DESIRE III 26/9/18 - UPDATED ON WATTPAD - Page 12

Originally posted by: maaloo

Vee.. I sound like a broken record and this has been my comment on every update of yours.. sorry but can't help it.. why oh why aren't the so called creatives half as good as you are?

what a beautiful story you weave my dear.. Amazing, first mihika coming around, now amma coming around.. all beautifully told. Eagerly look forward to your updates..

am thinking may be this series needs to be tweeted to the big bosses.. let them learn how to tell a story..

Originally posted by: JazzyM

congratulations on the new thread.

Great update. loved the part of Raman sensing Ishita's need. wonderfully written. especially the part where Raman stood outside the Iyer's apartment. the connection between 2 souls...well done.

at last Mrs. Iyer seems to understand that the kadoos Ravan Kumar is actually the correct match for her princess...👏

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Brilliant as always Vee! Hoping the three months shrinks to 3 days or less with the visit to the temple tomorrow!!😉

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Great updates Vee and so sorry for being late

As always everyone was so in character and the family, especially the way their parents were written here.

Though Amma is known for her hyper behavior, in a way she is justified in her stance here and its good to read it, the way you have written her - she is more sympathetic and relatable as a character.

Cant wait to see how you take this forward, especially read the marriage festivities which are sure to drive Raman mad 😆

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

awesome

love it

update soon

Originally posted by: nammytat

Raman and ishita's love is really nice to watch...

amazing update...

Originally posted by: softyy

I loved it yaar
the two are just awesome their bonding, their understanding.the concern and love for each other

thanks 4 this superb update

Originally posted by: whitelily

fabulous part

Originally posted by: rutu83

Oh good- amma is rethinking
Adore ishra ❤️

Originally posted by: Veeann

Thank you so much Maaloo. Lol, please I dont need to tell BT how to tell stories they have much wilder imaginations than I do 😆 😆