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Posted: 10 years ago
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All of those who are interested in my SS plz comment and tell me I should add you to my PM list!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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umeirah pleasee be ekta or raman ko zinda kardo...
i just cant digest it...
but yeah its interesting... update soon...
i hope aagey chal k tera ekta mode.on hjae...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anum_says

umeirah pleasee be ekta or raman ko zinda kardo...
i just cant digest it...
but yeah its interesting... update soon...
i hope aagey chal k tera ekta mode.on hjae...

Teri farmaish maan bhi loon par phir poor me... I want to write this story to literally get it out of my system! It's haunting the daylights out of me!!! 😡
Edited by umeirah02 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5

Yeh sahi hai Raman... tu Shaadi karne jaa raha hai aur apne "best friend" ko bataya tak nahi! Main tujhse naaraz hoon!

Rajeev shaadi karne jaa raha hoon abhi tak ki nahi hai! Yaar tu dost se badhke bhai hai magar sab itni jaldi mein hua ke mauka hi nahi mila! Sorry mere Bhai.

Chal koi nahi yaar! Tu khush toh main bhi khush. Acha chal yeh bata ke Bhabhi se kab milwayega?

Jaldh hi

At that point Mummyji entered and Rajeev greeted her.

Jeeounda reh Puttar. Saary Puttarji bhaaga dauri wich tehnu dasna ei pul gayi. Hun teh tu aa hi gaya hai naa.. teh milke enjaay karaange!

(may you have a long life dearest son. I'm sorry dear in the hustle bustle I completely forgot to let you know. Now that you have come; we will have a blast!)
Acha Mummyji main kya soch raha tha ke humaare Raman ke liye bachelor party nahi organise karni chaiye? Kya khayaal hai aapka?

Ai teh tu bada acha sochya Puttar. Iss khote di khur nu teh har vele kar ei rehna hai!

turning over to face Raman:

Puttar tere aaiyo din bach gaye ne zindagi jeen de... aus toh baad teh teri vauti tehnu sukoon di saas nahi len de gi!

Teh phir ki farak pehnda ne Mummyji?? Tussa de kehne teh main kudi dekhan manya si. Par hun teh uss di mohabbat wich pagal haan! I don't mind Mummyji... hun teh meri life aus di hi hai!

Good good oye very good! Aj pehli baar main aapne munde nu itna khush dekhya hai!

Itne waqt se sirf unki tareefien hi sun raha hoon. Arre koi unse milao bhi toh!

Tujhe bari jaldi hai Ishita se milne ki... chal mila doonga... aaj hum dono shopping ke liye jaa rahein hain... tu vi saath chal!

Puttar Rajeev da ki kam. Khota hai tu ik number da. Akele tayme spend kar kudi de naal. Ai nahi ke poori toli nu saath hi lekhe chalna hai!!

Mummy tussi vi naa... Rajeev da itna mann hai milan da... usaan de tahn mauke shauke aande rehn ge... after all poori life kaathe ei spend karni hai!!

Tu tayyar rehna Rajeev 7 baje nikalna hai!

Ab main chalta hoon!!

As soon as Rajeev left

Puttar itna changa hona vi acha nahi! Kadhe lohgaan nu chad ke apne val ve soch liya kar!!

Chado in galan nu! Mainu Papaji naal gal kadhni hai!
Haan Bhallaji kamre de wich aan...

Main hune aaya!

Papaji tusan de naal gal karni si...

Haanji bola naa Puttarji

Main ki soch raya si ke vyah tuhn baad aasi saare chuti teh chalne aan...

Betaji vauti tusi kar leyan wale oh.. break di zaroorat tuhaanu hai.. Raman teri Mummy sahi kehndi hai...
kotha naa ban teh apni life nu enjoy kar.. aayo din ne hasan khel de phir tha Ishita di hi khaatir daari karni nai!

Jee haanji Papaji...

Oye Puttar iss tarah zindagi aage nahi badhdi... waise gal sunn bachelor party da ki plan hai...??

Papaji main chalda aan... Shopping de li jaana hai...


Jao ji Puttar

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Bhabhi kahaan reh gayi...

Wahan aagayi Ishita!

Ab toh mila de...

Ruk

Hi Raman... after hesitation.. yeh koun hai?

Yeh Rajeev hai mera Bhai.. mera jigdi yaar! Humaari engagement itni jaldi mein hoyi ke tumhe isse mila hi nahi paaya. Waise, he was really eager to meet you!!

Rajeev after staring all that while at Ishu from top to bottom unabashedly commented
Tohta hai yaar... kamaal di kudi hai.. yeh kudi tujhse kaise pat gayi?? Tu toh bada shareef lagta tha... bata naa yaar... (touching Ishu's hair) aare dekh toh kitni khoobsurat zulfein hain...

Realising Ishu's discomfort, Raman held on to her hand and smacked Rajeev's hand away clearly warning him not to use such words and ever touch Ishu again

Dekh Rajeev tujhe Bhai maanta hoon iska matlab yeh nahi ke tu jo maan mein aaye woh baq de gaa. Ishita meri hone wali patni hai. Agar aainda tune aaisa kuch bhi kaha toh yaad rakhna... I'm warning you, zinda ghaar doon gaa! Ab chal jaa yaahaan se aur aaj ke baad mujhe aapni shakal maath dikhana. Tujh se zyaada besharam insaan maine aapni life mein nahi dekha. Itni gandi harqat karne ke bawaajood teri itni majaal ke tu yahaan kaadha hoke mujhe ghoor raha hai!! You know what tujh jaisa bhai nahi chaiye mujhe! Meri Ishita ko Bhabhi kehne ke bawaajood tune itni... ghin aati hai mujhe... tu itna besharam kabse hogaya??

Raman pushed Rajeev away telling him to stay away. Rajeev left silently!
Thank you Raman. Waise I'm glad yeh hua... (Raman looking surprised) kya matlab? .. matlab yeh ke mujhe dekhne mila ke aap mujhe kitni zyaada mohabbat kartein hain. Seriously, uss leecher ko dekh ke, main toh khabrah hi gayi thi, by God!!

Jab tak main tumhaare saath hoon, tumhaare maathe par shikhan bhi nahi aane doonga! I promise ke aapni aakhri saans tak tumhaari khifaazat karoonga...
Bas bas senti baatein nahi suni hain mujhe... you know what Raman baarish hone waali hai... lets go to the park... khoob enjoy karenge.. aap yahi soch rahe ho naa ke shopping ka kya hoga... well woh toh hum kal bhi karsakte hain... magar yeh pal laut ke kabhi nahi aayega!! I want to cherish each and every single moment of life with you!!

Chalo phir...

IshRa were walking hand in hand merrily chattering away when Ishu randomly asked Raman what he feared the most...

death he answered

mujhe aapni life mein bahut kuch paana hai... mere sabse baadi priority: meri aulaad. Tumhaare toh phir bhi cousins hain par mera toh koi bhi naahi... Mera saara pyaar mere bachoon ka hoga!! Aur phir tumhaare saath aapni poori zindagi guzarni hai, Maa aur Papa ke liye hamesha ek bahu se badhke beti chahta tha... aur tum hi ho wahi...

... That day was one of the most beautiful days of their lifetime... they had spent the finest three hours of their life together... casual chats ... having chai & pakodas at the road side... IshRa feeding each other... Ishu accidentally biting onto Raman's finger and whilst coming back; due to her fatigue Ishu falling fast asleep, resting her head on Raman's shoulder! All he could do was adore her sleeping figure and smile feeling content.

He was one happy man today. This woman was going to be all his... not only was he mesmerized by her looks but also the purity of her heart. She was his golden girl. A girl with a heart of gold... He felt most fortunate to have her in his life... she was truly a blessing defending from up above the heavens to grace his life and make it beautiful merely by her presence!
Their wedding was fixed after three months... during this time they made it a point to meet everyday and if not everyday then they would chat over the phone whenever possible. They had grown so fond of each other that not a second of his life could pass without her smiling face! That smile touched his soul making her all the more attractive. Their Haldi and Mehndi were the most memorable... on those days they used to pine to catch at least a glimpse of each other... Raman actually on the night of both occasions came over to Ishu's house to meet her... their love only grew over time...!!
It was their wedding day finally... Ishu was decked up in a purple lehnga with beautiful gold colour embroidery and Raman also wore a purple sherwani with a golden turban... they looked divine... Raman was clean shaven looking like a total hottie.. their excitement levels just continued to rise...
Amma welcomed Raman into the venue and after showering him with all her love and blessings led him to the Mandap.

The Bhalla's were then presented with gifts from Ishu's side...
Now the most difficult moment arrived... the Kanyadan... Amma-Appa became teary eyed... it was obvious... she was their only daughter... Raman spoke up and assured Iyers that they could come and meet Ishu anytime they would want to... and that he would fill Ishu's life with happiness where no pain would ever befall her... Iyers felt over whelmed..

Ishu was brought into the Mandap whilst arriving she saw a glimpse of Raman and her heart skipped a beat... in a few more minutes they would be each others forever.. they couldn't be happier...
At the backdrop of the Mantra's Appa confidently placed his daughter's hand into Raman's being completely assured that their couldn't have been a better man for Ishu... He was the chosen one... they were meant to be!!

The Fire Ceremony was then performed to indicate the purity of the upcoming ceremonies, which were to be conducted in the presence of the sacred fire. IshRa felt even more strongly connected as they performed these rituals... Theirs was a connection of the heart... they were made for each other!!

Then came the turn of the "Pani-Grahan" ... Raman whole heartedly accepted Ishu hoping for a new beginning in life by placing his right hand into Ishu's whilst Panditji chanted the Mantras. Their hands were tied together with a cotton thread several times to signify a strong foundation for IshRa's ever lastingly eternal bond!!

During the Shila Arohan, Amma made Ishu step over a stone slab implying a blissful beginning to her new life.

Then came Parikrama... the most crucial ritual! Ishu and Raman took seven rounds of the holy fire indicating a fresh start of their lives!

During Saptapadi, Raman & Ishu took seven sacred steps after being tied into a sacred bond of an entire lifetime! IshRa vowed to provide each other strength during testing times, nourishment, happiness at all costs, prayed for a long age and forever of togetherness, progeny, prosperity in each and every walk of life and unconditional understanding...

Finally, Raman filled vermillion in Ishu's parting... marking the new phase they had at last entered. As Raman filled Ishu's maang with the sindoor.. a tear rolled down her cheek.. she felt bliss.. she had the most loving husband... her mind traced back to three months earlier when she had become so ill and unfortunately Amma-Appa both had to visit Ishu's Paati's funeral; at that time it was Raman who had stayed with her all day and night taking care of her: giving her medication from time to time, preparing soup for her, not letting her get out of bed for even a second only 2 to 4 times in an entire day that too dropping her till the very door of her washroom... He continued the same routine for 2 more days tirelessly...!! He got no sleep yet didn't complain even for a nano second... that was this man's love for her... she was blessed!!

She literally couldn't thank the Almighty enough for showering her with Raman.. he was a boon!!!

That's it dearies... should I continue or not

Precap: LEAP... Raman's death and Ishu finding out about her pregnancy
Edited by umeirah02 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Updte was wonderful..
Enjoy al ishra moments...
Lyk d protective side of Raman..
Den full day out masti...
Leap so soon..?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi di. it was so beautiful update. loved the each and everyart of this update. whether that was Raman's caring and protective nature towards ishu or whether their beautiful 3 yrs of park. I have seriously no words to explain its beauty

u really explained the each and every ritual of marriage very much perfectly. I can visualise each and every scene. the wedding rituals are always emotional, reminded me my di wedding, my eyes also became moist when she was performing these all rituals.

frankly I am not happy that in next update Raman will be died but we can't help it as it is concept and ya I understood, rajeev is one who killed Raman, I guess!

will wait for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarohi26

hi di. it was so beautiful update. loved the each and everyart of this update. whether that was Raman's caring and protective nature towards ishu or whether their beautiful 3 yrs of park. I have seriously no words to explain its beauty

u really explained the each and every ritual of marriage very much perfectly. I can visualise each and every scene. the wedding rituals are always emotional, reminded me my di wedding, my eyes also became moist when she was performing these all rituals.

frankly I am not happy that in next update Raman will be died but we can't help it as it is concept and ya I understood, rajeev is one who killed Raman, I guess!

will wait for next part...

thank you choti behna!!!! Actually, yeh part mera bhi favourite hai... there's a weird connect I find with it!! I'm glad I could infuse all those emotions within you, I'm overwhelmed, really!! Well... even I don't want to kill Raman but something is really tempting me to write this story. I hope tu aagle update bhi itna hi pasand kare gi; it's gonna be one rollercoaster ride!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

Updte was wonderful..

Enjoy al ishra moments...
Lyk d protective side of Raman..
Den full day out masti...
Leap so soon..?

yaa even I love this side of Raman; reminded me of Raman's dialogue "biwi ho tum meri" 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
thank you so much!! Even this one word comment means the world to me!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unique plot and nicely written.
Please update soon and pm me.

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