ShaRam OS Thread: OS- Her Hidden Sacrifice by jasminerahul on pg-20 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Posted my OS ☺️ (pg 5)
Do comment and like 😊


Superbly written..mersallayitten😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gayu... Sweetie you amaze me... For me it was not so you. Till now whatever work of your i read has masti twist n emotions too.
But it was entirely different.
You actually make me feel for Shagun .
Her pain was justified and so beautifully penned down.
No remorse for reading a sharam OS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@gaya this was awesome
i really felt her pain
its emotional
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: RollingStones


Technically...

Ho Tan Mai Suiyan Suiyan Si Suyian Suiyan Si Yuhi Lagi Chubne

This song is well suited for ShaRam Haters...😆


On a second thought, I wanna write an IshRa (my first love in this show) OS based on this besharam song.
Take that ShaRam haters...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

@gaya this was awesome
i really felt her pain
its emotional


Thank you so much dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukanksha

Gayu... Sweetie you amaze me... For me it was not so you. Till now whatever work of your i read has masti twist n emotions too.
But it was entirely different.
You actually make me feel for Shagun .
Her pain was justified and so beautifully penned down.
No remorse for reading a sharam OS


Thank you for feeling that it was not so a me who wrote it... 😉
Subject... You know...😆
thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Gaya3, di... That was way too emotional...
But loved the changed Shagun.
And the last dialogue "I am so much in love... With her." Too good di...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishra_Sona

@Gaya3, di... That was way too emotional...

But loved the changed Shagun.
And the last dialogue "I am so much in love... With her." Too good di...


Thank you so much dear... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
one wrong move


Shagun pov

today I am sitting In court. I am shagun Raman bhalla. soon to be ex shagun raman bhalla. yes today we will sign divorce papers and I will be shagun arora only. today I will loose last possession of this man his name. my husband raman bhalla who loved me like mad. no one ever love me like that and I know no one will be love me like him. it's said if you have everything with you, you started to get them taken for granted. that's what I have one. my one wrong move has change everything for me my life raman life our life and our kids adi and ruhi life sigh I wish I never ever did that mistake. today we could have been most happiest family instead of broken family. my one wrong move has changed happiness into sadness that sadness which can never ever be redeemed and rectified. it's only me who is responsible no one else and because of me my husband and my kids and my family are suffering. today I am all alone no one is with me not even my brother specially that person because of whom I took that wrong move ashok Khanna

past
me my brother and my mother we were a small family we were middle class family anf my father died when we were kids. my mother struggle alot and we completed our education. my only aim is to become a rich and wealthy because I don't want to suffer anymore financially just like mother. I have already show middle class life but not anymore.
Raman was also in my college. we were in same class. he loved me from first time he show me in college but he never had guts to tell me because he was scare of my rejection though I had idea about his love because my friend used to teased me about him but I always ignore them. I was among those good looking girl but raman was with specs and totally champu. my dream man should be champ not champu. he was not handsome guy but ordinary looking but still something was there that was attracting me towards him but I always ignore that.
I think raman was in my destiny only one day pummy aunty who is good friend of my mother who brought rishta for me. I was denying but my mother force me and finally I have to give up and ready to meet a guy and I was shocked to see that he is none other than raman bhalla. I want to denied but his talk and gesture force me to say yes. I couldn't deny his innocent eyes I still remember which was hidden behind those specs but still his eyes words were understandable for me.
finally champ ke badle champu hi mil gaya. Lekin yeh champu bada hi pyara tha jispe bas pyar hi aata hain
after graduation we both get married. he was not only my husband but my friend and saviour too. he loved me so much I forgot about my that becoming rich dream and his family also love me like their daughter and all freedom was there. Raman was from middle class family but he had lack of finance but happiness was there unlimited. After one year of our marriage we have Most handsome son whose name is aditya. Raman had gone mad after his birth and like I gave him whole world he was getting that much happy and I was happy to seeing him happy. After adi birth we had angle daughter ruhi finally our family was complete.
Everything was going smoothly and happily Untill that day when I met raman new boss ashok Khanna first time. he fall for me in first sight but I didn't notice that. he bumped with me many time though it was intentionally from his side. slowly slowly we became friends. he started to show me a dream of richness, luxurious life car bungalow jewellery. after this my those dream to become rich arise again and my love towards raman my kids and family replace by greed and selfishness. I started to lied raman and met ashok secretly and had physical relationship too. I fought with raman and family. my kids used to get scare but I didn't notice and have heed to that.
one day raman came to know this. he was heart broken and I left him and my kids after that everything is changed.

it says na karma will return you that what you give others same happend with me. I cheated raman and hurted him my kids and family. Ashok did same with me he cheated me for another girl and left me. I was back to my mother house. at that time I realised I was so wrong and did wrong with raman but it was too late redeemed that mistake. I was crying whole night and missing my husband and kids

present

court bell brought me back to present. it's time to say good bye to raman and my kids nope his kids Adi and ruhi. Adi look like raman handsome. Raman is no more champu but he is champ. there is no specs anymore and his eyes are visible which has nothing but hurt and pain due to me. I am ashamed of my self. ruhi resemble me and she has mole just like me but I hope They both are like his father good hearted unlike me cheater and greedy who destroy her own life.

it's time to sign divorce paper. today I lost raman totally. it was his name which was with me that also I lost. I wish I can say to raman that I am sorry for whatever I did. I wish I hugged my kids. I am dying to heard mom from them. I wish my family accept. I wish I can go back to past and changed my one wrong move I wish I wish I can only wish which is going to be unfulfilled for forever. I know raman will accept me but I don't want to go back because I deserve punishment not apology. because of me raman is changed man who lost trust in love and I wish he will get someone who will teach him to love again and trust again and my kids will also get love of mother. because of me They didn't get that and it's only raman who was there with them.

I am going far away from them for forever and I wish they will get there deserving happiness and I turned my back towards raman and left with tears in my eyes.

One wrong move can change everything
For collecting stone I lost diamond
I will miss you ramsn adi ruhi I hope you all will never miss me
I pray I will be tthat chapter of yours life which never be re open
Today i pray there will be no shagun because of whom any raman suffered

Edited by ...EhSaas... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gaya you are awesome and you try something new all the time. That was I love your far view.this Os is awesome way to explain Shagun feeling when she made a mistake and she also except it and try to rectified her mistake and made it up and move on. And one thing in life she had lost everything by her own deed and now cause of Ishu she got second chance and she try to do her best. Once the glass broke we will never join it in the same way it was made she will get her kids back but for Raman the last line you said it all he will never be back to love her agian cause all his love and soul only belong to Ishita. Beautiful story dear,thank you for the Pm to have chance to read your story .Have agreat weekend dear.👍🏼👍🏼

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