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Finally UNRES
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eesshhh eeeshhh eeessshhh
ok done with my nautanki but the first few lines of the song which has been my latest addiction made me go in this nautanki eeeshh wala mode
coming to the update
the very first para was just so beautiful...right from meeting at the place from where their journey started then, her hiding him on feeling cold, him playing with her tresses and all this while boating was just too romantic
and then finally the sunset...watching the sunset with your partner is just the most beautiful view and you have put it here so nicely 😳😳
aww his plans to come to this place again and again and her disappointment, broken dreams and the break down perfectly written
the way she described the happenings of her visit to her home and how her Amma Appa opposed the relation was very emotional but real at the same time...parents do react that way usually but her emotional break down and him handling her silently was just too senti...his silence was killing though...he didnt give any reaction but only dropped her at PG
and then then then first date ki memories sad and happy moments together put up very nicely...i could feel connected with it all because of the way you have put up 👏👏👏
her dilemma ek haath mein family pic ek haath mein phone with his pic and she trying to join both of them into one...this is my fav part till now...it is just so real and thoughtful it actually happens when something is not possible or it atleast seems impossible to us we try to satisfy ourselves by doing that in our virtual imaginary world
and the separation phase has started...away from each other for 3 days already...it was heart-wrenching to read this part and but again written so perfectly all the pain was clearly evident
huhh finally done with the comment
Anki i have read few write ups from you here and there but never stopped to comment bcoz of my laziness although they all were just as awesome as you but this one was just out of the world
i always say this that i dont feel like reading sad things but this was just so out of the world that i didnt want this part to end i so want read it ahead ASAP
i feel so connected to this particular story for some unknown reasons but sachi mein it is just the best
plz plz update soonish
sorry for this long banter but i just could not hold myself...abhi bhi pata nahi kya kya likhne ka mann ho raha hai but i better stop
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edited again
the song in the end is again a heart touching song
Edited by -Pankhuri- - 10 years ago
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