Adhoori Mohabbat SS Discontinued - Page 2

Originally posted by: umeirah02

Oh I know that feeling your talking about..
But darling you just have to believe in your work!... The forum is filled with wonderful readers, they will be appreciating yours efforts for sure! 😊

As for the murderer , I'm going to say either Subbu or Shagun 😳

Originally posted by: Viji15

Oh I know that feeling your talking about..
But darling you just have to believe in your work!... The forum is filled with wonderful readers, they will be appreciating yours efforts for sure! 😊

As for the murderer , I'm going to say either Subbu or Shagun 😳

acha... chalo dekhe gein... stay tuned!! ... thank you AGAIN for the kind words!!

Puttar main ki soch rahi si ke chath mangni phath vyah karlende aan. Tera ki khayaal hai?
(son I was thinking why not we opt for marriage immediately after your engagement)

Thohaanu baari jaaldi aai nu laan di! Nu teh sas di vakhri hi mohabbat haigi! Changa hai... mera hi faida hai! Mummyji jis gal wich tohaadhi khushi hai tussi woh hi karo!! Mainu teh bas maaze lene ne... Shaadi vyah koi roz teh nahi honde rehnde...!!

Amma had gone to the bank to take out her jewellery for Ishu that she had deposited in the locker for Ishu's wedding. Amma wanted to make this occasion as special as possible. Appa was no different... he wanted the best of everything... food, decor, music and everything. Ishu & Raman's wedding had to be perfect; to begin with engagement...!!

Ishu was out shopping for her attire with Miku. It had been 3 hours and she just wasn't able to make a choice. Then when she remembered her chat with Raman on the phone the other day... she thought she'll wear maroon as he had also decided for the same colour! Now they would be colour coordinated.

Excitement had reached it's peak as today was their engagement... they would commit to spend the rest of their life as one unit.

The engagement's venue was Ishu's society's community hall. The entire society had gathered... everyone was just too happy! Raman & Ishu exchanged rings amidst the claps' of the thrilled family and society member's. Two souls would soon entwine into one...!! They felt content & complete... sleep was a lost cause today

Raman dialled Ishu's number and they chatted the whole night away

Ghazab dhah rahi thi aaj tum... you were looking gorgeous, by God!!

Aap bhi koi kam nahi lag rahe teh..!!

Woh toh mein hamesha lagta hoon... koi aisi baat bataon naa joh main nahi jaanta

Acha woh... Raman... I was thinking ke shaadi hum Punjabi style mein kartein hain... what say you?

Ishita yaar tum iklauti beti ho Amma Appa ki unke bhi koi dreams honge tumhe leke!

Aap bhi toh iklaute hi hain... acha let's do 50-50 ki deal... Subah hum karenge South Indian way mein aur phir shaam ko Punjabi... Waise soch lijiye... jitna aasaan lagta hai... utna hai nahi!

Koi nahi.. teri mohabbat mein itna toh waajib hai hi!! I don't mind Madrasan

I love you!!

I love you too Madrasan... chal ab so jaa!! Bye

hi di. sorry for late rely. got your pm in morning. thank you for pm and congratulations for new story but I am also waiting for your another story update. now back to story

first, I loved the title a lot. perfectly suiting with the storyline and theme. now tell me one thing, aapne kya decide kiya hua hai ki apni had story mein Raman bakre ko halaal karogi? pehli wli story mein bhi yahi hua, isme bhi yahi but koi nahi I am more interested in ishra romance but I am sad that ramqn will not with her and baby. want to cry

now back to love story. OK so it WS first meet and the both have love at first sight!!! sahi hai. I always loved the love between couples after arrange marriages. you explained the all journey very beautifully. just loved it

now their engagement, maroon color????? waise I didn't have problem with color but maroon reminded me KarAnkita Roka ceremony. he he don't bash me,just shared my first reaction but overall I liked the story and waiting for next part.

waise Raman ko kisne maara,yeh guess karna bada easzy hai, usko aapne maara hai because yeh dimag ki upaj hai aur !the yeh bhi samjh aa gaya ki aapse zyada updates kaise likhwaani hi. writing for next part. continue soon

Originally posted by: aarohi26

hi di. sorry for late rely. got your pm in morning. thank you for pm and congratulations for new story but I am also waiting for your another story update. now back to story

first, I loved the title a lot. perfectly suiting with the storyline and theme. now tell me one thing, aapne kya decide kiya hua hai ki apni had story mein Raman bakre ko halaal karogi? pehli wli story mein bhi yahi hua, isme bhi yahi but koi nahi I am more interested in ishra romance but I am sad that ramqn will not with her and baby. want to cry

now back to love story. OK so it WS first meet and the both have love at first sight!!! sahi hai. I always loved the love between couples after arrange marriages. you explained the all journey very beautifully. just loved it

now their engagement, maroon color????? waise I didn't have problem with color but maroon reminded me KarAnkita Roka ceremony. he he don't bash me,just shared my first reaction but overall I liked the story and waiting for next part.

waise Raman ko kisne maara,yeh guess karna bada easzy hai, usko aapne maara hai because yeh dimag ki upaj hai aur !the yeh bhi samjh aa gaya ki aapse zyada updates kaise likhwaani hi. writing for next part. continue soon

koi baat Nahi at least you read it!! & thank you meri tareef ke liye... I know it also reminded me of their engagement but then I thought why no go ahead with it...

Sorry don't know ur real name...

story was very good

awsome updated but raman ke bina ishia
continue soon

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

Sorry don't know ur real name...

I loved it a lot...

D story is very much interesting .. And so many parts at once..

I enjoyed it lot..

Plz updt nxt part soon nd pm me

dear my name is Umeirah! Waise what's your name? Thank you... I'll definitely update soon & PM you as well!!

Originally posted by: umeirah02

dear my name is Umeirah! Waise what's your name? Thank you... I'll definitely update soon & PM you as well!!