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@nrn1486amazing piec n such a cute os
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Thanks for PM.
First of all,Congratulations Little Sister,Vidya Prasad for became Glodie. 😊
I'm sorry My Little Sister for Late Comment,Busy with My Studies,Please Forgive me...😭
This Os was just Awesome,I Loves it.😊
It was Ishita Birthday and Ramn wanted to surprise her,it was so interesting.😊
Raman Kisses on her Forehead and wishes her while she was sleeping,it was so Cute.😳
The way Raman teasing Ishita was so cute.😳
At the end of this Part,Ishra Love Moments and their conversation was so Beautiful.😳
The Whole Os was So Beautifully explained,I Likes it.😳
Please Write Like this on Ishra and Pm to me, Sister.😊
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Damn wid my exams. Couldnt find time to read. Just now i read it and i must say that it is a wonderful update espcly selfie part n sending gifts through muthu. No words to appreciate to ur work. It is superb yaar. Plz update the next part soon n thank u for the PM.
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Today I got my life...
Hey friends

Hope u enjoy the reading

Sorry for the mistakes

Pic no.34

Ishra room

Raman:ishita...

Ishita:kyaa?

Raman:kuch nahi...mere matlab hai...

Ishita:toh bolona

Raman:voh kal ki din kuch special hai kya?

Ishita:nahi toh aapko special hai kya

Raman:nahi...date yaad haina

Ishita:hmmm 23 nov haina

Raman:ha...{in low voice}sab kuch yaad hothi par yeh nahi...

Ishita:kuch kaha aapne

Raman:nothing...aise goorke kyu dekrahihu

Ishita:kuch nahi ...let go down sab khane keliye intizaar karahi honghi

Raman:{angrily}hmmm chalthi hu

Ishita:full time gussa

In dining table

Toshi:raman itni gusse mei kyu hai?phirse jakda hua hai kya?ishita bol

Ishita:kuch nahi mummyji voh toh hamesha aise hona...

Raman:ha mein toh hamesha aisa hu agar biwi aise mili toh insaan aise hi honghi

Bhalla:oh ab tumme ishitase problem hai?

Romi:babhi ne kya kiya?

Raman:usne kuch nahi kiya...

Mihir:toh kya?

Raman:usse kuch yaad nahi hoti

Ishita:mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai...yeh apne bolrahihu...u know mihir bhai ka file ,phone,lap.aur nahi toh kya pant bhi bulaakar hi office jaathi hai aur ek mein usse sab yaad karthi hai aur ab bolrahi hu mujhe kuch yaad nahi hoti

Raman:yeh sab tummme yaad hoti par joh zaroori hai voh nahi

Ishita:toh yeh sab zarooori nahi ta

Toshi:bas kar dhono...raman tum bol ishitane kya bula hai

Raman:I am sure joh mein kehna jaarahi hu voh aaplogoko yaad hoti sivayi yeh manthbuthiko

Ishita:manthbuthi?

Rinky:toh bolo kya hai ?

Raman;u know kal nov 23 hai

Ruhi:toh kya papa?

Raman:toh kya hai papa???tumko yaad nahi hai

romi:mujhe bhi nahi hai kal kya hai

raman:kissiko bhi nahi hai

everyone:nooo

ishita:dekha sirf mujhe nahi kissiko bhi yaad nahi hai

toshi:mujhe yaaad hai

raman;dekha mummyko yaad I was sure mummy nahi bulunghi

toshi:birthday..

raman happy

toshi:birthday..kal pammiki betiki betake birthday...I mean potheka

ishita:ayyo murgan mein toh buligaya acha hua mummyji aapne yaad kardiya...kal kuch gift kareedna hai,,,raman apko yeh seedha bolna chahiyathi...

Raman:hmmm next time aisa nahi karunghi...

Everyone goes from there

Raman:sabko pammi auntika potheka birthday yaad hai par mera nahiii

Ishita:kuch bola

Raman:nahi toh ...agar bola bhi toh tumko kya jaa pammi auntika potheke birthday teyaari kar

Ishita:{smiles}raman chale mujhe bahuth neend arahi hai

Raman:mere ankhoki saath hai kya tum sorahi hu?

Ishita:kyu?

Raman:toh mujhe kyu bularahihu...jaa jakar sojaa

Ishita:hmm good night...

Raman:{himself}ishita I really wish tum pehale wishkare,special giftdhe ..par tumme toh yaad nahi haina ...sach mei yaar mujhe bahuth dukhhoraha hai{wipes tears}...

In ishra room

Ishita:{herself}I am really sorry raman I know mere yeh behavior se aap kush nahi hai and I wish sabse pehale mein wishkaru par mein kya karu...

In morning

In kitchen

simmi:so excited hmm kya baath hai

ishita:mera pati ka birthday haina ...
Ishita:simmii... raman sabse bahuth naaraz hai

Simmi:hmm kal toh bhaika moo dekhne layak thi...par sab uskeliye haina...par tumme patha haina bhai toh birthday celebrate karna pichle 6 saalse hi chodthiya par iss saal mujhe yakeen nahi horaha hai bhai birthday ki baaremei humse baathkara hi hai

Ishita:ha simmi mujhe toh yaad hai mein toh usiki office chaala uss time meine ek employee usse birthday wishkiya hooo bichara wo employeeko ramanne kitna suna diya..

Simmi :bhai badli hai ...tumhaari vajase

Toshi:hoyiii tum dhono baath karke kada hai kya kuch kaam bhi toh karo mere ramanki birthday hai

Simmi:ha mummyji

Ishita: decoration karna chahiya na ab

Simmi:ha

Mihir:babhi bhai roomse bahar ayi toh sab gadbad honghi

Ishita: meine usse roome lock kiya...

Mihir:make sure bhai bahar nahiavunghi

Ishita:ya

Ruhi:ishimaaa mein kya karna hai

Shravan:ha bolo chitti hum kya karna hai

Romi:2no yaha avo aur mujhe decoration mei help kar

Ruhi and Shravan:ha

In ishra room

Raman;uff 8'o clock yeh madrassan bhina ...kaha chali voh...ishitaaa...ishitaaa

Simmi:bhai uttkaya

Ishita:speed karrr yaar varna raaavan kumar kissiko bhi sukoon nahi doonghi

In room

Raman:subah subah kidar chali sab voh bhi mujhe lock karke koyi bhahar hai room toh kolo yaar romiii,papa,mama...errr sab pammi auntiki potheka birthday celebretionmei...pehale meri birthday boola ab mujhe...kya hokaya sabkooo...

Romi:babhi sab hokaya

Ishita:neelu bhaika door open karo dyaanse usko patha nahi chahiye taki kissine uska room kola haii

Neelu;ha bhabi

Neelu goes and opens the door

Raman:aajmei yeh door todthunka{he hits the door}yeh kya hua itni asaanise...anyays door toh open hui thank god...gharmein andhera kyu hai...aaj sunbhi anekeliye booolgaya hai kyaaa...

Raman:uff...switch kaha hai yaar kuch bhi dikana rahi hu

Slowly a light comes

Raman:light...koun hai...

Ishita:romi yeh work kyu nahi horaha hai

Romi:patha nahi mein dekthihu

Raman:koyi awaaz arahi hai...chorrr

Suddenly a video start play it was a presentation made by whole bhalla and iyer family

Ishita:raman yaha waha kya dekrahihu...?gussa arahi hai kya

Raman:nahi mujhe mazzaa arahaaa hai ...paakal

Ishita:mujhe patha hai aap ab kuch bak bak karunghi but it is recorded so I can't answer you

Raman:shukar haii...

Simmi:bhai tu kya bak bak karahi hu tumme kya laktha hai humko aajki din yaad nahi

Raman:nahi laktha hai.. potheki birthday

Romi:zaroor ab bhai ne kaha hoka pummy auntika potheka birthday

Raman:aur nahi hai toh kya

Bhallaji:par yeh nahi hai

Appa:kuch aur hai...

Raman:{little happy}toh kya?

Toshi:tumme nahi bata?

Mihir:kal toh humko sukoonbhi nahi deharaha ta kal ki dinki baaremei poochkar

Bala:aur ab patha bhi nahi hai

Rinky:yeh toh bass drama karahi hu

Vandhu:ha sure usse ab bilkul patha chalkayi honghi

Amma:sorry raman meine kahi baar bola aisa kuch nahi karni chahiye

Mihika:it's ok perimma dekho jeeju surprised and he is so happy haina jeju

Ramn:kya mein sochrahihu wahi

Shravan:ha yeh toh bilkul tubelight hai aise kyu dekrahi hu mujhe yakeen hai u will be confused

Ruhi:sorry papa meine apse choot bola

Everyone:aise kyu dekrahihu hum sabko yaad hai aaj humari kud kud kumarki birthday hai...happy birthday to u happy birthday to our dear raman happy birthday...

Unknowingly a drop of tear goes from his eyes ...

Slowly slowly the light was coming

Ruhi:offo papa birthday ki din bhi rotha hai

Raman:look to the screen

Ruhi:papa wahase nahi yaha

Raman takes her in arms

Raman:ruhi meri bachiii

Ruhhi:aapko acha nahi lakha yeh sab

Raman:bahuth achalaka

Ruhi:then why r u crying?

Raman:it is not because I am sad it is because I am happy...

Ruhi:oh bathothomei mein wishkarna boolgayi happy birthday papa

Raman:thank u

Ruhi:and yeh aapkeliye

Raman:wow it's beautiful

Shravan:raman chittappa happy birthday and yeh aapkeliye

Raman: beautiful watch aajse mein yahi pehnungha

Shravan: I am so happy because u likes this gift

Everyone wishes him and give gifts, he was waiting for ishita's gift, last ishita came but he couldnot see any gift with her

Ishita:raman app

Raaman:ma,amma sab lok avona cake cuttathihu

Raman was going to cut the cake but romi stops

Romi:aise kaise cuttunghi bhabi bhaika hath pakdo aur saath mei karo

Raman:errr mera birthday hai mein akele karunghi

Romi:kuchbhi bolo saath mei hi cuttunghi

Ishita catches hand raman got so irritated

Ishita:smile karo yaar birthday hai

Raman:mujhe nahi karna hai shmileee

Romi:first piece bhabiko

Raman:bhabi ko nahi first piece kissi ki vajase mein yaha hu meri maa

Simmi:toh papako bhi dho uska bhina...

Toshi:chupkar besharam

He gives everyone when it comes to ishita he goes from there

Mihika:don't worry akka jeeju apse kuch expect karahi thi and u don't

Ishita:mujhe koyi worries nahi hai mihiku I don't know what he is expected from me ...but I will try my best to make haim hope ramanko pasand avo

Mihika:wow akka that means u have planned something for jeeju hmmm

Romi:something nahi mihika bahuth kuch...

Ishita:chup...mein zara ramanki paas akar dekthihu

Whenever ishita going near to raman ,he was ignoring her

Romi:hello everyone aaj mera bhika birthday hai and I have planned a dinner ...

Raman:mera bhai toh kaafi badi hogayi kya baath hai...anyways thank u

They hugged

Ishita:thank u romi

Romi:kyu?

Ishita:mera kaam asaan karne keliye

Romi smiles

Ishra's room

Ishita:raman aap aisa kyu karahi hu jab mein aapki paas athihu aap mujhe avoid karahi hai it is not done raman

Raman:mein ignore nahi karahi hu dektha nahi I am busy issliye

Ishita:oh aisa hai toh ab free huna ab baath karthi hu

Raman:ab mein toh free nahi hai party keliye jaana hai so I have to get ready ...

Ishita:{herself}raavan kumar ...kuch special hai aapkeliye baas kuch dheer intizaar kar

Raman:ho madam daath kyu dikaarahi hu ja jakar teyyar hoja

Ishita:hmm

Evening in restaurant

Bala:kissko doondrahi hu tu

Raman:kissiko toh nahi

Mihir:choot math bol bhai

Bala:ishita ko dekrahi hu na

Raman:haa kaha hai paakal

Romk:aapse naraaz hai

Raman:mujhse kyu?

Mihir:aapne bhabiko ignore kiya

Raman: mein ignore kiya kyu ki usko mere koyi parwa nahi hai

Bala:aisa math bol yaar

Raman:tum sabko kya patha hai yaar...meine na kya kuch expect kiyana usse par voh toh mujhe kuch nahi diya...

Romi:shayad boolgaya hoki bahuth busy haina

Raman:apne patiko gift dhena bhula?u know voh sabka birthday ko cake banathi hai par mereliye voh order kiya

Bala:chodo yaar...patha hai ishu galath ki par ab bahuth sad hai

Raman:toh mein kya karu?

Mihir:gharjao aur bhabi ko maaaf bolo

Raman:sab bhabika chamcha hi hai

Raman goes to home

Raman:ab yeh madrassanko kaise manavu yaar ?yaha diknahi rahi hai..shayadroom mei honghi...

Outside room near the door

Raman:aaj tumhari koyi galathi bhi nahi hai raman saara galathi madrassanki hai aur maafi manghna pada

He slowly opens the door

He could see small candle, when the door fully he could see room was full of candle and there was many photo of him and a big card ,it was a hand made card

Raman takes it

Raman:to my dear raavan kumar...{smiles} aap deksaktha yeh koyi birthday card nahi it is sorry card...sorry my dear I know I have done wrong thing acha nahi kiya meine aapse choot bola and u was waiting for my wish and u wish I should wish u first but I couldn't and I hope woh purana hokayana wishing first time when the clock stuck 12 and I hope nahi yeh nahi karungha kuch alak karungh,kyu ki hum alak haina ...once more sorry raman mein aapse jhoot bola and I break our rules that we should not hide anything and lie between as I was so tensed to lie par mein socha aapki gushi keliyena so let it be

Raman:thank u meri jkr par tu hai kaha

Suddenly he noticed an another card

Raman:ek aur bhi...kya baat hai

He takes in his hand

Raman:wow it isbeautiful

It was a collash with his photo

Raman,

U know one thing raman today is my most fav day because today u borned and I got my jaan

Thank u ...

Mujhe aapse kuubsaare thank u kehna hai ...

First one meri zindaki mein ane keliye...

Mujhe ruhi ki ishima banekeliye...thank u raman meine kabhi nahi socha mein maa bansakthi hu par it becomes possible because of u

Meri pariwaarko sambaalne keliya u have done a lot of things to my family raman .thank u

U know raman mein toh jeena hi bhuldiyatha par jabse mein aapki zindaki mein aya na tabse hi mein samaj gayi what is life...thank u so much for u done for me in

Ishita:happy birthday raman

Raman:ishita

He was not able to say anything he was mesmiresed by her beauty,she was wearing a red transparent saaree which was gifted by him

Ishita:raman happy bithdayyy

Raman was not telling anything, he was criying

Ishita:raman kuch toh boliye aapko yeh sab pasand nahi aur yeh saree mujhe match nahi hai ramannn

Raman ran to her and hugged her

Raman;thank u ishita mere birthdaty ittna special banana keliye...thank u so much meri zindaki mein ane keliye agar tum nahi hota I am sure aisa birthday meri zindaki mei nahi hota ,first time I am getting special gift which I can never get with any cost from any shop thank u

Ishita:I am so happy raman aapko yeh sab achalaga thank u meri zindaki mein anekeliye and giving me chanceto make a beautiful day

She kissed raman on forehead

Raman:meintoh yahi ki socha {pointing towards the lips}

Ishita:cake cutte

Raman:one moreee

Ishita:specialy made for my raavan kumar ...

They cut the cake and feed each other they were so happy

Raman:meine ek gift mansakthihu tujse?

Ishita:of course raman

Raman:mana math karna

Ishita:ok bolo what u want?

Raman:tumme

Ishita:mujhe? Meintoh apki hi huna

Raman:ya par not in all angle I need u...not for just night but for all night till we alive and not for just for nights...

Isita:yes raman I am urs and make me urs in all angle

raman goes to kiss on her lips but suddenly bell rang

raman:uff abhi bhi no change in this kabhi mein tumhari paas attohu tabi koyina koyi ajathi hai

ishita:mein dekthihu

raman:mujhe kaam adhoora karna pasand nahi so yeh pura karke jaa

he kissed her for a long time bell was ringing but they were not interested to open the door they both enjoying their kiss the most passionate...

Hope u enjoyed

Sorry for mistakes

Please comment...please it means a lot to me

does it matches the pic?

Thank u

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Thanks for all your response for my last os. If you haven't read it here is the link:

My heart beats for you: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4326604/picosthon-39-oses-catch-up-with-the-ones-u-hv-missed

Thanks for pallavi di for giving me this opportunity and to all of you who are spending your time to read. Hope you'll like it. Here I am with a TS. I have chosen pic. 66 and pic. 1.

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Churliya he tumne jo dil ko nazar nahi churana sanam

He pulled me towards him holding my arm. My breathes got hitched, my heart started beating faster, there were butterflies in my stomach, my mind stopped working. I was lost in him. He was so handsome with the most beautiful eyes ever, a cute nose, curved lips and light stubble finishing his perfect look. He enchanted me like no other person could ever. He made me feel those feelings which I never felt for any man. Murugan! What is he doing to me?

Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko, najar nahee churaana sanam

Badalke meree tum jindagaanee, kahee badal naa jaana sanam

Oh le liya dil oh hai meraa dil, hai dil lekar mujhako naa behlaana

Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko, najar nahee churaana sanam

Badalke meree tum jindagaanee, kahee badal naa jaana sanam

He uttered in his sexy voice' Ms. Ananya, behtar hoga agar tum meri zindagi mein zyaada dilchaz lena band karogi' this time looking into my eyes and I was lost in those deep chocolate brown eyes. As he said the line, I came into consciousness and said, Mujhe aapke zindagi mein koyi dilchaz nahi he Mr. Rajeev.' He looked into my eyes as I looked into his and we had an eyelock again.

We pulled apart and headed our ways.

***

I was sitting in my room thinking about the recent things. We hated each other like anything before we fell for each other and that hate also had a passion. Pure hatred, it was because we were too different, but our intentions were always same, only our ways of solving things were different. He was rude, a insensitive jerk back then and I hated him for that. Something pulled me towards him, but my hatred took over it. Slowly, I started to see his caring side and I could see that he had a good heart and had a problem only in expressing that goodness. I started to help him, help him come out of his shell. Shagun had betrayed him telling that she loved him, he married her and within a month of marriage he had come to know that she was cheating on him and that had made me the way he was. So, I slowly started to help him by showing that the whole world is not the way he was thinking and showed him that love still existed and in this process fell in love with him. Even, he loved me and we married and were living a beautiful life.

And that is when my past entered, Subbu, my ex-lover who had left me at the altar after knowing I was infertile. He created misunderstandings between me and my husband and he succeeded in separating us. After, six months my ex-husband came in front of me. He still did not believe me and neither I made any attempt to make him believe because trust is the base of any relationship and he didn't trust me. I didn't know what does the future hold in store for us?

Before, I could go into more thoughts I heard my amma's voice and went to her.

Amma- Ishu zara aana.

***

I lied on the bed thinking about her. She stole my heart. But does she love me? Ofcourse no Raman, what do you think? That she loves after all that happened? No. She doesn't. Only you love her. I didn't what does future hold in store for me? But, why can I see love in her eyes?

Before, I could go into more thoughts I heard my mom's voice and went to her.

Toshiji-Raman zara yaha aana.

***

Here I end the first part of my Ts. Now think what relation do Rajeev and Ananya have with Raman and Ishita. I'll update the next part tomorrow.

Thanks for spending your time in reading this. Hope you liked it. Please comment.Apperciations and Criticism is welcome.

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Link to part 2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/121625442

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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@Karanlaksh lovely OS dear.
Raman was super cute.
Maine ishita ka birthday manaya aur aapne raman ka. Yeah atleast yaha to huva
loved it.
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@karanlaksh amazing os yaar loved it
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Karanlaksh,It was So Lovely OS.😊
The Whole Os was So Beautifully explained.😊
Please write like this ON Ishra and Pm to me,I am waiting here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww ...sweet n beautiful update

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