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Posted: 10 years ago
awww such awesome update
you won it matlan finally he loves her
hope so he will except it
n that mani shani ko bhi bhaga do
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Posted: 10 years ago
I really loved the last two parts..
Raman realization of his love to Ishita..
Beautiful..
His vow to himself that he will never leave her was fabulous..
Waiting for the next update..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok. I thought we'll get a huge reaction from Mihika but it didnot happen. Infact, I was shocked. 😆 how easily she agreed to tell Raman about the confusion of Lakshmi and Ishita. 😆

Raman's bedroom scene was sweet. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Superb update

Plz continue soon


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awww such awesome update
you won it matlan finally he loves her
hope so he will except it
n that mani shani ko bhi bhaga do


Yeah we'll see if he really do love her or not (I'm not sure 😉 )
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Ok. I thought we'll get a huge reaction from Mihika but it didnot happen. Infact, I was shocked. 😆 how easily she agreed to tell Raman about the confusion of Lakshmi and Ishita. 😆

Raman's bedroom scene was sweet. 😳


DON'T UNDERESTIMATE MIHIKA 😈
I've saved her part for the next chapter 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: VENBA

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I really loved the last two parts..</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Raman realization of his love to Ishita..</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Beautiful..</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">His vow to himself that he will never leave her was fabulous..</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Waiting for the next update..😊😊</font>


Thanks for liking it
The last two part are somewhat got some stand and plot (backy sab filmy 🤣 )
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mai bahut late hu nah. I know yaar. Main lazy ho gayi pata Ni q. Anyway.
Der se hi sahi :P

"apart from replying me he sighed a relief for not calling him mama.

Is admi ka Horny Mode kab activate hoga yeh kisi ko nahi pata"

ROTFL...You are THREE MUCH (TOO much tumhare lie kamm hai :P)

I LOVE MY RAVAN KUMAR MORE. Thank God he didn't notice.- even I was thinking k he didn't notice warna Ishita ko muh chupane ko jagah na milti

Clingu aka chipku... Arrrhhh

Mihika: "Yeah he will..."
Mihika to herself: "As far as I know him...Raman Bhalla is gonna stangle both of us for making fun of him...lying to him...!!!"-- what a contradiction lol.

YOU WON...!"- matlab I AM IN LOVE ( Raman saying).
Baaki I am not EXPECTING it ( You know what I mean) :P

JB precap Ki zaroorat thi Tb no precap :'(
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Mai bahut late hu nah. I know yaar. Main lazy ho gayi pata Ni q. Anyway.
Der se hi sahi :P

"apart from replying me he sighed a relief for not calling him mama.

Is admi ka Horny Mode kab activate hoga yeh kisi ko nahi pata"

ROTFL...You are THREE MUCH (TOO much tumhare lie kamm hai :P)

I LOVE MY RAVAN KUMAR MORE. Thank God he didn't notice.- even I was thinking k he didn't notice warna Ishita ko muh chupane ko jagah na milti

Clingu aka chipku... Arrrhhh

Mihika: "Yeah he will..."
Mihika to herself: "As far as I know him...Raman Bhalla is gonna stangle both of us for making fun of him...lying to him...!!!"-- what a contradiction lol.

YOU WON...!"- matlab I AM IN LOVE ( Raman saying).
Baaki I am not EXPECTING it ( You know what I mean) :P

JB precap Ki zaroorat thi Tb no precap :'(


Late ho toh kya...
Lengthy review ke saath entry maari... 😆
You won" can mean anything...
And precap... Next part zaroor unexpected hoga... ,😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties... 😊

Here goes the next part...

BOLD 🤬 Writing

Ignore typos and other errors

Not proofread



Chapter-13

I WANT THAT...




"I WON...WHAT?"


She furrowed her eyebrows at him. He chuckled seeing her adorable expression and replied, "EVERYTHING...YOU WON EVERYTHING...!"


Freeing herself from his hold she tried to get out of the bedroom. Next she felt him pulling her by her wrist making her land in his lap.


RAMAN'S POV


Her softness landed on me with in a blink of a second by my unexpected pull. Her breath hitched when I tightened my hands around her waist from behind. She flinched inwardly feeling my hands on her midriff. She was so soft and spongy.


Aur zyada feel karne ka mann kar raha dha...

(I wished to feel more)


Her panting breath triggered my urge to feel her more. So, I pulled her into me making her hold her breath for a while. I took in the mesmerizing figure of her quivering in my arms.


I tugged her flowing hair to her one shoulder and satisfied my eyes in eating up the beauty of her broad back which is almost uncovered by her backless blouse. Bringing my face near her neck, I brushed my lips there. She tilted her head sideways giving me more access to her slender neck.


Raining wet kisses there, my lips travelled downwards to her bare back. Blowing my hot breath I parted a little to see her dodging her back in reflex. Her mere spontaneous act seemed seductive for my restless body.

I so wished to do that then and there!


As she stetched back I saw her blouse loosenig in that process showing the thin part which was covered from me. So I've seen her back successfully...completely. However, the clumsy material was unnecessary. I blew my breath again making her do it (Stretching her back) along with a sweet moan. Because I was not full seeing her bareness.


It is a great game...


That sheer fabric of hers was teasing me to the core. I so wanted to shatter its arrogance by ripping it off. I can't even imagine what's inside...! Hidden from the whole world. And I'm sure I'm going to be the one to see all those heaven.


Who the hell is knocking me...! Oopz...knocking on the door...!


It was enough an excuse for her to slip out of my hold. Hastily fixing her saree and hairdo she ran to the door. Mihika was standing there with this smirk that she caught something. Why...! After all I'm going to marry her. Then what is the big deal!


"Apse kuch batana hai Mr...Jiju..."

(I want to tell you something Mr...jiju)


Mr Jiju? Kya kya naam dogi mujhe...!

(How many names for me)

****asking you****😉


I wondered. Laxmi griped tightly on Mihika's wrist. Why is she so tensed?Is there anything wrong?Is she trying to hide somethig? I was thinking madly seeing her strange behavior.

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ISHITA'S POV


I never thought that he will get intimate with me when our family knows we are alone in the room. I didn't mean that I wish to do it behind their back. But...it is embarrassing you know...!


I thanked my stars when I heard the knock on the door. I so wished to get out of his grip the moment he caught me in his mercy. But, I don't know why I feels like a puddle whenever he is around.


I really felt ashamed of myself for being weak in his hands for the first time. An emotional fool. What else? A bundle of nerves. No...so...I don't know...!


Maybe it is because of Miku's words that I also proved to be like other girls.


Which means there is nothing new...nothing fresh for him...! I'M ANOTHER WOMAN...! Just that!


This new feelings...this strange yearning and my weird yeilding...I really do cherish it. But lately, or precisely from the last night, I'm thinking other way. I think everything is going fast between us. I feels this proximity is not necessary at all.


I should control my urges. I can't let him have his way on me...on my body!


When I opened the door, I saw Mihika standing there with a smirk. Oh God! I know what she is up to. She is going to tell him everything. My identity. Why am I scared? I also want him to know it but...not now...not like this...! So I gripped on Mihika's hand to show my disapproval to disclose it to him. Whom am I trying to control? Mihika Iyer...! She won't here me.


Everything was fine between us regarding Raman until she entered the room. However, this is another Mihika. The high spirited feminist and philanthropist Mihika Iyer. How will I handle her? Her stammering voice made it clear for me that she is up to something which I won't agree to let her do. She cleared her words to Jiju from saying Mr Bhalla in a split second, cause of my presence.


Ayyo...Murugan...how I forgot that she is the administrator of Anti-virus...oops...Anti-RKB group!

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"I want to talk to you jiju..."(Looking at Ishita) "In person"


Ishita walked out of the room giving them privacy. She was hell nervous of Raman's reaction. She prepared her mind to face his wrath in the living room...in the presence of their family and Mani. When Ishita walked out of the room she heard the door locking behind her. She tightly shut her eyes and walked off after letting out a loud sigh. Praying that everything goes well.


Other side of her heart was cursing her for falling for such a jerk. She knew Mihika is RIGHT. Her instincts always roared to her that she is WRONG.


Raman stared at Mihika who did the same standing face to face, hands crossed. His eyes were of confused while hers were infuriated. After what felt like ages, he sat on the bed throwing his hands upwards showing his disinterest in continuing this eying game.


Raman: In a bored voice, "Kya baat hai Mihika? Why are you looking at me like...that?"

(What's the matter Mihika?)


Mihika: Without blinking, "Kya plan hai?"

(What's the plan?)


Raman: Evading his eyes, "Kya...?"

(what?)


Mihika: Gritting her teeth, "I'm asking you what's your damn plan...?"


Raman: Smiling nervously, "Plan...! I told you...I'm going to Mumbai..."


Mihika: Cutting him short, "Drama band karo...aur bolo...What the hell are you planning to do with my akka?"

(Stop your drama and speak up)


Raman: "Are you crazy Mihika? What'll I do to her? I'm going to marry her...!"


Mihika: "You can't play me Mr RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA...! I know you too well."


Raman: Throwing the mobile on the bed angrily, "Kya pata huh...? Kya pata hai tujhe?" (Smirking) "You know nothing about RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA"

(What do you know?)


Mihika: Chuckling mockingly, "There you are...the RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA...! Come up with the crap you..."


Raman: Pointing a fingure at her, "Stop interfering Miss Mihika Iyer."


Mihika: Shaking her head, "No I can't because it is my akka's life. I won't let you play with her feelings and..."


Raman: On top of his voice, "You can't stop me! No one can stop me...! (Walking to her) And FYI, I really am planning a lot for your akka...(Laughing out) Kya samjhkar rakha hai usne apne ap ko...! (Pointig at himself) Mujhe reject kar raha dha...RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA ko reject kar raha dha...! See what happens to her"

(What did she think of herself! She was rejecting me...rejecting RKB!)


Mihika: Getting agitated, "Stop it Mr Bhalla... Don't ruin my akka for God's sake"


Raman: Spitting back with the same vigour, "To hell with your God. Tumhari akka ne mujhe itna insult kiya hai jis keliye voh puri zindagi pachtayegi..."

(Your akka is going to repent her whole life for insulting me)


Mihika: Stepping back dejected says in a not so weak tone, "So I was right. You're game"


Raman: "I'm always"


Mihika: Sighing, "Finally...let's make a deal..."


Raman: Sitting on the bed, "That means business...hmm...tell me..."


Mihika: In a serious note, "Leave my akka...she will apologise to you for her behaviour..."


Raman: Grinning sheepishly, "So you're scared...right?"


Mihika: In a casual style, "Of course yes. Such a Devil you are! Now tell me...(Creasing her eyebrows nervously) Will you spare her?"


Raman: Leaning forward to show his interest, "Let's amend the contract..."


Mihika: Puzzled, "Yeah...what's it?"


Raman: Moving his hands animatedly, "She did hurt my ego big time. Though, I'm ready to forget it...But just need to remind myself that RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA never got rejected"


Mihika: Furrowing at him, "What do you mean?"


Raman: Clearing his throat and speaks in a normal tone, "I WANT HER IN MY BED...ONE NIGHT!"


So that's it

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