FF : Khamoshiyaan aawaaz hain Part 1 - Page 3

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Hi all,

Iam have come up with a new story. I am trying to write Ishra relationship based on arranged marriage. Please have a look at the prologue and let me know if the story has to be continued or not.

Prologue - Below Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122751349
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Prologue

Raman Bhalla: 28 years old single Punjabi munda. Lives in Mumbai. Lawyer by profession. Had done his MBA from a premium business school and wanted serve people. Hence detest continuing with the family business. He is not in talking terms with his father Om Prakash Bhalla due to this. He is a happy go lucky guy. Loves music and is a good tennis player too. Visit his parents at Delhi once a year for one month. He had a childhood crush Shagun, she was his uncle's daughter and post the demise of his uncle grew up with Raman's Family. He has a dark past about his love life, hence doesn't believe love can happen in his life. However does not hate women or love.

Ishitha Iyer: 26 years old lives in Delhi with her parents. Elder daughter of Vishwanathan iyer. MBA and works at a senior position in Bhalla industries. Associated with social service activities during her free time. Was to be married to Subbu. She got her engagement cancelled with Subbu and has a rift with her father due to that. She is not interested to get married after her first engagement got cancelled. Has a dark past regarding love, hence doesn't believe love can happen in her life. Apple of the eye of Mr Bhalla and he takes any decision in consultation with Ishitha only. She is a classical music singer. Loves to spread fun around her and is a good dancer too.

Mihika iyer: Ishita's younger sister 23 years old. Completed her post-graduation and in lookout of job. Loves her akka too the core and always by her side.

Mihir Arora: Younger brother of Shagun 26 years old. Grew up with Raman. Loves and adores him to the core. He is taking care of Mumbai office of Bhalla industries. Lives with Raman

Om Prakash Bhalla: Overall head of Bhalla industry. Father of Raman, Simmi, Rinky and Romi. Loves his family and very much worried about Raman and his future. Was a normal man and due to his hard work has built the Bhalla Empire and is a very respected business man.

Toshi Bhalla: Second wife of Mr Bhalla. She has brought up two children of Omprakash Bhalla from his first marriage after the demise of his first wife (Simi and Raman). They have 2 children Romi and Rinki. Was a college lecturer during struggling days of Mr Bhalla and helped him financially.

Simmi kurana: Elder sister of Raman.30 years old. Married to Parmeet and has a kid Ananya.

Parmeet Kurana: Only Son of a textile business family. 30 years old. Fell in love with Simmi in the college and got his marriage arranged through his parents. Deeply in love with Simmi and Simmi is also very much in love with him.

Romi bhalla:23 years old Raman's younger brother. Fun loving guy and not so very responsible. Just completed his MBA in business studies and had been continuously been pestered by Mr Bhalla to join their business. He would eventually join but wants to enjoy life for now.

Rinky Bhalla: 21 years old Raman's younger sister. Studying in college.

Vishwanathan Iyer: Simple family man. Works for financial institution and father of Ishitha and Mihika. Now Mr Iyer is leading a comfortable upper middle class life.

Madhavi iyer: Wife of Vishwanathan Iyer. Mother of Ishitha and Mihika. Was working for a financial institution and helped Mr Iyer financially during his hard days as Mr iyer had to take care of his siblings and mother.

Shagun Khanna: Brother's daughter of Mr Bhalla's First wife. Was to be wed to Raman. Was a materialistic woman and dumped Raman for money and got married to Raman's college friend Ashok Khanna

Edited by iloveyhm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start dear
Please do continue
You know I really wanted to see Raman as a lawyer and you made my dream come true...Thanks for that
please update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
only ishra no kids
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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great start dear cont. soon👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Nitya 😳.. You are back with a new story and I love the start..
Please post the first chapter soon 😃. Do Pm me 😳
Thanks in advance 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nitya,wonderful start.continue soon.different concept.intresting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi nitya..nice start.
Character sketch looks good.please do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey di, welcome with new story. loved the prologue. waiting for part 1. update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear..
Very intresting starting..
Liked d prologue also..
Continue it soon..

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