Nothing will change between us: 'Samajdaar ko ishara kafi' Prt 4 Pg 18

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: yhmfflover
Nice piece of writing...
Looks like a love story for DivAn

Bechare Karan ki engagement mat tudwa dena 😆

Continue soon...

@bold: Definitely not...title dhyan se padho...again I will say samajhdaar ko ishara kaafi

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Akshatha

@Akshatha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

wow just amazing...

lovely concept and loved the title too, the progress the story is beautifully started

i liked the point the way of the girl thinking, not using the name of character...

the way u wrote the distraction n solution, reason for it, her anger , his answer just perfect yaar...

loved the last line esp wink and smile❤️...

well written👏👏...

looking forward for next update...

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arshi_f

@arshi_f

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow looks like a love story of divan plzzz continue soon eagerly waiting for the next update

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Oohhooo wah wahhh! Kyaaa baatt haiii! I loveee thiss wayy too muchhh! I had ths grin plastered on my face reading the whole thing. Omg! The end was supercute! Extremely different people, but knows to care each other in different way!

Cont soonnn... Chaar Kadam bhi... :-D ;-)

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Srujana

@Srujana7.MaNan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Aww this was so cute, seems realistic. Please continue.

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Yesss...please continue!!! I love your writing...it always draws me in! Can't wait for the next update...this one was so sweet!!😃

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: avni_19
Oohhooo wah wahhh! Kyaaa baatt haiii! I loveee thiss wayy too muchhh! I had ths grin plastered on my face reading the whole thing. Omg! The end was supercute! Extremely different people, but knows to care each other in different way!

Cont soonnn... Chaar Kadam bhi... :-D ;-)

I think i had the same GRIN on my face!!😃