SongOSthon#1 : 24 OSes | Catch up with the ones u hv missed! :) - Page 87

Originally posted by: peace..

chal will try writing next week. Something light dis tym( will try😆😉)

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Palke bichaaye intezaar me *_* .

Originally posted by: sukanksha

@DarkLady

I liked it... But why a sad ending.
I know optimism was there but still...

Originally posted by: aarohi26

@dark Lady, that was brilliant yaar. first of all,congrats on your knowledge about ragas. being a classical music learner I am happy with your knowledge about this. now back to os. it was beautiful. Raman not wanted to accept his feelings while ishita lose her all hopes of love from Raman. you completely justified with lyrics. again congratz for your beautiful os

Originally posted by: shravsss

@DarkLady

Hey was so heart touching dear...

They way Ishita thought,,,,

Her feelings...

Her emptiness...

You Portrayed her character very well...

Though i didn't get Raman's stature...

I will leave it to my thought that he is working on his side of Soul finding...

P,S I so Liked it dear...

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

@darklady

Piu...Emotional OS

Oh god! Ishita's character was perfectly sketched

soo...heart touching

P>S - haath milao.hum dono ek hi thali ke chatte batte hai

even technology hates me. whatever i write gets deleted or i misplace it somewhere...vagera vagera

Originally posted by: DipaRB6

Wow Piu! I think this is your best OS yet. I love watching your writing evolve like this. Ishita's yearning and selftorture about expressing that yearning is done really well. The hardest thing for anyway, never mind people who've already been hurt in love, is to take that chance and say something. And you've captured that moment really well.

I also really liked Raman's response, as heartbreaking as it was initially. He had a good reason for it and his actions basically assured her that it was because he loved her that he had to stop himself. Really well done!! Great job my little friend 😛