DESIRE III 26/9/18 - UPDATED ON WATTPAD

Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
brilliant update..very nice...👏

Originally posted by: 9900
Awesome update 😊 Hope raman and ishu will start living together soon😃

Originally posted by: florine_20
Fabulous update. I guess raman is gonna change the mohurat for sure. after all he is the RKB

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni
Nice updt thnks fr pm

Thank you so much 😃

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Aarohi Talegoankar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

badhaai ho vee di. abhi toh love story sirf shuru hi hui hai aur hum 3rd thread par aa gaye. i am so happy for desires... I wish ki desires jaldi se 4th thread par bhi pohoch jaae.

now back to update. aap sab na seriously Raman ke dushman ho. jisko dekho bechaare ke peeche hi pad jata hai. poor puttar. 3 months kuch zyada nahi ho gaya? but kehte hai na intazaar ka apna maza hoga hai so I am waiting ki aap iahra ka 3 months ka wait aur unja romance kaise plan karti ho.

waiting for next part

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: aarohi26
badhaai ho vee di. abhi toh love story sirf shuru hi hui hai aur hum 3rd thread par aa gaye. i am so happy for desires... I wish ki desires jaldi se 4th thread par bhi pohoch jaae.

now back to update. aap sab na seriously Raman ke dushman ho. jisko dekho bechaare ke peeche hi pad jata hai. poor puttar. 3 months kuch zyada nahi ho gaya? but kehte hai na intazaar ka apna maza hoga hai so I am waiting ki aap iahra ka 3 months ka wait aur unja romance kaise plan karti ho.

waiting for next part

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Thank you Aarohi. But I love Raman, mein uski dushman nahi 😆 Puttar will get biwi soon, don't worry.

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Deep

@rk654

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

very beautiful and awesomely written update...

congratsss for new thread👏

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

did i congratulate u for ur new thread????

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awesome update...

Amma...aaiyo karavule... three months... haaye lambi judaai...😕

that accidental touch...gave me goosebumps...

loved loved loved the update... cant wait for the next update...

mrs bhalla is nt creating ruckus?> surprising!!😆

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rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

aww lovely update- loved the song 😃

in a way i completely understand amma's feelings here

hope it all works out - raavan haina 😉

continue soon

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SA1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Veeann

Thanks S ( sorry, I don't know your name) I love your stories btw. Why dj vu??

Thanks Vee. My name is Anju. Don't know why deja vu. Just felt like its happened before.

Eagerly waiting for the next update now.

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beckysharp

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Interesting update Vee. Loving the way the story is progressing.

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-godschild-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Read the last two updates together n loved them.
I loved how the story has moved forward.
Puttar n Biwi are just too adorable 😳
Hope Amma comes around soon 😃

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