New Ishra SS: Muskurane ki Wajah Tum Ho....(chapter 16 on page 137)

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pari

@divazfankau

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Posted: 10 years ago

#571

superb update
so file main ishita ka doctor baneka
dream nice I just loved raman's support
for ishita continue soon wating early

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#572

It is one of the awesome updates from you..

So beautiful and lovely..

Awesome yaar..

Raman standing for Ishita and fulfilling her dreams is so emotional..

Thanks for a brilliant update..😊😊

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rufana

@rufana10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#573

lovely update
raman is a supporting and caring husband
loved d dori part😳
ishita hugged raman...she is slowly falling 4 raman
raman is also falling 4 ishita..soon he will understand
his feelings towards ishita...
their relationship is progressing very nicely
update soon dear😊

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#574

Aarohi first of all sorry for this late comment...i was just held up with so many things..anyways how are you...and btw thanks for always pming me and letting me know about the update...i love you for that...coming to the update now

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so finally the secret of blue file is out...her certificate...i really liked Ishita's fears about Raman getting angry on her...we do feel that ways when we dont know the other person at all...their relation too has just started so they obviously dont know each other...that feeling of fear and not knowing him was brilliantly written

i also liked how he consoled her...the line ek baar mujhse kehke toh dekhti was so cute...he already expects her to have some rights on him and open her heart to him...possessive he is for her 👏👏👏

again how Ishita spoke her heart to him was very nice and the flashback was painful...i really hate her parents...mother is still step but father is real and he is worse than the step fathers

Raman telling Ishita to go ahead with her dreams was again so cute...in a relation it is so important to take care of your partner's dreams...he could not sleep whole night wanting to do something for her 😊😊

i liked Ishita's happy morning...thats how you feel when you have someone to share your feelings with

Raman's surprise 😳😳 he is so cute...setting her clothes and all

KBC nature 😆😆😆

haaye his sweet nothings...breakfast dori cooking for her that commanding voice 😳😳 everything is so lovely

Ishita slept in car 😆😆 itne hot pati ko chodke koi sota hai kya but pati is so naughty biwi ko chupke chupke dekh raha hai

eessshhh he took her to medical institute so so so beautiful...they walked hand in hand...she was not looking at the building but him and her heart filled with respect for him...i am in love with this part...Aarohi this is the most beautiful part till now

oh she already got the job...wonderful...bala vandu raman ke friends 😆😆😆

huggg...i felt like singing do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

how she was ready to give up her dreams for him as he might get scolded

he is ready to bear the scolding for her

the way she trusts him with her life

i dont know what to mention and what to leave

i liked everything about this part

sachi this was the best till now

Continue soon now Aarohi

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Shimla Akkineni

@Shimla532

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#575

Very emotional loved it. Hope they parents don't trouble them. Want ishRa love story too. Please update soon.

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#576

That was superb aru
Good to see raman fulfilling her wish.
the guy who never spoke to his parents regarding his own wishes,always followed their commands is ready to face their wrath for her dreams. Loved it

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad
Chalo mera bhi Res hai
waiting for update
unres

Oh... Toh yeh tha file main
Wow... Raman's so understanding hubby
Making her amma's dream come true ... That's really sweet
This update was damn good
loved it to the core

Ab next update jaldi se
i'm waiting
and yeah! This was my 2400th post 😆

chalo pehle toh tujhko congratulations for your completing 2400 post. ab agla dazzler celebration tera hi hoga 😃 thank you yaar for liking this part. this was in my mind from long time so I thought to pen it down. hey bhagwan!!!!! update jaldi????? abhi toh Maine kuch plan hi nahi kiya. I think it would take time

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Aahori,
Update was good. I especially liked the impromptu hug from Ishita.

Thanks for the English translation yaar. It is good

I do have one suggestion if you are using Hindi dialogue in between paragraph don't wait till the end of it to give the translation. Once you finish the Hindi dialogue put the English translation in bracket. It is only my suggestion.

hiii Maya di, I hope you are enjoying updates. that hug is aslso my favourite. actually I was going to describe it more briefly but the update was getting longer so I thought to elaborate in next part. actually your suggestion is good. it will be easy for readers to connect the story. I will did it from next time. thank you for suggestion

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1023427

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#579

sorry for not commenting in previous chapters but i love ur this ishra ss its really a beautiful and wonderful i read all ur parts and they all are very well and super amezngly written plz continue soon. And sorry once again.