ShaRam OS Thread: OS- Her Hidden Sacrifice by jasminerahul on pg-20

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-Vishakha-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx
Please continue soon
Can't wait to read more

Thanks 😊

Updated above 😊
Hope u like it 😊

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Phoenix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: -MS-
Sorry I couldn't write the OS I promised as I was really busy for last one week.
I'll try to write it in 2-3 days but no promises. 😆

No worries. Take ur time. 😊

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Phoenix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

TS- Payback (Part-2) is posted above by -vishakha-
Enjoy...😊

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Jasmine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

shagun saved ishira n disappeared.coincidence is that ishra's daughter shikha was saved by shagun.loved d 25 yrs leap.shagin met adi ruhi after a long time n breathed last.shikha named her daughter shagun.so obviously shagun is always a part of their life.liked the last sentence.very touchy.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago

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Phoenix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Nice ending vishakha. Do write more. 😊

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Colt.Pixy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: ankitasen
I doubt you'll find any writer here.😆

To be honest, writing a piece on ShaRam is a daunting task. That's why there's hardly any story written based on them in this forum. Plus the new time slot has made Shagun ,as you said, nothing but a scheming vamp, so general readers won't be attracted per se. And, that's where the challenge lies for a writer. That also answers why on the other hand we have reasonable amount of works on IshBu or why Subbu gets the priority in forum members' writing. Many of us won't agree but writers here kinda obsessed with Subbu too. 😆

Another question will arise about ShaRam's love story because I've read tons of analyses, OS/SSes where it's clearly stated that Shagun never ever loved Raman and even Raman's love towards Shagun wasn't love in the first place. 😲 They love to term it as an "attraction" or "physical attraction" to be precise. 😆 A man who had taken 6 long years to get over the woman yet his love is being demeaned by equating with mere infatuation! He's the same man who changed himself forever because of the betrayal he got in return at the end. This is the purest form of love as anyone can get and the woman who evoked such purest of emotions inside him had to love him, reciprocate his love at a certain point of their life, specially considering the fact that they were married and had to live with each other 24/7.

In short, one has to keep so many things in mind before starting his/her daunting adventure on ShaRam. 😆 So...it will never be easy. 😳

thousand claps for this analysis. din know about this post but MS ' s mention brought my attention. raman's love was pure love that s why he still wanted to save his marriage n din give divorce till 6 years despite he was aware of his wife was in relation with his boss. and yo x factor does not give idea to everyone to write about 😉

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ek-paheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

@Gay3sb: Lovely OS. It was awesome reading how you penned down Shagun's thought and Ishita's place in Raman's life.

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ek-paheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Phoenix-
But there is hardly any OS written on ShaRam, what is surprising that forum writers have written OSes on IshBu and more often than not, Subbu takes a major side role in most of the fictions. But Shagun is mostly reduced to scheming vamp that the TRP slot advertises in those fan fics, not the original grey Shagun. That's kinda weird considering the fact that Shagun is Raman's first wife and no matter what will always be the biological mother of his two beautiful kids.

Well I agree on that. Very few have dared to write something on Sharam or should I say Shagun. Subbu is everyone's favorite for experimentation but Shagun was rarely used and most of the times was used as a scheming vamp only.

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Jasmine

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Her hidden sacrifice

First I thought Shagun was just a cameo just in flash backs.Because i thought Raman was a widower and Shagun was his diceased wife.First I thought of writing an OS on this thought ie Raman as a widower and Shagun not alive.Then I thought... what if Shagun is alive?I decided to pen down on this idea.

I am not a ShaRam fan.But since I love Anita I am interested in Shagun.So I liked the idea of ShaRam OS collection.

Her hidden sacrifice

Raman and Ishita's wedding anniversary party was going on.Raman and Ishita were happy with their children Adi and Ruhi.They were watched by an uninvited guest Shagun,Raman's ex-wife.

Flash back...

Raman pleaded before Shagun:Shagun,please don't leave me.
Shagun:Then what do you expect?To live with a poor man like you?I am going to live my dream life with Ashok.
R:You can leave me as I have nothing luxurious to offer.But how can you leave your own children?
S:Because these kids are yours and they will remind me of you when I lead a happy life with Ashok.

She left the place arrogantly leaving Raman shattered.
Raman changed into a ruthless man who disbelieved in love.But the unexpected entry of Ishita made him believe in love again.Ishita became the best mother for his children Adi and Ruhi.
When Raman hated Shagun for decieiving him no one knew the mysterious Shagun's reality.

Flash back...

The doctor:Mrs.Shagun Bhalla,you are suffering from cancer.
Shagun was shattered.Raman and children came into her mind.Finally she decided to leave Raman and children pretending to be in love with Ashok.She dropped her tears down.

Shagun's POV:
I have always loved ypu Raman.I lied to you that I am going with Ashok for a luxurious life.But the truth is that my luxury is you Raman.But i am not lucky enough to be with you.I don't want to be a burden on you and I don't want my kids to cry over their mother's sickness.So i Have to leave you all.
Shagun hid her tears and acted like a vamp before them.

Shagun was under treatment for a long time.Surprisingly she got cured and came back to be with her Raman and children.But what she saw was painful beyond a limit.Her raman with another woman and her kids calling her 'Maa'.

Raman:I owe my happiness to my ex-wife Shagun.
Shagun was surprised.She started developing hopes.
She thought:Raman still loves me?
Raman:If Shagun had not left me I would not have been having such a beautiful life with Ishita.
Raman held Ishita closer leaving her blush.

Shagun was shattered realizing that she lost her family forever.She left the Bhalla house tearfully.
"Why should I cry?Years back I left my family hoping for this only.After making Raman hate me how foolish am I to think that Raman and children will still wait for me! I am responsible for this condition.

If I had known that I would be cured I would not have left you all".
Shagun cried helplessly not being able to reveal the truth.

Is this the end of Shagun's miserable life or will she meet an ideal man like Manoj for herself?