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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello all u beautiful people 😳
Hear goes the new update

Not proof read plz ignore mistakes 😉

Warning - read at ur own risk


Part 10
After mihirs phone convo every thing went normally and as the day came to an end every one returned to there home

At night in ishita s room

Ishu had freshly showered and was wrapped in her pink fluffy towel applying her lotion and that's when the lights suddenly went off

Ishu : lights ko kya ho Gaya

( what happend to the lights )

And she took out a candle from her wardrobe and lit it up the room was only lit by the faint light of the candle and the cool breeze was blowing from the open window as ishu hugged herself feeling cool

That's when she felt a strong pair of hands back hugging her and she instantly identified who it was and smiled a dreamy smile resting her head on his hard muscular chest

Man : some one is looking really hot

Ishu : and some one is really naughty

And she chucked turning in his arms to look at him

Man : abb kya kare agar koi biwi apne pati ko itna tadpayegi tho bechara kya kare

( now what to do if a wife troubles the husband this much what can hi do )

Ishu : aur biwi ki kya galathi jab ki sare fasath ki jad tho uska pati hai

( and what is the wife's mistake when the whole situation is created by the husband )

Saying so she wrapped her arms around his neck

Man : abb jan logi kya

( will u kill me )

Ishu : Raman !!!!! Shut up fir se ayes bola na ...
( if u tell like that again na ...)

( note : breath all my dear readers it is Raman only r u confused why and how let's see )

Man ( Raman ) : sry mrs bhalla agli bar I ayse bilkul Nahi hoga

Said Raman cutting her and kissed her

( sry mrs bhalla I promise this won't happen again )

Ishu : braking the kiss. App andar kaise aye

( how did u get in )

Raman : jaan if I can enter ur heart without ur permission this is after all just a house

Said Raman as he winked at her

That is when the cool breeze stuck them again and ishu shivered a bit Raman immediately asked her to go change but obviously in his unique style

Raman : mrs bhalla I already accepted ur too hot u don't need to prove that to me go get changed or u will catch cold unless and until u want me to warm u up in a different way

Saying so he started coming close to her

Ishu :( shy ) kya Raman Kuch bhi !!!! She was blushing badly as she ran towards the bathroom to get changed

( what Raman anything !!!!)

It was 5 min as ishu changed and ishu and Raman were having a hot cup of coffee and their was a knock on the door

Ishu went to open the door and smiled and said

Ishu : Raman look who is hear miss shagun

Shagun entred in smiling and hugged Raman

Shagun : so what is my lover doing with u ishu

Ishu : ur lover last I remember is u were helping me to teach him a lesson

Shagun : well that is because I love him right Raman

Raman : well I have a memory loss problem I think

And the three of them burst out laughing

Ishu ( dramatically) : mihir I really need ur help

Shagun ( more dramatically ) : guru I really love Raman and want him at any cost

And the two of them again burst out laughing

Raman : stop u drama queens pure mohale ko jagana hai kya

( do u want to wake up all the neighbors )

Shagun : o yah right we r being recorded by hidden cameras na ishu

Ishu : ooo yah how could u be co careless Raman ( with fake anger )

Raman : ok fine now stop u both. He said pulling ishu in his embarrass

Shagun : people I am still present hear remember

Ishu : but we r legally married u remember

Shagun : but I don't know that right

And again their was a laughing session

Shagun : ( controlling her laugh ) oh my god now my tummy hurts but guys u people na are such such ,... Evil

Ishu and Raman : we prefer smart.

Shagun : what an idea u people were so right to play this whole drama I was so not convinced at the start but when Raman got his memory back it was a sure short

Ishu : that the plan had to be after all it is planed by none other than my ravan Kumar

Raman : ok people now enough of joke shagun us ka kya hua kya vo plan work kiya

( what happend to him did the plan work )

Shagun : thumare andaza bilkul sahi tha guru aa rahai hai india 3 din mai use bharosa ho Gaya hai ki thum sach mai Kuch yaad Nahi

( ur guess was right guru is coming to India in 2 days he now be leaves that u really don't remember any thing )

Raman : aur yahi tho hum chahtey they abb ayega khani mai twist

( and that is what we wanted now comes the twist in tail )

Raman to ishu : jaan Mihika kab tak aa rahi hai

( when is Mihika coming )

Ishu : she will be hear tomorrow but vo mihir ka sach jan kar bhoth dukhi hai

( but she is very upset after knowing mihirs truth )

Shagun : vo tho hogi hi na I never thought that mihir will do this with Raman

( that she will be na )

Raman : time sab ko badal deta hai shagun mihir bi badal gaya hai aur phir badlega but is bad acha ke liye

( time changes every thing shagun mihir also changed but now he will change again but this time for good )

After some time

Shagun : Raman it's quite late I think u should go now

Ishu : but what if mihir is awake

Raman: don't worry I put some sleeping pills in his drink and also switched the cameras to a video loop so nothing is been recorded we r safe don't worry jaan

Ok then let's leave tomorrow is a big day we will have to save all our energy and complete our plan before guru lands in india mihir should be on our side we just have 48 hours so pull up ur socks

Shagun and ishu nodded and shagun left handing over a pen drive to Raman and Raman turned to ishu

Ishu : math Javo na ( with a pound )

( don't go na )

Raman : a few more days jaan i promise

With that he kissed her again and left saying good bye

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Well that is all for now r u all confused now gaya3 will clear ur confusion all the best gaya3

Asha

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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
________
Well...
Sorry for being so late (as always 😆 )
This was an EXPECTED TWIST 😈
If not you I would have done the same 🤣
But wait...I'm not that cool reading it 🤔
IshRa marriage... 😲
*SHOCK*
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
And u gave the most dramatic twist ever...so u both fighting like aa dekhe zara thing haan...omg twist pe twist...


But I confess I love this twist most...I loved smart trio then being fool...so cute thoda sa romance thoda sa pyar and I love teasing session

Asha what about title MDG since ab kaun kiski dream girl h 😆

Awww ...I am loving ur game...full entertainment
Chalo gaya get on ur work...

I missed u asha whole day... 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

And u gave the most dramatic twist ever...so u both fighting like aa dekhe zara thing haan...omg twist pe twist...


But I confess I love this twist most...I loved smart trio then being fool...so cute thoda sa romance thoda sa pyar and I love teasing session

Asha what about title MDG since ab kaun kiski dream girl h 😆

Awww ...I am loving ur game...full entertainment
Chalo gaya get on ur work...

I missed u asha whole day... 🤗


Awww I miss u too 😳 and I love to read all ur comments 😉 is ke liye I am redy to play aa dhekne Zara also 😆 par abb sabse zayada parishan gaya3 hogi as I left the difficult part for her 😆

But never less they say na don't underestimate the power of a common gaya3 😉😆

After all she is our twist queen 😉

Kis ki dream girl kon thum guess karo 😉 but remember jo guess karogi us ka ulta hoga 😆
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeh kya tha?????? Omg mera Sar ghoom raha hein aap log kaise kaise twists dalte ho Ek se badkar Ek ho sach mein log pagal hojayenge Raman Ishita and Shagun are in one team???? Yeh sab kya ho raha hein???? Ab twist ki rani aage kya likegi yeh to ham soch bhi nahi sakte anyways thanks to both of u for d wonderful story and deadly twists
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri1091

Yeh kya tha?????? Omg mera Sar ghoom raha hein aap log kaise kaise twists dalte ho Ek se badkar Ek ho sach mein log pagal hojayenge Raman Ishita and Shagun are in one team???? Yeh sab kya ho raha hein???? Ab twist ki rani aage kya likegi yeh to ham soch bhi nahi sakte anyways thanks to both of u for d wonderful story and deadly twists


Ur most welcome abb twist ki rani phele is twist se bhar. Niklegi aur unres karegi thab tho naya twist likhegi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMFG
yeh kya naya twist hai...
Asha u r suprb yeh kaise sochi..
i dint even think about it like this..
ishu n raamn married ...
and shogun on our side!!!!
suprb buddy...
TAKE A BIG BOW AND A HUGGIE FROM MY SIDE!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

OMFG

yeh kya naya twist hai...
Asha u r suprb yeh kaise sochi..😉
i dint even think about it like this..
ishu n raamn married ...
and shogun on our side!!!!
suprb buddy...
TAKE A BIG BOW AND A HUGGIE FROM MY SIDE!!!


I take the hug 😉 bow ke exchange mai tere ts ka update milegi kya 😉😆

Aur mai kaise Sochogi 😆 with my brain obviously 😆

Silly girl now u said that shagun is on our side so abb gaya3 amma ka evil mind activate ho jayega 😉


Red alert 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu



Awww I miss u too😳and I love to read all ur comments😉is ke liye I am redy to play aa dhekne Zara also😆par abb sabse zayada parishan gaya3 hogi as I left the difficult part for her😆

But never less they say na don't underestimate the power of a common gaya3😉😆

After all she is our twist queen😉

Kis ki dream girl kon thum guess karo😉but remember jo guess karogi us ka ulta hoga😆


I luv u re...I know u bring all romance and even sent Raman back,.,, so gaya cant write romance waise bhi 24 ghante h...
Omg...u are too smart...I never underestimate power of Gaya3 but I am so want to know what she is thinking...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--


I luv u re...I know u bring all romance and even sent Raman back,.,, so gaya cant write romance waise bhi 24 ghante h...
Omg...u are too smart...I never underestimate power of Gaya3 but I am so want to know what she is thinking...


Tho kise psychologist ko call kar ask her to hypnotize gaya3 and enter in her mind 😆

So u understood y I sent him back see if I don't gay3 amma will write only romance in next part and then again I will be stuck 😆 with the difficult bit 😉

So prevention is better than cure na 😆

And ya I love u more 😳
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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