Ishra ss- tune dil mera toda part 28 on page 147 added - Page 40

Sorry for the late comment yaar

PART 17 a

NEXT MORNING


Ishita walked into the hall only to found Raman and ansh discussing something.She didn't say anything simply just sit in her place.

Ansh-Mom today I have a fancy dress competition like whom I should dress like .

Ishita -I don't know

Ansh face fell hearing her reply .

Raman -but I know

Ansh face sparkle hearing his answer

Ansh-will u come

Ishita -no ansh I don't have time

Raman -ansh don't worry your mom will definitely come

Ishita -please Mr bhalla don't interfare

Ansh -mom u should not tell him like that he is elder naa say sorry

Ansh winked at Raman.

Ishita -whatever

Saying so she walked out slightly smiling.Raman don't miss to notice her smile and feel proud of his small success.

Ansh -mom will come naa

Raman -don't worry I will make sure she come.

In the afternoon at ishita 's office

Receptionist -Mam there was a call from ansh 's school .he has fallen and bleeding and crying heavily.u are called.

Ishita rushed towards his school.when she asked about ansh the poen pointed towards a room .when she entered the room it was an auditorium filled with many people.she was searching for ansh when she spotted Raman.She rushed towards him and asked where is ansh.

Raman pointed towards the stage .she saw her son wearing RAVAN costume and imitating some dialogue told by Raman.she was looking at him in awe as if he was really her chotu ravan Kumar .

Raman remembered simmi had told him once that when ishita would be angry on anything she always calls him ravan Kumar.that why he decided to make him ravan.

Ansh got the first prize and asked his mom to celebrate it.she could not refuse her cute ravan Kumar so she agreed.

They go for dinner in the evening.Ishita ordered Italian for ansh and Chinese for herself.

Ansh -order for dude also

Ishita -I don't know his taste he will order for himself.

Raman felt bad by her rude attitude but he thinks he deserves that only.

He says its ok he will order for himself and ordered hard drink for himself in an hope that she will say something but its his bad luck she is least bothered.

She was feeling terrible that he is drinking empty stomach but she think she don't have a right to interfare in his personal life.

Next morning

Ishita was going to office but Raman stops her

Ishita-now what Mr bhalla why r u bothering me.i am not at all interested in talking to u .i am getting late.

Raman-get a hold on yourself ishita I just want a lift my car broke down .waise bhi hamare raaste ek hai(we have the same path)

Ishita -raaste ek hone se manzilein ek nahi hoti Mr bhalla(same path doesn't mean same destination)


Raman felt very bad everytime she calls him Mr bhalla not Raman.

Ishita -anyways u can take another call

Saying so she walked away and Raman just keep looking her retreating figure.

One week passed like that but nothing was changed between them
One afternoon when Raman brought lunch for her ,she finally asked

Ishita -what u want?

Raman -I didn't understand

Ishita -aapko kya lagta hai mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha aap kya karna chahte hai please stop it just stay away from me and my life(what do u think I don't understand what u r trying to do)

Raman -samajh gayi ho to maan lo meri baat apni zindagi Mein khushiyon ka swagat karo main nahi dekh sakta tumhe til til ke marte hue(if u understand then welcome the happiness in your life I can't see u dying gradually.

Ishita -mar toh main bahut pehle gayi thi ab toh bas saansein le rahi hoon(I was dead long back I am just breathing)

Raman -aisa mat kaho please. I can't deal with it(don't say like this)


Their talk was disturbed by ishita assistant

A-sorry to disturb u mam but there was a call to inform that there is a party tonite and u ,Rahul sir and Mr bhalla is invited.

Ishita. -Rahul is not in the town and I can't attend.kindly refuse politely.

Raman -we will surely go don't do anything.

A-ok sir

She went.

Ishita-why r u bothering me I don't want to go

Raman -please ishita

Ishita-sharp at seven

Raman smiled at her but she didn't smiled back.

In the evening

Raman was waiting for her .he thought she will wear something special but to his surprise she was wearing same white shirt and black pant.she walked towards her car.

Raman -I thought we should go in your car

Before her reply he quickly seated beside her she looked away.

Raman -can I ask u something.

Ishita -hmmm

Raman -why u always wear these kind of colour less clothes.

Ishita (self thought)-after snatching every colour from my life he is asking about my colour less life.

Ishita-we have reached.

Saying so she walked in the venue leaving him behind.

In the party

Mr.khanna -welcome IRB I was waiting for u glad u came.

Ishita -my pleasure

Mr.khanna -oh Mr bhalla welcome to u too u both make a wonderful pair.

Ishita and Raman in union-excuse me

Mr khanna-I mean professionally enjoy the party

The party was in full swing .Ishita was sitting in the farthest corner all alone and Raman was looking into her.

Mr.khanna-hey Mr bhalla I know u sing wonderfully please sing for us

Raman -ok

Everyone claps for him and ishita looked in the source of the voice and found it to be Raman

Haan hasi ban gaye haan nami ban gaye tum mere aasmaan meri zameen ban gaye

Haan hum badalne lage girne sambhalne lage jab se hai jaana tumhe Teri ore chalne lage

Har jagah har ghadi har kahin bangaye maante the khuda aur haan wahin ban gaye


Ishita looked deep into his eyes to understand the meaning of thesong he was singing.they share an intense eye lock but ishita looked away.

Ab jaante hi nahin log tanha mujhe meri nigahon Mein bhi hai dhoondte bas tujhe

Hum the dhoondte jise woh kami ban gaye tum mere ishq Ki sarzameen ban gaye


Haan hasi ban gaye haan nami ban gaye tum mere aasmaan meri zameen ban gaye

Its getting late so that's all for now .now give me many reply and lovely comments so that I get motivated to give u all a quick update tomorrow itself

Originally posted by: nitii

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">how cute..here you go..😆</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">so far so good updates..👏</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">loved the Independent Ishita a lot..it's must have been really hard for her to walk away like that..i truly felt bad for her rey😭😭😭</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i am happy that raman realized his love for ishita..</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i was very disappointed with shagun raman marriage rey..😡😡</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">in two updates shaadi and divorce..wa..wa..kya baat hai👏👏😆</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Bechara raman..searching her for over 4 years😭😭</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">IRB..Ishita Rahul Bajaj..are you kidding me Raman..How-come he forget his own name rey..</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i love Ansh..such a sweet heart..he deserves his parents love..😭😭</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Raman deserves this cold shoulder from ishita..he can't just move on from his guilt so easily..</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">but..he realized his mistake and love for Ishita..</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">so pls bring ishra closer..</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">pls update soon😳</font>

Thanks for ur lovely comment next part is updated enjoy

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Sorry for the late comment yaar

Tis time somewhat i messed up in commenting

And coming to the updates loved father-son duo conversation

Really feeling bad for ishitha yaar she deserves every happiness in the world and really loved the way Raman understanding her plight

Actually one doubt ansh mistakenly called Raman as dad na

It's due his slip of tongue means whether he calls Rahul as dad?

Plz continue soon

Waiting for ur next update and badly want trio scenes

Thanks dear next part is updated enjoy

Super update

Nice update... Chotu Raavan so cute

Nice update..:-)

ravan wala plan acha tha..
Ishita not wear colourful dresses bcoz of raman..
Ishita trying very hard to avoid raman..

Thanks for pm

Lovely update now father and son planning to break Ishu silence. All the plan so far went well love Ansh now he must more attract to Raman may be because he never had anyone close to him before even his mom. I wish he will fiNd out about Ishu not marry to Rahul soon. And try to woo her back. The party part was good too Raman sing for her. Thank you for lovely update very soon Ishu will melt for Raman.will wait for next update dear.🤗

Chhotu ravan kumar nice 1 liked it...

Ishita trying hard to avoid raman..but imposible for her... Indeed sort but very lovely update

nice update
but ishr kab sath main ayenge
n raman ko lagata hai ishita
rahul ki wife hai plz jaldi misunderstanding
clear karo continue soon