SS -Yeh Ishq Nahin Asaan (Ch.6 & 7 on Pg.20 9th Jul'15)

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Dudeee that was hot! ☺️ ☺️ I LOVE the fact that you're making this story longer 🥳 Update soon!

PS: You're a fabulous writer!!!!! You tell great stories that are well-written. Good job, keep doing what you're doing!

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sky-if

@sky-if

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Lovely! So glad Ishu is acting right away and so pleased for puttar.. Biwi seemed all in and then the jitters sets in again:)

Oh and loved this moment in between... Hope puttar slowly realizes that biwi is nervous or biwi tells him.. sigh..

"Can you just shut up and hold me tight ?" She lashed at him.He hugged her tight immediately but was baffled at her angry retort. No she sounded more hurt to him.

And biwi's parting shot? Wow! Not sure how puttar is gonna survive the rest of the evening😆

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

that last line from ishita 😲 🤣puttar's done for 😆

that was a hot kiss -loved ishita stoppin raman. and aww raman's so ready poor guy

so glad you're extending this :)

continue soon

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Omg its amazing hope ishu will also do this in show stupid girl... Plsss continue soon can't wait to read more..

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Maya

@mayasun

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

OMG they did have their private moment and I kind of like this new Ishita avatar.hope to see the same in the serial too.

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DipaRB6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

LOOOVED it anj! Was smiling and blushing the whole way through. You choreographed the scene really well. Ishu is trying to take up Vandu's advice but naturally the nervousness and shyness remain, as that's not going away instantly despite the desire. You've shown that aspect really well. And Raman's pulling back to tease her and then unable to control himself to go through with it. 😆

And that parting shot 😲 😳 👏

PS glad it will be longer 😃