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nadira

@nadira26islam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#631

what is this!!!!!!!wht next,diii!!!!!!i cnt feel my heart beat :( nw its impossibl to wait for nxt update till morning!!!!!!!! If hav to wait ,i think i will get heart attack :( one more update plzzz,diii :( :( :(

just for tonight!!!!i will nevr ask for any,plzzz di...i promise(nt sure...if u start writting this way...it will b impossbl to keep the promise :) )...plzzz

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dsgirl

@dsgirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

Great insight into the life of Akka and II nisha...it's never a happy ending into someone's life...I love the fact about how akka makes II realise that what she feels is a good life of her sister is actually not a bed of roses...not everyone can have everything they want...
Amazing update nisha...one of my favorite!

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ishruhi

@ishruhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: nadira26islam
what is this!!!!!!!wht next,diii!!!!!!i cnt feel my heart beat :( nw its impossibl to wait for nxt update till morning!!!!!!!! If hav to wait ,i think i will get heart attack :( one more update plzzz,diii :( :( :(

just for tonight!!!!i will nevr ask for any,plzzz di...i promise(nt sure...if u start writting this way...it will b impossbl to keep the promise :) )...plzzz

dont give such promises... 🤣

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VeeIyer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
VeeIyer: THANKS SO VERY MUCH for saying such nice things. I am happy you can see integrity in the character portrayals thats a HUGE compliment. I am a novice writer I write what my heart urges me to.

I am an Iyer and have lived in Delhi and know a million Punjabis besides that everything else is someone we know or have met. They ALL exist SOMEWHERE

Isruhi: Its not easy to transform your life instantly you know, after Bala's parents pass away, 10 more years? 12? Vandu may get some respite. By then the "first 10 years of married life" will be long gone

Enda vayasula enna pannumo adu 90% people are unable to (90% are not fortunate to have certain life events happen to them WHEN its supposed to)

Who runs away?

Nobody

Who constantly gripes and complains? Nobody

Why is II like this?

She has never been married before, the only married people she knows closely are Amma Appa and Akka-Athim. So many things are unknown to her in both those marriages

School of hard knocks will teach her.
She has EVERYTHING outwardly, but no peace at home
Vandu is fighting bigger battles.
Thanks for responding Nisha.

I have read the update thrice and am still overwhelmed by the simplicity of Vandu's emotions and her hardhitting conversation with II. Keep the writing going and can really not express my feelings on how appreciative Iam of your effort 😊

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#635

Shilpa i know!!! Have seen my mom doing it. Fortunately now nothing of that sort happens. It was a 2-3 year time period when we had tight situations... I was in school struggling for boards and my father wa posted elsewhere...

The rents, auto charges, school fees, maids, it was a hard time!!!

We never complained at home. We were well fed, and I could go out for lunches during farewell at fancy restaurants...

It was a tough time though.

I wonder what it takes for so many women out there struggling day in and day out to make ends meet!!

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docs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#636

One of the best chapters of this story.. I loved it ..

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putti77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: Ashu25
This is what a middle class life is all about
Strtching pay cheques, paying maids, eating left overs, sonetimes not cooking at all!!!

A veen there done that situation!!

Wonderfully written Nisha!!

Very well written Nisha. All middle class life is almost same. When I was in 5th standard liked one dress and forced parents to buy it. They insisted a lot that we will buy next week. I was so adamant left eating food and cried a lot until they get that dress for me. Later I realized it was month end and dad was struggling with money. But dad borrowed money from his friend and got the dress for me. Now when I look back become emotional. The middle class parents sacrifice so much to give the best upbringing to their kids. Hats off to all middle class parents.

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nadira

@nadira26islam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: ishruhi

dont give such promises... 🤣

i think sooo...:) i read all her updates n lovd all... Bt aftr reading this one i m just stoppd...nw only one thing is in my head what nxt!!!!wht nxt!!!cnt undrstnd wht can i do now :-\