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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shravani_2311

aww...

wow...wow...wow...
nly i can say these aftr reading it...

i knw raman nly has lust kumar frm starting bt cant stop loving him...

i love raman's plan of getng maried...

mihika and mani.. i really dont lik...

awesome romnce of ishra...

engagemnt is such a shock...

i hop raman understnd ishu can nly be with him... bcoz she feels comfrtable with raman thn mani...

waitng fr next...


Thank you for loving it 🤗
Let's wait and read what happens next... As I too don't know 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

OMG. You are an awesome writer. Loved the bedroom scene. It was too HOT! Ohh God, this Mani. I feel like shutting him up. I just hope IshRa gets engaged. Continue soon.


Thanks for liking it dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10


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read both part 8 and 9 together
so ishita challenged raman
smart girl😉 she knows very well that her biology only
match with her cyclone kumar
but raman babu is smarter than u girl😉
he gave marriage proposal to amma
loved d hawt bedroom romance😳
Mr google failed 2 teach raman about
how 2 fall in love😆
d story is becoming more interesting😃
thank u Gaya3 4 regular updates😊




Thank you dear 😊
Welcome (4 regular updates 😉 )
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nichuss

im liking this story...

in one go i read all chaps...


so intresting


Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

wow omg love it awesome too

raman ask for wed but to laxmi or he know she is ishita

love romance was wow before wed

for next day engage

she told him his touch affect jim


Thank you... 😳
Laxmi/ Ishu...I'll tell you in the next update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Unreserved...
Before your pm i caught this update:-D

i love this update..bcoz now raman atleast thinking about what love,marriage,kids and relationship:-)

ishita mission is successful in one point of view..:-P:-P

I LOVE RAMAN POV...

WHY U WANT 2 FALL IN LUV!Y BCOZ I WANT TO HAVE...

KITHNI BE DOOR CHELO PUTTAR TARGET KO NAHI BHULA;-);-);-)(he never forget what is his final target):-D:-D

IS THAT A REASON TO FALL IN LOVE?
i thought about it for the first time.not b'coz i was interested,but i was wondered if there is something other than having Xxx and then kids from a relationship...:-O:-O:-O

Wow at last raman thinking about love and marriage,kids other than LUST;-);-)
As per raman personal experience,MARRIAGE DOESN'T HOLD ANY VALUE,ITS JUST A SHOW OFF:-P:-P:-P

EVEN HE DNT KNOW WHY HE TREATING WOMEN AS PRODUCT TO USE AND THROW

as per my view..if raman is sad for her partents marriage life ,he is not commited to marriage life..ONE POINT OF VIEW, I AGREE..:-PBUT HE TREAT WOMEN AS A PRODUCT..his father leave his mother for another women.if he sad for his mother he should RESPECT WOMEN BUT HE DISRESPECT WOMEN ?:-O:-O:-O

leave all that.now my major concern is to fall in love...WHAT WILL I DO?WHAT ARE THE SIGNS AND SYMTOMS?I'VE ONLY TWELEVE DAYS TO LOVE & MARRIAGE...

SIGNS AND SYMTOMS;-);-)PUTTAR TUM PREGNENT KE BARMAI POOCHA THO ANSWERS MIL JATHA HAI...YEH THO LOVE HAI BHAI;-);-);-)

NOW ALSO PUTTAR THINKING ABOUT LOVE AND MARRIAGE:-P:-P:-P

I LOVE THIS ...
Acting...?will she believe?
No..she is sharp!
I wanted to do it sincerely unless i cant win the challenge completely:-):-):-)

HE VERY WELL KNOWS ABOUT ISHITA..THIS IS THE GOOD SIGN OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP.:-)

RKB NEVER CHEATS.MORE EVER,I WANT TO EXPERIENCE THE FEELINGS OF BEING IN LOVE...
"WHAT WILL BE IT...LIKE HOW WILL I FEEL WHEN I FALL IN LOVE WITH HER"

HMM..PUTTAR ke MUU MAI GHEE SHEKAR;-);-);-)

he talking about LOVE...
He never cheat to win the challenge and he sincerely want to complet challenge..
IT IS A BIG CHANGE IN HIS THOUGHTS:-P:-PB-)B-):-O:-O

To win challenge ,he choose to marry her first..
Yes raman want to take RISK BETTER THAN XXX..
EVEN HE NOT REALISING HE IS GIVING LIFE TIME COMMITMENT TO ISHITA..%-)%-)%-)

IYER HOUSE:
Raman got successful in convincing his to be MIL.SHE CANNOT HAVE A GOOD SIL LIKE HIM:-P:-P:-P

"I PROMISE U,I'LL ALWAYS KEEP HER HAPPY.I'LL NEVER LEAVE HER AND WILL ALWAYS LOVE HER BCOZ I KNOW HOW MUCH IT HURTS WHEN YOUR LOVED ONE LEAVES U TO SUFFER"
:-P:-P:-PBETA KIS WRITER KO APPOINT KIYA ..YEH LINES KELIYE:-O:-OB-)B-)B-)

ishita entry mari scene mai..:-P:-P she greated toshiji and gared raman..raman ask amma to met ishita in her ROOM;-);-);-)
Madam cursing raman,her whole world is preoccupied by raman..

INTERESING CONVERSATION:

yeh lines kaha sai ayya AUTHOR SAIBA
SOMETHING IS BETTER THAN NOTHING..:-O:-O:-O

RAMAN BLAST THE BOMB...tomorrow is our engegement..;-);-)
ishita is hell shocked..WHAT?
I:what all these raman!this is unfair..
R:unfair?oh hello ..its easy to challenge but to win ,u need brain.
I:what ever..but u can't do this u are not supposed to do the FIRST THING ,SECOND THING...THIRD THING FIRSTLY OR U...U JUST CAN'T JUMPLE IT...U SHOULD DO EVERY THING IN ORDER..:-O:-O:-O

R:I LOVE TO BE DISORDERED IN THIS CASE..;-);-);-)

IN THIS CONVERSATION I FOUND SELFISH ISHITA!:-P:-P YES U LISTEN ME RIGHT...
ISHITA IS SELFISH ,SHE WANT TO EXPERIENCE THE FEELING OF LOVE FROM RAMAN..B-)B-)B-)THAT TOO BEFORE MARRIAGE...SHE BADLY WANT LOVE KUMAR...

ishita not agree to engagement

RAMAN DIALOGUES CRACKED ME..:-D:-D:-D then what your plan?make me fall in LOVE WITH U AND THEN LEAVE ME...U CHEAT:-D:-D:-D
I:dont u dare,u never fell in love with me so do i never cheat.

When using the word cheat from raman's mouth..it 'S cracking me:-D:-D:-D
But ONE THING IS SURE...HE NEVER TOLERATE WHEN SOME ONE CHEAT HIM...AND HE BADLY WANT ISHITA'S LOVE .

HE IS VERY CONFIDENT ABOUT ISHITA..SHE MAKE HIM FALL IN LOVE...THATS THE REASON HE SCARED TO LEAVE HER OR SHE LEAVE HIM..:-P:-P:-P:-P

ishita declare her decision to
him..its not gonna happen.
R:while walking out of her room"out of control"
I THINK THIS IS NOT COMPLETE CONVERSATION ...Waiting for ishita pov in next update:-)

LUST KUMAR LINES IN THIS UPDATE;-);-);-):
some thing is better than nothing;-);-)
I affect her so badly..:-P:-P
She was in same state where i
she is worth challenge.;-)

COFFE SHOP:
its irritate me when this trio plan or discuss about MY LUST KUMAR..

RAMAN HANDLING THIS THREE WITH SINGLE HAND:-D:-D:-D

HE IS CLEVER...;-);-);-)
PRECAP:so some 1 want to trying to tell the truth about ishita :-@:-@:-@
AUTHOR SAIBA PLANNING TO TURN OUR LUST KUMAR IN TO MARRIED KUMAR:-P:-P:-P(Opps now he is GROOM KUMAR..TILL MARRIAGE IS NOT DONE NA)

thanks for baring my hindi and my comments too:-D:-D:-D


*sigh*
Love you for the review 🤗
he never forget what is his final target 🤣
if he sad for his mother he should RESPECT WOMEN BUT HE DISRESPECT WOMEN Sab kuch ulta 🤣 😆
PUTTAR TUM PREGNENT KE BARMAI POOCHA THO ANSWERS MIL JATHA HAI...YEH THO LOVE HAI BHAI 🤣
THAT TOO BEFORE MARRIAGE...SHE BADLY WANT LOVE KUMAR you're right 👍🏼
some thing is better than nothing puttar cannot have xxx with her so he wants to at leat see her 🤣
"out of control" yes it's not complete.
How you caught me? 🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Ha ha you are amazing Gaya you know where to,put the stop. Raman had so much affect yo Ishu when he close by but did she know he is peeping at her so she trap him by her charm just to teach him. Wow the touch of passion both are playing beyond the imagine but finally Ishu stop and control the situation not to go beyond the limit.👏👏I love her guts still. But you told me don't underestimate RKB Yes I agree he smart and one thing is clear he won't cheat so it fair in love but not game. He fix the engagment and marriage in one go. Let see how Ishu will come out of phthisic web. So the score 1-1 yet.now the story is more intersting every update my dear. Have a beautiful weekend and thanks for PM.🤗🤗


I know I'm really amazing Jum 😆
You see.. RKB is smarter 😉
He won't cheat... But what about Ishu... 🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

I wanted to do it SINCERELY unless I can't win the challenge completely. RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA NEVER CHEATS. MOREOVER, I WANTED TO EXPERIENCE THE FEELING OF BEING IN LOVE.-- this took my heart away

Then what was your plan? Make me fall in love with you and then leave me...YOU CHEAT"--- look who is talking :P

OMG... They are going to get married kya?????
I want them to get married.

Raman is behaving like a moth more than a s*x maniac


🤣 cheat... Everyone is clung on to that words of RKB 🤣
Moth... Are you serious... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Author saiba i caught u? :-O
according to my knowledge no reader can caught u..;-)

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