I'll try to bring in a different twist which will hopefully be more engaging!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds good. Pls PM me when you update. Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 1

He felt a fire burning inside him as he saw IshRa taking the rounds of the sacred fire ... how he wished he would get the chance to pounce on that lady and fulfil his pleasures!

No... he didn't love her... he lusted for her... seeing her would evoke a sexual tendency within which he found hard to control... he wanted to grab her hand and make her his own...!!

As the wedding got over... Raman immediately got a call from his best friend Mihir that there was an urgent meeting lined up and he had to be in Mumbai... right away!

Being the workaholic he was, Raman left his newly wedded wife in the hands of his mother and sisters!

~

It was now midnight and everyone had gone to sleep except for two people...

Ishita was feeling so restless... she felt a weird uneasiness and went to the washroom to take a shower before bed.

~

As she unbolted the door to enter her bedroom in her nightie... she saw Romi standing there completely inundated with liquor... she tried to run out of the room but couldn't escape as she found the door locked

She tried to push away Romi who by now was tearing off her clothing... she felt helpless at his hands as she had no means to escape!

To her misfortune; except for the bed; all other furniture had been removed so there was absolutely no way Ishita could attack Romi to save herself!

She screamed... pleading him to leave her as she was his elder brother's wife but if only he paid heed... all that was on his mind was too get her body... anyhow!

~

No one was there to hear out her screams! She had been destroyed and the house she had began believing as her own now felt like a dark tunnel from which she saw no escape!

She was tied down at the hands of destiny. She came from a very poor family and she was now married into a respectable family. Her parents had always told her to stay with her husband, no matter how they treated her! That was the only feasible thing to do and today she applied the same to this situation!

~

She felt dirty; impure, provocative, a seductress! She felt filthy. She wasn't in any state to comprehend anything that had happened... she went in trauma... every few minutes a fear began looming in her mind... like he was out to get her... he would try to force himself upon her... again!

Her chain of thoughts was broken by her ringtone... it flashed Raman as the caller's ID!

For a second, she felt a sense of security. She so wanted to be secure in his embrace without a worry of the wretched world!

She was interrupted again by her ringtone and after mustering a lot of courage she picked up the phone and once she heard the comforting sound of the love of her life!

It transported her into such a beautiful trance... she wanted to feel Raman around her...

after a while she burst into a pool of tears as she opened her heart out to Raman...

~

Raman, shockingly, didn't agree to a word said...

Just then she found out that this battle was to be fought all alone!

She hanged the phone up on him and even he didn't try to contact her again!

She knew that Raman loved Romi the most in this world but she didn't know that this love was blind! She had to make her husband understand that his brother was a devil!

~

Raman returned back home in a matter of few days but she sensed his coldness and broke the silence by initiating a conversation

Raman I know ke Romi aapka bhai hai magar he... Raman he... ussne woh ghatiya harkat ki hai!

Ussne... nahi yaar he's a sweet boy! Mera Romi... mera bacha hai woh... meri godh mein khela hai! He's like a son yaar! Mera ... woh.. aisa... nahi... he can't!

Ishita shook Raman's shoulders and tried to make him understand the reality!

He wouldn't relent, however!

Just then Romi entered the room in the pretence of meeting Raman. In actuality, he'd eyes on Ishita... who had a simple ... Punjabi salwar suit in his, by coincidence, favourite colour, red...

He even had the audacity to say ... uff Bhabhi... you're looking red hot today! Uff keh dha rahe ho!

Raman felt Ishita bridle a little but pushed any such though out of his mind!

~

In the night, when Raman proposed their "first night", Ishita refused!

This provoked Raman to mouth the unthinkable! He out rightly said toh kya yeh sab Romi ke saath karne ka iraada hai?

END OF PART 1
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg Romi...
Already?
Ewww 😡
Please Don't Tell Me She Will Be Preggy With Romi's Child!
Oh God Already The First Part Is Crazy!
Please Continue Soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just read this one Umeirah and what do i say...this one was a dark concept and as a matter of fact i know only you can pull it out
the beginning was sweet and scary at the same time...ishra wedding but Romi's dirty thoughts...Raman failed as a husband the very first day coz for a women her husband is the only support in a new house and he left her to his family the very first day...how much ever important work was...he could either stay or take her along but he found a 3rd way

and then Romi's actions and Ishita's suffering was painful to read...no women deserves this but unfortunately this is the bitter truth...so many times the victim in from the family

the worst part was Raman not trusting his wife but then i agree to a point with him here...dont take me wrong but he knows Ishita from just few days but he has known Romi all his life so he will eventually trust him more...but again it was such a disrespect to her

the last part was disgusting to read

u know whatever emotions you tried to portray here they all reached me so i would just say it was perfectly done

hats off to you for firstly thinking something like this and then daring to go ahead with it

brilliant job done yaar

waiting to read ahead eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivanIsh

just read this one Umeirah and what do i say...this one was a dark concept and as a matter of fact i know only you can pull it out

the beginning was sweet and scary at the same time...ishra wedding but Romi's dirty thoughts...Raman failed as a husband the very first day coz for a women her husband is the only support in a new house and he left her to his family the very first day...how much ever important work was...he could either stay or take her along but he found a 3rd way

and then Romi's actions and Ishita's suffering was painful to read...no women deserves this but unfortunately this is the bitter truth...so many times the victim in from the family

the worst part was Raman not trusting his wife but then i agree to a point with him here...dont take me wrong but he knows Ishita from just few days but he has known Romi all his life so he will eventually trust him more...but again it was such a disrespect to her

the last part was disgusting to read

u know whatever emotions you tried to portray here they all reached me so i would just say it was perfectly done

hats off to you for firstly thinking something like this and then daring to go ahead with it

brilliant job done yaar

waiting to read ahead eagerly

ah... you made my day Pankhuri and this concept was so fascinating and bugging me for years on end! Toh bas phir, I decided and here I am! And haan... Raman loves his brother too much isiliye he always over looks his mistakes! Thankyou! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous update dear..:-)u potrayed ishu situation clearly..

Romi remembered me param in show.he also use the trust of family as his weapon to harm ishu..

Romi romi,how he so different from raman.. offcourse all fingers are not same.same like sibiling mentalities are different.

romi eyed in ishu before ishra marriage..how raman leave ishu at first day of marriage..that too she is new to that place,new people,.how she manage...raman that much work hacolic...

I really dont think romi raped ishu.if did, ishu will not stay in bhallas.she definately in bad turmoil..she hurted alot..she is afraid of romi..

O RKB back to home.ishu tell what romi is.raman disbelieve ishu..hmm he dnt know abot ishu..so he support his son like bro romi.

Romi complimented ishu infront of raman..
What the disgusting ,rediculous raman thinking about ishu..

If he believe his brother,then y he is talking like this to ishu.

If ishu back off her first step to raman..it means she is feeling impurity of romi touch.

But i want ishu should take first step bcoz raman like man understand parctical attempts .hmm as we readers want ishra love making,but raman crossed his line.

Hope u continue soon..
Thanks for pm:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: janani_divan

Fabulous update dear..:-)u potrayed ishu situation clearly..

Romi remembered me param in show.he also use the trust of family as his weapon to harm ishu..

Romi romi,how he so different from raman.. offcourse all fingers are not same.same like sibiling mentalities are different.

romi eyed in ishu before ishra marriage..how raman leave ishu at first day of marriage..that too she is new to that place,new people,.how she manage...raman that much work hacolic...

I really dont think romi raped ishu.if did, ishu will not stay in bhallas.she definately in bad turmoil..she hurted alot..she is afraid of romi..

O RKB back to home.ishu tell what romi is.raman disbelieve ishu..hmm he dnt know abot ishu..so he support his son like bro romi.

Romi complimented ishu infront of raman..
What the disgusting ,rediculous raman thinking about ishu..

If he believe his brother,then y he is talking like this to ishu.

If ishu back off her first step to raman..it means she is feeling impurity of romi touch.

But i want ishu should take first step bcoz raman like man understand parctical attempts .hmm as we readers want ishra love making,but raman crossed his line.

Hope u continue soon..
Thanks for pm:-)

woho! Long comment... I love it! You'll see what happens next and just to say... this isn't a typical love story... in fact it's not really a love story! The protagonist, in many manners, is Romi! As for Romi reminding you of Param that was just a beautiful coincidence! Actually, many years before I'd come up with this story... YHM had the same plotline which has given me the confidence to write this one! Thankyou
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divancraze

Omg Romi...

Already?
Ewww😡
Please Don't Tell Me She Will Be Preggy With Romi's Child!
Oh God Already The First Part Is Crazy!
Please Continue Soon!

you can't get pregnant just by doing it once yaar! Ishu won't get pregnant!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2

Kya baqwaas kar rahe ho Raman! How could you even say this? Kitni ghatiya family hai yeh! I just don't want to live with you!

Toh jao naa! Arre kal ki aayi hui ladki mujhe bataye gi mere hi bhai ke baare mein! Tujhe shukar manana chahi yeh ke tujhe main toh mila warna tujh jaisi ladki jo ki ek tawayaf ki beti hai... shaadi hi koun karta! Apne khaandan ke khilaf jaake maine tujhse shaadi ke! Tune mere bhai pe koi chota ilzaam nahi lagaya! Just get lost!

Ishita just stormed out WITHOUT uttering a word!

~

Romi asked Raman where Ishita was...

After hesitating; Romi I... maine usse ghar se nikal diya!

Kya baqwaas... Mera matlab... kyun Bhai??

Romi... woh... ussne... she... tune... she... ussne kaha... that... ke tune... you raped...

Bhai... aapke sir ki kasam khake kehta hoon! Woh meri badi behen ki tarha hain Bhai! I respect her! Uttered not with an ounce of guilt... In fact he was glad that IshRa had separated!

Bhai kyun naa hum pub chalte hain?

Romi office ka itna kaam hai...

Arre woh Mihir hai naa... sambhal le ga! Bhai ab aap manna math karo!

Acha theek hai...!!

Thank you Bhai... love you!

I love you too Romi... bahut zyaada!

~

Yeh lo Bhai... champagne! Cheers!

This was all Romi's plan. He wanted to get Raman so drunk so that he could easily murder him and prove it to be drunk driving!

He made Raman gulp down some 16 drinks. Raman was heavily drunk and was going on about how Ishita broke his heart and that he still loved her too much!

Romi's intention got stronger as a fire burnt within him to murder Raman so brutally that he couldn't even inch closer to Ishita!

He took Raman into the pub's washroom under the pretence that Raman could freshen up! Whilst Raman was freshening up; Romi took out a knife and stabbed Raman in the spine!

The only word which left Raman's mouth was Ishita!

Romi's hatred for Raman intensified and he stabbed Raman in the spine which reached his chest...!!

Blood began oozing from Raman's back and Romi took the back entrance and exited the place to make the "attempted murder" seem like a accidental death!

It was really lame as a security guard spot Raman and rushed him to the hospital!

~

The doctor saw Raman and informed Romi he'd been paralysed!

END OF PART 2

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