IshRa FF : ||Tum Dena Sath Mera||(chap 17/pg 132) 17th OCT Th #1 - Page 31

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Happy friendship day Diya dear 😊 . Next update plzz
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Okay guys, back with update.. May be you'll find it small as I'm little busy nowadays & that's why didn't get time to write.. Now enjoy !!


Chapter 8


After finishing his breakfast, Raman goes back to Bhalla house where Mrs. Bhalla stopped him "Raman, puttar itni subha subha tu kaha se araha hai??"


(Mrs. Bhalla : Raman, from where you are coming in early morning?? )


"Woh.. Maa.. Mein.." He stammers when Rinki & Simmi arrives there, Rinki hears their conversation "Arey bhai, aap agaye.. Kitne time laga diya!! Mera ice cream kaha hai??" And she winks at Raman without knowing to Mrs. Bhalla.


( Raman : I.. I was..

Rinki : Bhai, you back.. You took a long time, where's my ice cream..)


"Haan.. Woh stall bandh hai.. Baad mein le ata hoon!!" He says & walks in his room in a hurry, Rinki folloes her to avoid Mrs. Bhalla.


(Raman : Yes, stall is closed now.. I'll bring it later..)


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[P

Three weeks later, on another Sunday, Raman wakes up to hear Ishita praying. After her prayers are over she comes to him & puts tikka for him & like the last weeks he puts sindoor on her.


"Aap uth gaye ho toh phir puja ke liye kyu nhi aye??" Ishita asks him.


(Ishita : When you are up then why aren't you coming for the puja?)


Raman shrugs. "Meine iss bare mein kabhi socha nhi.."


(Raman : I never thought about it.)


"Ab aage se hum ek sath puja karenge.. Theek hai??"


(Ishita : Next time onwards, we will do it together. Okay?)


"Okay.." He kisses on her cheek & she blushes. He sighs, he has been kissing her for some time now but she never kissed him back..


"Jaiye fresh hokar aaiye.."

(Ishita : Go freshen up and come.)


"Kyu??"


(Raman : Why?)


"Naste ke liye.." Ishita reminds him. Every Sunday, they had breakfast together..


(Ishita : To have breakfast.. )



"Tum chahti ho hum ek sath nasta kare??"


(Raman: You want us to have breakfast together?)


"Kyu? Kya hua?" Ishita asks confused hearing his strange question.


(Ishita : Why? What happen?)


"Agar tum mujhe kiss karti ho toh phir mein nasta karunga yaha.."


(Raman : If you kiss me then I'll have breakfast here.)


Ishita looks up at him in wide eyed shock. Seeing him cheekily grinning at her she tells him, "Phir apne ghar par ja ke kijiye.."


(Ishita :Then you have from your house.)


"Tum nhi chahti mein yaha tumhare sath breakdast karu??" Raman asks shocked.


(Raman : You don't want me to eat with you?)[/B


"Chahti hoon.." Ishita shyly tells him.


[B](Ishita : I do..)


"Par tum mujhe kiss karna nhi chahti.." Raman says in a sad voice..


(Raman : But you don't want to kiss me.)


"Nhi.." Ishita says in a panic. "Nhi... Mera matlab..."


(Ishita : No.. No.. I mean..)


"Nhi, Ishita.. Mein samajhta hoon.. Tum mujhse shadi nhi karna chahti thi.. Mujhe yeh expect nhi karna chahiye tha ki tum mujhe itni jaldi maan logi.."


(Ishita : No, Ishita... I can understand. You never wanted to marry me... I just shouldn't have expected you to accept me so fast.)


"Nhi Raman, aisa nhi hai.." Ishita tells him that he was hurt because of her..


(Ishita : No, Raman... Nothing like that.)


"It's okay, Ishita. Mein baad mein milta hoon.." Raman says & starts to get up from the bed.


(Raman : I'll see you later.)


"Raman, maat jaiye.. Aisa nhi hai ki apko kiss nhi karna chahti.."


(Ishita : Raman, don't go... it is not that I don't want to kiss..)


"Mein abhi tumse koi baat nhi karna chahta, Ishuta. Baad mein milta hoon ya yehi theek hoga ki aaj hum na mile.. Mein tumse kal milta hoon.." Raman says looking down..


(Raman : I don't want to talk to you now, Ishita. I'll just see you later... or maybe it is best that we don't see each other today. I'll see you tomorrow.)


"RAMAN!!" Ishita says holding his hand & then quickly kisses him on his cheek.


"Ab apko yaakeen ho gaya mein apko kiss karna pasand karti hoon.." Ishita asks him with teary eyes..


(Ishita : Now you believe that I like to kiss you?)


"Ab tum yakeen karo ki mujhe pata hai kaise baat manwate hai.."


(Raman : Now you believe that I know which all buttons to press?)


Ishit looks at him in shock & then she gasps in shock. "Raman!!" She scolds as she hits him on his chest & he bursts out laughing.


"Apko pata bhi hai apko dukhi dekh kar mera haal kya tha.." Ishita asks him sniffing..


(Ishita : Did you know that my heart stopped beating seeing you upset?)


"Sorry, Ishita.." Raman says full of regret & pulls her for a hug..


"Mein nasta banati hoon, aap fresh hokar aao.."


(Ishuta : I'll go make breakfast. You go freshen up and come.)


"Ab shayad mujhe mere kapre yaha rakhna chahiye.."


(Raman : Maybe I should keep some clothes here.)


Ishita happily smiles at him hearing that.


"Ishita..."


"Hmm?" she turns to him smiling.


"Mein yeh kabhi nhi bhoolunga!!"


(Raman : I'll never forget it.)


"Kya?" Ishita asks curiously.


(Ishita : What?


Imitating Ishita full on he says, "Yehi.. Ab apko yakeen ho gaya mujhe apko kiss karna pasand hai.."


(Raman : That.. Now you believe that I like to kiss you?)


Ishita gasps in shock & seeing him grinning at her she runs away blushing.


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Raman walks into his house to find Neelu dusting.. Neelu is always cleaning or arranging things..


"Good morning, bhaiya."


"Morning, Neelu.."


"Aap aise hi mandir gaye the?" Neelu asks confused seeing Raman in his casual pant and shirt.


(Neelu : You went to mandir like that?)


"Mandir?" Ramab asks confused then remembering his tikka he closes his eyes irritated at his blunder.


"Ah... Meine dekha.." Neelu says with a cheeky smile.


(Neelu : I see..)


Raman looks at him suspiciously, "Kya hai??"


(Raman : What is it?)


"Kuch nhi.." Neelu says grinning cheekily.


(Neelu : Nothing..)


Raman suspiciously walks to Neelu staring her in the eye. "Aise hans kyu rahi ho?"


(Raman : Why are you smiling?)


"Kaha? Nhi bhai." Neelu says contrite.


(Neelu : Where?? No bhai.)


"Tu bolegi ya phir naukri se nikalu tujhe.." Raman asks all the while his heart slamming against his chest, Neelu knew about Ishua and him.


(Raman : Will you tell me or I'll fire you from your job.)


Neelu asks him in a whisper "Woh aap ki patni hai na bhaiya??"


(Neelu : She's your wife.. Isn't she?)


Raman felt the ground slipping from under his feet. "Tujhe kaise pata chala??"


(Ramab : How did you find out?)


"Meine apko kahi baar raat ko uss flat e jate hue dekha tha or phir ekbar Rinki di ko unhe bhabhi kehte hue suna.."

(Neelu : I have seen you go into the flat couple of times at night & then I once overhead Rinki di calling her bhabhi.)


Raman keeps looking at her wondering what to do & Neelu had seen him? He had made sure everyone had slept but then he had always only checked on his family not the servants.


"Mein apko dhoka nhi dungi bhaiya.. Zaroor koi karan toh hai jis liye aap apne shadi ko chupa rahe ho. Mein apke liye bohot khush hoon!! Bhabhi bohot achhi hai.." Neelu tells him & walks off..


(Neelu : I won't betray you, bhaiya. You might have some reasons to hide your marriage. I am happy for you, bhabhi is very nice.)


*****************


"Aapko lagta hai woh kisi se kuch kahegi??" Ishita asks Raman over breakfast, they both were picking on the food.


(Ishita : Do you think she'll tell any one?)


"Nhi.." Raman tells her..


(Raman : No..)


"Aap dukhi ho??"


(Ishita : Are you upset?)


"Mujhe aur thoda sambhal kar rehna chahiye tha.." Raman tells her as he leans back on the chair..


(Raman : I should have been more careful..)


Ishit holds his hand, Raman tells her sighing "Leave it... Ab koi fayda nhi hai rone se.."


(Raman : There is no use crying over this matter.)


"Kya.. Aap yaha aana bandh kar doge??" Ishita asks him worried.


(Ishita : Will you... stop coming here?)


Raman looks at her face & seeing her worried he tells her, "Mein yaha naste ke liye bhi nhi araha tha.."


(Raman : I almost didn't come for breakfast.)


Ishita looks down at her plate and says in a whisper, "Agar apko lagta hai.. Yaha aana khatre se khali nhi hai.. Toh.." Then gulping she says "Mein samajhti hoon.."


(Ishita : If you feel... that... it is not safe... to come here... anymore ... I will understand..)[P]
[P]Seeing her almost in tears, Raman pushes his plate away and gets up from the table.


"Raman?"


"Mein tumse baad mein baat karta hoon, Ishita.." Raman tells her as he angrily ran his hand through his hair.


(Raman : I'll talk with you later, Ishita..)


"Kya hua?" Ishita asks shocked seeing the change in him.. First time she was seeing him angry and he looked downright furious, it was scary..


(Ishita : What happen??)


"Baad mein milta hoon!!" Saying that he just walks out and Ishita runs behind him calling his name but he ignores her.. She stood there watching him walk back into his house.. She stood there hoping he would come back & then she saw him walking out of the house.. She starts relaxing seeing him back.. He looks at her & then simply walks down, she follows him but he walks towards his car & getting in he drives off. Ishita comes back to her flat & closes the door & sitting on the floor she bursts into tears..


(Raman : I'll see you later..)


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How's this chotu sa update?? Don't forget to comment..

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Posted: 10 years ago
choo chweet. Puppy Ki waje se aur bhi sweet hogayi update. Dheere dheere ek ek ko patha chal raha hai ishra ke baare mein Rinki, simmi ab neelu. Waise Raman ko kya hua achaanak chala gaya ishu KO chodh kar. Hope sab teek Ho. Waiting for next part, update ASAP.
Edited by AttitudeQueen13 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13

Happy friendship day Diya dear 😊 . Next update plzz

Same to you dear...
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Why is raman angry on ishu? Hope their misunderstanding clear fast
Amazing update n Happy friendship day to u 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...

lovely ishra...

i hop raman anger gets cool soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..
raman knows which button to use ..wow she kissed him..

neelu pakad liya and ask raman..ishu is his wife?
i think raman feeling guilty,thats y he left ishu flat..
Continue soon.

Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Happy friendship day dear
Lovely update
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Happy friendship day dear. Beautiful update we got first kiss from Ishu for Raman 😳he know where to push the button to make it work. And now Neelu also know about them I don't worry cause she will help them out easily to meet each other. He almost get caught with his mom😃 what going on at the end Raman upset where did he go hope he go and set all arrangements for his marriage with the lowyer.will wait for next update till you free. Have awonderful start for new week dear.🤗🤗
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nice update
kiss scene was too good
hope raman return soon...
please update jaldi
happy friendship day

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