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Posted: 10 years ago
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The children found missing
Raman wild goose chasing
Ishita ventures as always alone
Reaches in time and into the fire storms
Enacts her part wonderfully
Saves the children miraculously
Steers them to safety even as the earth shook
And in the process lies under rubble and soot
What hopes and dreams and sweet thoughts
Turned to ash and rendered Raman distraught
They were on the verge of entering Paradise Gates
She didn't let the serpent tempt nor the apple ate
Yet in a lightening moment both banished to a earth
Quaking and shaking with tremors through its girth
Adam had at least Eve nearby and on hand
But Raman and Ishita no longer together stand
Her cries of help are lost and she is cold and scared
The way the fates have conspired as if dared
The cvs also seem partners in this crime
To keep these two from each other far and wide
But Raman's love is real, the TRPs promising and sure
So the show will gear up and the situation certainly cure
Raman will get his beloved back
And things again will be on track
Which will consist and once again bring
Nok Jhok, tender moments and things
With which we are all familiar since when
Just as time stands still ,holds its breadth,then
Comes the great braking news our way
Rukavat ke liye Hame khed hai
And there we go again one more chance gone
Waiting patiently in the wings are Raman Ishita
For their turn ,cue and shot to seal that final Rishta
Well you have played your part today beautifully in fact
And we too with you are patiently waiting for that final act








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Posted: 10 years ago
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U are super talented my friend . Thanks for this.
I think you should be putting up an index with all the poems you have written so far on IshRa in chronological order. It would be a a pleasure to read. Do consider. Thank you and looking forward to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Sumiko,
Beautiful as always.

I do have a request can you make separate poetry for Ishita as to what she was feeling when the boulder is falling on her and one for Raman how he felt when he came to know that Ishita is buried under the rubble.

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