New Ishra SS: Muskurane ki Wajah Tum Ho....(chapter 16 on page 137) - Page 89

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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all the parts in a go and its amazing.
i loved the way u write. Keep writing and thanks for the pm *hugs*
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 13

Both were out enjoying the rains, a nice romantic dinner and his thoughts about orphaned kids comparing it with their is so true. Really felt for both of them in the very beginning. but glad both are their for each other understanding and of course their relationship is shaping beautifully

Thanks for giving us such tiny tiny moments and making this story a memorable one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 14

Oh my the rain fun continues and turned just romantic and EEKKKSSS when both started playing with mud. The two would look ☺️ .

Oh god ..!! I really want this scene to play out in the show but it's not happening. So I shall be happy with your version and imagine IshRa. Loved the final realization. I mean not really there but almost they are realizing their feeling in a steady way.

Mihika 🤣🤣. Glad Mihir dragged her away in his own style warna she would have been the haddi in your story 😡.

Really cute update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 15

Awwwieee the morning scene 😳😳. both wanted the smile to never leave their face. Such a poise scene . Raman and his one liners. were just too good.

Yaar ..!! What is their problem. As in parents. I mean she is studying and what's the harm in that. Annoying people, keep shouting for everything and anything. I hope they change soon 😕.

She wanted to stay in his embrace and he kissed her forehead . Too cute 😃.

Loved it and yes will try commenting on time from now on.

Thank you for all the Pm and scraps 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii arohi...
That was amazing update. I loved it Raman took stand for ishitaa , , going against her parents and his parents was best...
I hate both bhalla s and iyers😡...how can they do like this...loved this song...one of my fav...na kuch manga ...this one is my fav...
Loved it
Continue soon. Kya yar itni late update.
Waiting for next
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm sorry for late comment,Internet Problem,Please Forgive me...😭
It was Very Interesting Part.😊
The Night part was so Cute.😊
The song was so Nice.😊
It was so Nice that Raman stands for Ishita,I likes it.😊
The Whole Story was so Interestingly explained.😊
Please update Next part soon.😊
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update
loved raman support for ishita
it was soo cute ishra convo
it was super continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

RES

first res for the first time...so i thought i should unres ASAP

Ya...even I was also surprised and then happy also. 😊

first of all hugs Aarohi 🤗🤗🤗...hope you are doing better now

Haan baba, I am better now. Nothing to worry and thanks for these cute hugs 🤗

the length of the update got me dancing even before reading 🤣

Kya di aap bhi na...

well the night scene was beautiful and so romantic...it happens so many times where couple doze off to sleep looking at each other but here it was something different...first she slept while looking at him and then he specifically woke up and slept back looking at her...such a cute connection...you wrote that part really well 👏👏👏

Thank you...thank you maine yeh wala part na phir se aiwae hi likha tha, mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap log itna appreciate karoge 😳 thank you for liking this one again

the morning was so chirpy 😊😊😊

Haan ishita ki battery charged Jo thi😉

but i still cannot believe he chose clothes for her...trust me men are very bad at doing that...like they can shop for you really well but when it comes to suggesting what to wear they are not the best option to look upto but him choosing for her was cute...😳

muskurati hui bahut achi lagti ho 😳

Hain?????? Sacchi? Waise mujhe iss baare mein koi idea nahi hai but I think you are rite. Mere papa bhu mumma ki liye shopping toh kar let's hai but cloth selection ke time baahar pehenne ke liye, his face became like this 🤢 waise iss baare mein aapko zyada pata hoga na 😉 ek baat batao aapke Zaalim ji ka bhi yahi reaction hota hai kya?

Mrs. shataabdi...appointment letter koun lega? 🤣

Bhai one liners ke bina toh baat hi mat karo na. Tabhi toh tragedy mein bhi comedy ho jaati hai😆

beta biwi se puchte nahi...khud hi biwi ka saaman utha lete hain...koi sikhao yaar ise

Are naya naya hai na, I mean trainee hi toh hai. Dheere dheere seekh jaaega. Woh kehte hai na experience and practise make a man perfect

the small teasing session about food was cute 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Thank you actually it was kind of relief before dhamaaka 😆

daimaa is so loving...and u penned down that aarti scene very well...so cute

😳😳 Itni taareef mat karo baba, koi khaas special those tha

Appa and his parents 😡

Woh toh hai hi real villains but don't worry unko sudhaarne ka maine kuch socho hai. Jaldi hi hint doongi. I hope u ppls will like that also

but in a way i like them...only if they didnt hurt her he would have not taken this bold step and opposed them for her...i really liked how he stood up for her...mere biwi hai main decide karunga 👏 any husband's first duty is to support in every mean and he surely lived upto it

Haan woh toh hai. Jab tak kuch bohot zyada bura nahi hota tabtak tubelite bhi toh nahi jalti na. Frankly bolu toh mujhe bhi bohot bura lag raha tha yeh sab likhte hue but that was necessary so I penned it and I was so worried whether I will able to justice with it or not

her breakdown and his consoling section was just brilliantly done ...u know i am bad at commenting on sad parts but you did an excellent job with that section...right use of words and well enhanced emotions 👏

Thank u. Poocho mat bohot phat rahi thi meri woh part likhte waqt. Sirf yahi reason hai ki yeh part delay hua

Na kuchh puchha na kuchh maanga, tune dil se diya jo diya
Na kuchh bola na kuchh tola, muskura ke diya jo diya
Tu hi dhup tu hi chhaaya, tu hi apana paraya
Aur kuchh na janu, bas itna hi janu
Tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu
Sajde sar jhukta hai, yaara main kya karu

these lines stole my heart ❤️ more than the movie these lines fit in here in ur update

Sacchi????? Thank you di. Yeh gaana na randomly likhte waqt hi mere mind mein aaya and I also thought that this one is perfect for situation so I add it. 👏🤗 Yeh aapke liye

the cute happy ending was again really nice

Thank you petal Didi 😊

i just can't wait to read ahead Aarohi...do update soon but yes most importantly take care of ur health

Even I can't wait for next part, will start to write tonight and soon post it and don't worry I am completely fine😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for unres re. take your own time
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: smilesforever98

Res...

I'm really behind, got to catch up on 3 updates!

hi prabh, I was waiting for your reviews and glad to see you back. take your time. we will wait for your reviews

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