Ishra ss- tune dil mera toda part 28 on page 147 added - Page 2

Originally posted by: Shimla532

Good. Interesting write more in one part. Very less u hv written. Continue soon

Thanks for liking appreciation of u all helps me to be motivated to write more try to give longer and early update

Originally posted by: usaonly

Welcome to YHM writing world dear. First start very impressive what is the story behind Ishu in last four year that she walk out of BHALLA mansion did she married him before or just lover so many thing waiting to unfold

please continue dear. Will wait for the update.

Thanks I will update soon it may take time to reveal the past but when it will happen u will think it was worth waiting

PART 2



IN THE EVENING


Ishita entered the banquet hall which was beautifully decorated with every possible flowers and to make it more beautiful simmi was sitting in the centre with her would be husband Mihir.They were looking heavenly together it feels wonderful when somebody's love story is taking such a good turn the feeling of being with ur beloved for the rest of ur life is just awesome.

Ishita felt may be someday she will feel equally lucky to have her Raman beside her.Was she that much lucky or she will be deprived of love for her whole life?

She was standing and thinking just then she felt a hand on her shoulder.She turned to look at the person and found her one most favourite person Toshi aunty .She was looking at ishita fondly.

Ishita -Namaste aunty ji.How are you?
Mrs. bhalla-You are asking as if u care.
Ishita -Why are u saying like that u know naa after my parents both of you are only my family .Simmi is like a sister to me.
Mrs bhalla-Oh is that so then why we have to invite u like outsiders.
Ishita -It's not like that aunty I was just a bit too busy.

Ishita said embarrassed thinking she is not in good terms with such a nice family all thanks to her RAVAN.

Mrs bhalla ok now lets go and meet simmi.She is asking for u since afternoon.

They go to meet the couple but her eyes were searching for her heartbeat her Raman whom he fondly call Ravan in her self talk.

Hi Simmi Congratulations dear.Ur looking beautiful.Mihir heartbeat may stop today .Said Ishita.

Simmi-Thank god u came.I thought u will not come.I will surely killed u if u had committed such a crime.

Ishita chuckled at her antics.

Ishita -I love my dear life I can't commit such a blunder.

Simmi laughed and said-Anyway thanks for coming by the way ur are looking breathtaking.Whose breath you are planning to take I hope not bhai.

Ishita said kuch bhi by the way where he is?

Simmi-I don't know .

Ishita smiled and left but her eyes were searching for him.She just want to have a glance of him just want to see how he looks after four years.

At the bar counter

Raman -Such a boring party.

Parmeet-How can u say such things for such a rocking party.Full of hot chicks.

Raman -Yaa I know but all are old nota single new face.

Parmeet-Oh my god what a lovely face,beautiful curves.Who is she?Do u know her?Just have a look.

Raman-let it be yaar.Every girl looks very beautiful to u.

Parmeet-No Raman just turn and see.

He said and make Raman turned.

Raman sees a 20 years old girl wearing a simple but beautiful saree in his favourite colour blue.Wearing some bangles in her hand,small earrings,a small bindi on her forehead.He thought she is just a serene view to see.He was mesmerized by her beauty and was staring at her.

On the other hand ishita felt somebody's gaze on her and she turned.She was hell shocked to see her Raman looking at her with his ever charming looks and dimpled smile which make her heart skip a beat.She was checking him out.He was wearing a black tux ,gelled hair,and smiling at her.She immediately realized what she was doing.She just lowered her gaze and just walked out of the hall.




Ok that's all for now wanna read more than comment fast

Wow raksha...i loved it:-)
hey excited to know what happen 4 years ago:-(
how they seperate?
How they met?
Waiting dear:-)

part 2:
ayyo y u stop in wrong time..:-)
ishita is so despo to met raman;-)
raman not recognised her:->
something is cooking in the story:-/
parmeet;->
chotu update;-(
bhallas love her:-)

wow superb update
but kay hua tha 4 year pehle
continue soon wating early

wow superb update but kaya hua tha 4 year pehle
continue soon wating early

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Wow raksha...i loved it:-)
hey excited to know what happen 4 years ago:-(
how they seperate?
How they met?
Waiting dear:-)

part 2:
ayyo y u stop in wrong time..:-)
ishita is so despo to met raman;-)
raman not recognised her:->
something is cooking in the story:-/
parmeet;->
chotu update;-(
bhallas love her:-)

Sorry to give a chotu update but something needed my attention urgently I know everyone want to know what happened four years ago but past should be revealed when needed so be patient and enjoy the story try to update at the earliest.

Originally posted by: divazfankau

wow superb update but kaya hua tha 4 year pehle
continue soon wating early

Thanks for liking my story just wait and let the story unfold till then enjoy will update soon

Wow...this looks really different
Raman didn't recognise her why ?
Since everybody knows her...want to know past...

Ishita loves him too much...

Update soonish
Pm me, if possible

Finally Ishu meet her Ravan but he could not recognized her may be she change so much to be from young girl to be beautiful lady. Why Ishu had to work hard is she lost her parents and get her support by BHALLA family. Why Parmeet here he is real villain or going to turn to be indirectly Cupid. So good update please continue and make it longer dear I am greedy.😆