New Ishra SS: Muskurane ki Wajah Tum Ho....(chapter 16 on page 137) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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good start yaar this ss Differ frm others ss...see ki ye story complete ho other ss ki jaise incomplete na rhe... amazing cncpt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rk654

good start yaar this ssDiffer frm others ss...see ki ye story complete ho other ss ki jaise incomplete na rhe... amazing cncpt

don't worry dear. I will complete this as. stay tuned. will update today
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hello everyone. thank you for your amazing response. I am completely overwhelmed by your responsed. updating 2nd part. waiting for your responses

next day in office

Raman was immersed in his Australia project when mihir entered in cabin with a box of laddooes and news paper

mihir:

mere bhai ki shaadi mein,abhi baaki hai din
saal beet gye yeah din bhi ho jaaenge paar
raman: mihir yeh kya shor macha rakha hai? kyon chilla raha hai tu? mujhe mera kaam karne de

mihir: ohhoo... tevar toh dekho inke, Abe ek toh tune mujhe btaaya nahi, an attitude maar raha hai.

Raman: mujhe konsa pata the? aur tu yeh kya gaana gaa raha hai

mihir: Jo hai wahi toh gasunga na,Teri shaadi hai hi 6 din ke baad

Raman: kya????? yeh tujhse kisne kaha?

mihir: kisne matlab kya?? newspapers ne. tujhe nahi pata kya?? uncleji ka statement aaya toh hai.

Raman: chalo shukr hai mujhe pata toh pada varna mujhe laga ki shaadi wale din hi bolenge.

mihir: ek minute, matlab tujhe sach mein Teri engagement ke baare mein nahi pata tha? aur tujhe is ladki me baare mein sacchi mein bhi kuch nahi pta?

Raman: bola na nahi. tujhe kya lag raha hai,main mazaak kar raha hun kya,then rqman narrated the whole incident to mihir. mihir was feeling so bad for his brother,he hugged him tightly and said," I am sorry bhai,but tune us ladki she baat ki?"

Raman: mujhe toh abhi tak uska naam hi nahi pata.

mihir: kya???? hadh hai yaar yeh toh. how could they be so roode with you? but tujhe usse baat toh karni hogi na,afterall tujhe uske saath poori life spend karni hai

Raman: nahi yaar,yeh shaadi surf ek deal hai,mom dad ke liye aur mere liye unke face ko smile aur woh ladki in sab ka source. I don't think ki main usko kabhi meri wife ka haq de paaunga

mihir: but Raman is me uski kya galti hai

Raman: jaanta hun ki uski koi galti nahi hai but mujhe hurt karne ka haq mom dad ke baad kisi teesre ko maim nahi we sakta

mihir: but bhai... they were arguing further when they saw Mr bhalla entering in cabin with a golden embroideried box and handed to Raman

Mr bhalla: I am sorry beta,actually yeh date bohot pehle hi decide ho gyi thi but main tumhe bataana hi bhool gaya the.yeh tumhaari wedding ka card hai, sabse exclusive aur expensive design hai Delhi ka,main aur tumhaari mom abhi invitations dene hi jaa rahe hai. mihir beta maine showroom mein baaat kar li hai tum raman ko wahan le jaao aur iske dresses cheak kar lo,size theek hai ya nahi. him log chalte hai

Raman: OK dad,jaisa aapko theek large

after leaving of Mr bhalla, Raman slumped down on chair dejectedly. sadness was clearly visible on his face. mihir placed his assuringn hand on ramans shoulder and said, " don't worry bhai sab theek ho jaaega,shaayad is me bhi much accha hi chupa hoga. chal showroom chale??" Raman nodded slowly and both friends departed to shop for trials.

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in iyyers home

ishita was sitting on bed,she was watching their old photo album,she caresssed their old photo of 10 years back, when she was 12 yrs old and her appa and amma used to pamper her a lot,when her father was working hard day and night for giving their business a new heights. they all were happy in their small world but that cruel day changed everything, she lost her amma in car accident. for her good upbringing, her father decided to get married again with her new mom shanaya who was a socialist. she never scolded her for anything,but she also never pampered her like a mother,her always showed her love with materialistic pleasures and they both husband wife busied themselves in their own world and in that world, there was no place for their daughter.
a drop of tear trickled down from her eye and she a gained hugged her mothers photo tightly. suddenly she heard a known voice and she controlled her tears and composed herself,it was voice of her college friend,mihika

mihika:"oye ishu,yeh kya locha hai? Teri shaadi fix ho gyi?"

ishita: meri shaadi? tujhse kisne kaha aur kab hai?

mihika: newspaper ne. uncle ka interview aaya hai ki teri shaadi hai 6 days me baad

ishita: dekh na kal meri engagement this aur mujhe engagement me 10 min pehle pata padha, chalo accha hai,shaadi ka toh pehle pata pad gayya

mihika: matlab tujhe yeh bhi nahi pata ki Teri shaadi kisse ho rahi hai aur Teri engagement?? tu mujhe sahi sahi bats kal hua kya that.

ishita narrated whole incident about her sudden engagement and how her parents fixed her marriage only because of their own profit. mihika eyes welled up in tears but very next minute anger rose in her eyes, she said, " ishu tu aise kaise kisi we bhi shaadi kar sakti hai? tu padhi lihki ladki hai. you should protest. tu ruk main uncle aunty se baat karti hun

ishita: nahi miku plz, mere liye appa aur mom ke khushi sabse zyada imp hai. agar woh khush hai toh main bhi khush hun

mihika: parr ishu...

ishita: nahi miku vaise bhi bina pyar me jeene ki aadat ho chuki hain mujhe,jaise yahan rehti hun vaise hi wahan reh loongi but tujhe pata hai mujhe ek satisfaction rahega ki kam se kam woh dono toh khush honge na. unki khushi me liye kuch bhi mihika

mihika hugged her friend and ishitas tears stated to pour from her eyes. mihika patted her back and consoled her. suddenly they heard shanaya voice and ishita composed herself

shanaya: gud morning ishu baby. tumne aur mihika he breakfast toh kiya na?

ishita: don't worry maa... sorry I mean mom. but aap yahan par kaise?

shanaya: oh main toh bhool gyi. ek minute. she commended her servants to bring stuffs in ishitas room. soon two servants brought a movable stand of designer clothes and placed in front of her. " ishu yeh lo rumba are designer clothes ka set. tumhare aur tumhare groom me kapde ek hi jagah we humne bnwaae hai,these are the most expensive wedding clothes,tum dekhna you will look outstanding on page3. mihika had dress par functions me labels large hai so please tum ishu trial mein help kar dena. dear mein parlour jaa rahi hun aur butisian tumhaare liye ghar par aaenge.
ishita: mom main woh pooch rahi this ki...

shanaya: bol na beta..

ishita: mom kya mein, woh... suddenly shanaya phone rang. it was her friend phone who was asking about ishita wedding and shanaya stared her praises and how much lakhs they spending on ishitas wedding

shanaya: tum dekhna yeh wedding Delhi ki sabse expensive aur royal wedding hogi. you have attend all functions. chal bye. and shanaya left room

mihika: kya lady hai yeh! isko surf apni padi hai. ek baar Teri baat bhi nahi sunk usne

ishita: chod na,dekh na woh kitni khush hai. aur unki khushi me meri khushi hai

soon wedding preparations started. every function was covered by media and was talk of town because of its royalty. they both were present in each function in similar and designer outfits,smiling or pretending to smile,posing with everyone but they were not looking at each other in fact they both not tried to talk with each other. its the night before their wedding. ishita was lying on her bed,fully exhausted with her mehandi and sangeet function. she was not happy with that marriage but still they have to pose with each and every guest. after whole 5 days she hear her husband name by his friend. she remembered how one of his husband friend commented," yaar Raman,Maine aaj se pehle itni pyaari jodi kabhi nahi dekhi. you both are truly made for each other types couple." they both smiled weakly and posed with them again.

ishita smiled on that comoment and said saractically, " Jo do strangers ko ek doosre ka naam shaadi we ek din pehle pata chale,woh do ajnabee kabhi bhi perfect couple nahi ban sakte" she looked at her mehandi which is giving dark maroon color and adorning her fair skin. on seeing her full length mehandi one of old lady comments rang in her ears," ishu beti,tumhe pata hai jis ladki ke mehandi ka color dark hota hai na,uska husband usko utna hi zyada pyaar karta hai" ishita closed her eyes and took a deep breath,"pta nhi murgun, meri life mein kya hai but mujhe us aadmi se each mein koi expectations nahi hai. sab kehne ki baatein hai. life mein jab apne hi apno se pyar nahi karte toh woh ajnabee mujhse kyon pyar karega?" ishita hugged her mothers photo and switched off the lamps and dozed off
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-in Raman bedroom

Raman condition was no less. comments of his friends and relatives were resonating in his ears. the comment of their panditji rang in his ears, " om beta,bohot kam kaise sundar jodiyan dekhne ko multi hai. dekhna inki jodi ka pyaar humesha badhta hi rahega" Raman laughed on panditji comment, " jab kokh jani maa aur khud ke papa ne hi aajtak apne sage bete par dhyaan nahi diya,usse pyaar nahi kiya toh yeh anjaan ladki!!! kabhi bhi nahi. him Dino ek doosre me liye bane hi nahi hai" Raman glanced on the local newspaper where his and his would be wife sangeet picture is printed with headline- Ishita and Raman,the new adorable and mesmerizing couple of town. on seeing this headline Raman crushed the paper and threw it away in anger. he switched off the light and dozed in sleep

will their assumptions will be come true aur destiny have some other plans for these two souls. to know more,stay tuned

waiting for your reviews and comments

Edited by aarohi26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one...
Chat mangni phat shaadhi ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is not right on Raman's part. Just because uske parents usse pyaar nahi karte he can't treat Ishu in the same manner. & what is this with Ishu ... she shouldn't be so concerned about her parents .. if they don't care .. even she shouldn't .. but genuinely this story is damn interesting Aarohi sweetheart..!!

Yeh dono ek doosre ko thang se jaante tak nahi yet life long ki commitment mein padhne wale hai .. that's what is so gripping. I'll really be so interesting to see how IshRa open up and let each other into their hearts.. Agar mujhe kahaani naa achi lage naa toh main skip kardeti hoon but this one is magical...

Brilliant concept and tujhe toh pata hi hai naa ke yeh kahaani main hamesha se padhna chahti thi.. in fact likhna bhi chahti thi but thanks to you I'm enjoying it instead of racking my brains .. Excellent job!! SACHI DIL SE 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excellent Job...
i am waiting for IshRa's first Ever Conversation...
Brilliant Work... And Realy Nice Concept..
Update Soon 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice work 😊
continue soon...
if possible pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey aarohi...
i just noticed this story... lovely yaar... great work... continue soon...both the updates were awesome...👏
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Hey bhagwan in dono ka kya hoga inhe toh naam bhi pata nahi the ek dusre ke ek din pehele patachale ...
If they will be hell ignorant towards each other how will it go well ...
Ek bar mile bhi nahi ...
Well seems like the dai maa of raman is going to play important roll only she can make them communicate with each other ...
It will be interesting to see how they will get to know about the emptiness in each other's life ...
Emotional update... ishita's part always makes my eyes wet ...raman's life is also tough but he has some support like dai maa who cares for him Atleast ...
Update soon
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Loving this FF! Looking forward to reading about them falling in love. What a brilliant plot!

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