Ishra FF ||A Contract Of Love|| Prologue ~ Chapter 24B

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Rashmika

@RashmikaMG

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

This story is sooo beautiful.
One of my favs these days in this forum.
Till 2day I read this when I was nt loged in. So couldn't comment. Bt 2day got a chance.
U still didn't reveal who r their ex's. And also what happened in past. Waiting 4 know it.
They told they can't love another person and this marriage only 4 kids and nt 4 themselves. Bt I've a feeling soon they fell in love head over heals with each other.
Is that gonna b sn?
I know u update this daily. Bt phir b update sn.
Can't wait 4 read them.

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Shravs

@shravsss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Superb... Another great piece of rendition...

I liked the way you described their restaurant scene...

the one with his mom in their Apartment...

Then the scene where his mom got assurance of their relationship...

Ruhi always takes her mother's arms or lap to settle herself that was something great to see... and Raman was willingly giving her away to her...

Even at her home the first thing he did was giving ruhi away to Ishita...

The way he convinced amma... and the words with which he described his to be wife... 👏...

Any girl would like such a gesture from her to be hubby... The Respect she earned from his side was very much visible... and that says it all...

P.S.. Im falling irrecoverably in Love with your Writing... and your understanding about different things... the small small things which you specify... Which implies deeper meaning in them... I just love reading them... Im glad to be your Reader... Love you... 😳

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Abhinaiscool

@Abhinaiscool

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Loved it ... The whole process of him coming together is beautifull...

I love your style of writing very subtle n not OTT...

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Sonal

@...Forever...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

cute story... plz pm me...

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Anotherr Brillianttt Updateee...
BTW Ishita k baby ka papa hai kaun...
Brilliant Update...
update soon

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Maya

@mayasun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Hi Prabh,

I read all your seven chapters in one go. It is awesome. I especially liked the last part where Raman showed his respect for Ishita while talking to amma.

Waiting for the next update.

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143rhb

@143rhb

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Wow nice update

Now contract of love will turn to marriage of love, love for their children.

Loved it.

Waiting for next update.

Pls pm me

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: Divya5377
You are taking the FF so well...I'm still not sure what exactly Raman feel about his first wife

Thank you so much! Their pasts and feelings will be talked about more in detail later!

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: rk654
again it's a superb update...👍🏼
awesomely writen...

ishita so cleared about da money

da way raman talked wid her amma was ultimate👏

thanx for da speedy update

Thank you so much! Glad you're liking everything so far! Am trying to do an update everyday or every 2 days!