IshRa Separation OS 15/06/2015

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Di aap forum mein kya kar rahe ho 😲 you should be there on yhm sets in there office... 😉😆 Are I mean seriously the way you write the sequence is perfect

what a fantastic twist and turns in the story

specifically the way you divided it 10 years after and then flashback then again the leap part and it turning into dream... and interesting part after dream when raman ishita goes to clinic... very well described the medications if not by diet then by injections or through saline ... and severe anemia mein blood transfusion is needed you are right... but ishita being doctor had stomach TB now they were about to show cancer but anemic jyada nahi hogaya TRP ke liye doctor ko itna bimaar rakha then patients kon dekhega was just kidding

Anyways coming back to the story... loved the entire story

was really upset due to this leap news and was very upset that they may show the leap soon but as we can see they are not getting into leap soon as romi's matter is yet to be resolved simmi is yet to start her career and ishita's report may be have replaced by other 😆 as in hospitals they are meant to change reports of bhalla clan and most important two new love stories are pending boss

mihika and abhishek is what I can understand but what are they trying to show by adi's behaviour... as ishita mentioned he is not yet a teenager too then why are these hormonal loocha is happening 🤣 and this new investor of raman is very irritating his wife seems cool and ashok toh hai he ... so in short there are many things for twists so bottom line is no more leap in yhm😆

according to some tweets it seems leap is postponed for now and ishra will be seen consummate their marriage after like 500 episode 😆

sorry for distracting the topic

I just loved this separation os

and now waiting for other updates as well

and if possible will you write os on adi and ishita's changing relationship

Edited by Isha_Pathare - 10 years ago

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Maya

@mayasun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare
Di aap forum mein kya kar rahe ho 😲 you should be there on yhm sets in there office... 😉😆 Are I mean seriously the way you write the sequence is perfect
what a fantastic twist and turns in the story
specifically the way you divided it 10 years after and then flashback then again the leap part and it turning into dream... and interesting part after dream when raman ishita goes to clinic... very well described the medications if not by diet then by injections or through saline ... and severe anemia mein blood transfusion is needed you are right... but ishita being doctor had stomach TB now they were about to show cancer but anemic jyada nahi hogaya TRP ke liye doctor ko itna bimaar rakha then patients kon dekhega was just kidding
Anyways coming back to the story... loved the entire story
was really upset due to this leap news and was very upset that they may show the leap soon but as we can see they are not getting into leap soon as romi's matter is yet to be resolved simmi is yet to start her career and ishita's report may be have replaced by other 😆 as in hospitals they are meant to change reports of bhalla clan and most important two new love stories are pending boss
mihika and abhishek is what I can understand but what are they trying to show by adi's behaviour... as ishita mentioned he is not yet a teenager too then why are these hormonal loocha is happening 🤣 and this new investor of raman is very irritating his wife seems cool and ashok toh hai he ... so in short there are many things for twists so bottom line is no more leap in yhm😆
according to some tweets it seems leap is postponed for now and ishra will be seen consummate their marriage after like 500 episode 😆
sorry for distracting the topic
I just loved this separation os
and now waiting for other updates as well
and if possible will you write os on adi and ishita's changing relationship

Hi Isha,

Thanks for the comments. I still have two pending stories which are already overdue to be posted if finish one of them I will try to write one of Adi and Ishita changing relationship.

I am not sure whether they have given upon leap but for some scene looks like they are putting a foundation of leap.

I think as of now Mr. Jahkkar is the new villain in YHM

Right now I am enjoying this teenage parenting track as it is relateable because no in right or wrong at the same time it is all in shades of grey generally how life is.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Wonderful take of the situation. Loved the way you have penned the OS. 👏

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Maya

@mayasun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Wonderful take of the situation. Loved the way you have penned the OS. 👏

Hi Jazzy, Thanks

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Maya

@mayasun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Hafs
Nice

Hi Hafsa, Thanks

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Yh I know Maya its one shot. I'm asking u if u want to write any seperation OS with different concept then u can carry on. 😊. Btw u juz call me #GREE 😊 if u don't hav any problem den.

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Maya

@mayasun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Rkbgree
Yh I know Maya its one shot. I'm asking u if u want to write any seperation OS with different concept then u can carry on. 😊. Btw u juz call me #GREE 😊 if u don't hav any problem den.

Hi Gree,

I am not a fan of sad things but the leap, Ishbu and ShaRam was bothering me so much so I wrote on os based on that but if I do write one in the future I will definitely PM you about that.