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Originally posted by: nrn1486

Hey, you decided to continue the series.. Awesome!!

Loved the start.. Waiting eagerly now for all the action and romance!😃


Thanks will update tomorrow! 😉
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Cont soon...
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Originally posted by: ishu...

Cont soon...
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Ok will do 😉
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Hi everyone

Thank you so much for your lovely comments! Im so pleased you are all enjoying the story! I promise I will soon be bringing the action back but just laying out some feelers at the mo so you know whats going on😉

But I wont be revealing too much yet!

Anyway I hope you enjoy this installment too

Enjoy!




Part 3

57 Hours earlier...

Ishita stirred as the bright morning light peeked from between the blinds and teased her awake from her slumber. As she opened her eyes slowly, she blinked a few times before stretching her aching body and smiled, remembering the exertion she had endured during the early hours. Just then she felt the weight of an arm around her naked waist and looked at the naked man lying fast asleep next to her. He looked so cute and sexy while sleeping that she wanted to keep looking at him! But her erratic hormones were on full alert and her eyes were sending frantic signals to her body to pursue other forms of gratification! Ishita grinned at how lusty and insatiable in love she had become. Shyly she pulled the quilt over Raman before she became overwhelmed with desire and her attention was diverted to the things her brain was screaming for her to pursue!

Her gaze fell on the clock on the side wall and she realized the twins would be waking soon. She carefully removed Raman's arm so that she could get out of bed and taking her clothes out of her small travel case went to the bathroom to get ready to tackle the busy day ahead.

When Ishita came out of the shower she was surprised to see that Raman was up already and stood with his back to her in the balcony. Clad only in a pair of sweatpants, which rested dangerously low on his hips, his upper body bare. Ishita gazed at him with unabashed lust as the magnificent morning sun shone on his lean perfectly toned body and he stretched to flex his muscles. Looking at him now he looked more like a Greek god on a visit to earth than a normal human being. Ishita's mouth was not the only place which watered as her breath hitched at the sight. Her erratic heartbeats also picked up pace and she felt the now familiar ache in the pit of her stomach again.

"Ready for round 8?" Raman whispered huskily, grinning and breaking Ishita's trance while he placed a peck on her cheek.

"I didn't know we were counting!" She resorted with equal vigour.

"Aaah I see you are as sharp in the morning as you are in the night Mrs Bhalla!"

"I am always sharp Mr Bhalla! And it's DR Bhalla to you! You always forget. May be you are getting old no? Yaadasht kamzor ho gayi hai aap ki!"

"Old? Idhar aao main batata hoon tumhay apni jawani!" Saying this he tried to grab her with his arms but she quickly dodged him and went to the door.

"Ok ok we need to go down. Simmie and Rinki will be pleased to see you. By the way how come you were able to come? I thought you had an important assignment?"

"Yea about that...come sit down. I'll explain"

Raman patted the bed and then went to close the balcony doors, switched their mobiles off and scanned the room for hidden microphones with his sonic pen. Once satisfied he explained the situation to Ishita.

"I've been sent here on a highly secretive mission. We have received information that a terrorist group or an assassin will infiltrate the wedding on a mission to sabotage or hinder the peace talks. they will be targeting the delegates and dignitaries attending the wedding. Some might already be here. Just be very alert and if you see anything, well you know what to do. I'm here in an official capacity but I don't need to tell you that no one is to know of this mission. Romi, Mahir and Bala are here too but haven't made contact yet"

Ishita took in what Raman was saying and began processing the information and its implications. Her major concern was for the safety of her friends and family and the many guest of the wedding.

"Ok Raman. We need to be really vigilant and you have to promise to keep me updated on this matter. We will work better together as our friends lives and countrys honour are at stake here!"

"Ok. But Ishita, don't tell Simmie anything yet ok? The need may never arise to involve her in this. We might solve the problem before it gets out of hand."

"OK but I am going to involve my girls. They are here anyway so better to be prepared for any eventuality and be vigilant"

Ishita contemplated whether to disclose the events which had taken place last night between Dimple and Adil. But brushing the thought aside as a trivial matter she got up off the bed and switching her mobile phone on and summoned the other agents into an urgent meeting on the terrace.

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Major Khalid cleared security and entered the gates of the vast mansion with his old acquaintance Lord Hashim Khan. He had known the entrepreneur in both an official and personal capacity and had been delighted at the invite for the wedding from him. Although nowadays the major rarely attended social functions he had made a special effort to come all the way here, to Australia, to the wedding.

He did however have his own agenda to fulfill too.

And this time nothing would get in his way.

He was a lot younger than Lord Khan, 38 to be precise, but he had led a successful army career, rising up the ranks pretty quickly due to his determination, dedication and hard work. That was until that fateful day 9 years ago. That one day had turned his life upside down and changed the meaning of life for him. Although outwardly he had recovered from the tragedy, inside him the fire of revenge was rife and he would not rest until he had punished the perpetrators of his grief.

Unknown to the wedding party, a private conference was scheduled tomorrow before the nikhah, which Lord Khan was facilitating. It was an unofficial meeting before the actual seminar in a month's time and all the 6 officials from both India and Pakistan who were attending the wedding, would be gathering to set an agenda for the final event. As Major Khalid had been part of the unfortunate and unsuccessful effort years ago, Lord Khan who had an active role in the negotiations had invited him too on a personal request.

"Come Major aa tujhay bachon say milata hoon"

Lord Khan's voice penetrated Major Khalid's reverie and he smiled at the kind elderly man. Nodding his head he followed him up the steps leading into the house which was bursting with the colours and noises of wedding preparations in full force!

Edited by arnavkidevani - 10 years ago
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Welcome back..m glad u have written sequel of this story...
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Hi there friends
Extremely sorry for the delay in updating this part but have been away on holiday for 2 weeks and just returned.

Thanks for all your comments, likes and messages I am humbled!

I have written this part on my phone and am posting from that so please excuse any errors and typos that I may have missed😊

I hope it is worth the wait and you will enjoy part 4, I promise the next part is coming much sooner than this one!

Thanks once again for reading and your patience!😉

Enjoy!


Part 4

56 hours earlier...

As Ishita went to meet her colleagues; she showed Raman Rinky's room and left him to meet her.

Simmie opened the door wide and beamed at him letting him in. They had met last night when he had arrived and security had contacted her to identify him but he had yet to meet the bride.

"Rinky dekh to kon aaya hai"

"OMG Raman Bhai aap? Aap kab aayay? "

"Hi Rinki kaisi hai humari bride? I came last night"

"Awe that's great! Didi said you wouldn't be coming due to work! But I'm so glad you did!"

Rinky came to hug Raman and smiled a little sadly.

"Aap nahi aatay to mujhay bidda kon karta? Aap maray aik hi to Bhai hain!"

Raman hugged her back. He didn't have siblings but through Rinky's visits in the last 2 years he had grown fond of the young girl often glimpsing Ruhi's cheekiness in her antics.

They chatted for a while about the preparations, the arrangements as well as about Adil. Then, when one of the maids came to call them down for breakfast, Raman excused himself to go to collect the twins, hoping to get an update from Ishita, and the girls went downstairs to join the other guests.

Raman looked into the children's room but they weren't there.

"Aaya must have taken them down already" He thought and went to his room to see if Ishita was back. That too was empty. His phone beeped with a message. It was from Mahir.

"Agent K is in. Agent Romi & Bala will join you later today. Stay vigilant. Attack is imminent"

Closing his bedroom door Raman he turned and began to walk down the hallway towards the stairs. He decided to go down promptly to analyse the situation on the ground and assess the guests who had already arrived. As he got to the end of the passage he passed a door which was slightly ajar and he couldn't help overhearing the agitated voice which was faint but could still be heard outside. His trained ear picked up the conversation.

"Yes I think it's 11.30...I heard him saying...no I'm sure...you'll talk to him?...but there's no time... yes I did. I put it exactly as you told me...I just hope...do you think he'll agree...yes? Don't worry I'll find the file for you... Will it really help? Call it off?... Ok I'll call you once I find it...it will help won't it? Ok. Bye"

Raman stood rooted to the spot! He was sure the conversation sounded suspicious and he decided to see who this person was and what they were up to. Raman knew he would need to move swiftly but cautiously if he wanted to find any clue for his mission. Patting his right side, to ensure his gun was in its strap, in case he needed it, he moved forward to enter the room. His progress was halted however as just then Simmie returned with a maid in tow, tutting at seeing Raman standing still.

"Raman Bhai sab neechay aap ka intezaar kar rahay hain, uncle and Adil would like to meet you and you haven't even had breakfast! Come on come down right this minute!"

"Simmie tu chal mai aata hoon"

"No no you have to come now. No excuses! Sab wait kar rahay hain"

Raman had no option but to follow her albeit reluctantly. As he did though, he glanced at the maid who was accompanying Simmie.

"Good morning sir"

"Good morning"

He manage to nod discreetly to the maid, who in turn nodded back to him and leaving Simmie and him, continued along the hall presumably to complete her cleaning duties.

Raman took this opportunity to ask Simmie whose room they had just walked past.

"Woh room? That's uncle's room. Since auntie passed away he moved into one of the smaller suits on this wing. Kyon?"

"Wesy hi. I thought I heard his daughter talking in there."

"Daughter? No no, she's staying in the opposite wing. You must have been mistaken. There's no one up here. Everyone is in the hall having breakfast"

"Yes yes I must be"

"Come, hurry"

Raman turned his head to glance back at the door just in time to see it close with a soft click. He hadn't been mistaken. There had definitely been someone in the room, who was presumably talking on the phone. He had also heard a file being mentioned and 11.30. What was happening at 11.30 and what was this file about? Raman hoped he would find out soon.

Ishita had met and updated her colleagues about the turn of events. Emphasizing the utmost need for secrecy and vigilance she had entrusted Vandita to use her sources to check out the security measures of the villa and wedding venues and Mahika to check out the hired help. By the time she had come down from the terrace Aaya had fed and dressed Ruhi and Adi, and they all came down to join the other guests in the dining hall, the house was alive with the hustle and bustle of the sangeet preparations. An extensive team of servants had prepared and laid a buffet breakfast for the 20 or so guests staying at the mansion and were busy serving everyone. As she took her seat next to Rinki she heard her and and her 2 best friends discussing the forthcoming trip to the beauty parlor. Adil was also present chatting animatedly and arranging the cars with Sukhi and the head of security.

As they discussed their plans at the table, Lord Khan arrived with a new guest in toe. Ishita looked up as she heard Lord Khan greet everyone and introduce the guest.

"Adil, Rinki this is my dear friend Major Khalid, who has just arrived this morning to attend your wedding all the way from India. Come Ill introduce you to everyone"

Ishita looked up to see a familiar face by Lord Khan's side. It was the guy she had met at the airport in Delhi. How peculiar! What was he doing here?

She watched as Lord Hashim introduced him to Adil and Rinki and then the rest of the party. She smiled as he turned to her to do the same.

"Hi"

"Hello"

"I believe we've met before?"

"Yes. What a coincidence! We met the other day at the airport..."

"Yes when I came crashing into you like a tornado!"

"Yes, yes" All 3 of them laughed

"Well this is Dr Ishita Bhalla, she's part of Rinkis family. They are also here from Delhi to attend the wedding. Major Khalid is an old acquaintance and a dear friend of mine. I wasn't sure he would accept the wedding invitation and to tell you the truth, I was shocked when he did but I'm glad he came! It gives us a chance to mend brocken bridges, eh Major? So here he is!" Lord Khan laughed heartily.

Ishita looked at the Major at this comment, and saw a fleeting emotion of pain cross his features. But then, just as quickly, it was gone and instead a sad smile adorned his face.

Her agent senses kicked in and she got that uncomfortable feeling again! Heck was she reading too much into it or was there something weird about her agent senses activating like this. What was this major's story? And that Dimple and Adil encounter? She felt overwhelmed by Raman's mission too. She would have to be extremely cautious and start her own investigations into matters soon as whenever she had that feeling, something was usually fishy.

Meanwhile...

Silly stupid girl!

The phone crashed on the floor as the holder threw it down in frustration.

I'm sick of dealing with emotional fools who can't do what there're told!

It's taken her 2 days to plant the device and she still hasn't found the file!

Will he love her she laments! Humph! I wouldn't if I could help it!

She doesn't realise that "love" is an overrated word used to trap people into unwanted and unnecessary relationships!

Huh! Love!

The other one must perform better than this or else these two will be the first ones I dispose of!!

Incompetent fools!

Seems as if I want something doing I'll have to do it myself!


Edited by arnavkidevani - 10 years ago
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Hi there
Thank you for all your likes and comments!

I'm back with Part 5 of my SS

Hope you will enjoy this as much as the others!

Enjoy!😃


Part 5

55 hours to go...


"Ok we seem to have a problem guys! One of the drivers has fallen sick so we're short 1 driver"

Most of the guests consisting of close family and friends had moved to the lawn after breakfast. Leaving a small array of food for latecomers, the servants had begun clearing up the breakfast things and arranging the furniture to prepare for the evening function of the Sangeet.

Raman heard this proclamation from a young man standing at the breakfast table with Rinky and her friends and Ishita, as he came down the stairs with Simmie.

"What's the problem Adil? The girls will fit in one car so what's the hiccup?"

"No Simmie didi the thing is two drivers are needed to pick up some important delegates arriving for the wedding from the airport. And the guards and 2 other drivers have gone with dad's convoy. There's no one else to drive the girls to the spa, as I need to stay here to oversee the arrangements"

"But can't we hire another driver from an agency?"

"I'm afraid that's not possible. Dad's saying it's too much of a security risk to hire someone on the spot without proper vetting. So until the security firms driver arrives we'll have to wait for our drivers to return from the airport before Rinki can go"

"Can't you call the beauticians here" Ishita suggested

"Not really didi. We have a whole pamper spa day booked. And all the treatments can't be brought here"

"I'll drive them. I have an international licence with me"

Everyone turned to look at Raman who had just spoken up.

"Who are you?"

"Yippee Raman bhai to the rescue! This, Adil is my Raman Bhai who arrived last night. And bhai this is Adil, the groom! Mera dhulha!"

Everyone laughed at Rinki's declaration regarding Adil after which he extended his hand and welcomed Raman.

"Thanks Raman Bhai, if you drive the girls to the spa that will be a great help and one job off my list"

"Sure after all I'm from the brides side so need to muck in! Ladkay walon kay naaz nakhray to uthanay padhain gay!"

Everyone laughed again.

It was settled that Raman would take the bride, her 2 friends, Adils younger sister and a couple of cousins in the SUV and drive them into town in an hour's time and then pick them up later. The party dispersed, some to get ready to go, some to prepare for tonight and some to make calls.

Ishita came over to Raman with a plate urging him to have some breakfast as they had a busy day ahead. She sought this opportunity to update Raman on matters, informing him that her team was carrying out thorough checks on staff and reviewing the security measures in and around the villa.

She also informed him of her suspicions regarding the new arrival, Major Khalid and what she had witnessed last night. Raman listened attentively to this new information and made a mental note to check the Major out. He had intended to update Ishita regarding the earlier incident upstairs but they were interrupted by Simmie, who needed Ishita to help her out with something, before he could proceed to do so.

He would have to talk to her later.

After breakfast Raman collected his documents and unable to meet Adil's father as he had already left due to some urgent business, he made his way to the front of the villa to wait for the girls. As he reached the porch he saw there was only one car waiting in the drive. The others must have gone to collect the delegates he thought. As he scanned the vicinity of the villa to identify any gaps or weak spots in security he wondered if the guests would be staying here or if arrangements had been made for them elsewhere.

The security guard approached him and after exchanging pleasantries handed him the keys to the SUV and then continued with his round. Adil joined Raman and they started chit chatting while the maid loaded Rinkis and the girls' things into the back of the car.

As they talked Raman noticed some small bits of copper wire scattered on the drive behind the SUV, glistening as the mid-morning sun shone on them.

Calling the guard over he inquired whether any work had been carried out recently which might have left some remnants.

"Not as such sir. Just the security firm has been in this morning to fit trackers in the cars, nothing else. The SUV had one fitted too"

"When did they fit them"

"This morning before the cars left for the airport"

"Where did they fit them?"

"Under the engine sir"

That sounded suspicious.

Before the guard could finish Raman was on the floor and sliding under the car!

Just as he had thought! The car was fitted with a speed bomb not a tracker! This one wasn't active. Yet. If the others had been fitted with the same then they were in deep trouble! He wasn't so sure they would be inactive for long! He had to stop the other cars before they reached the airport and picked up the delegates!

Adil couldn't believe the speed with which Raman was out from under the car and up on the phone! He texted Mahir and asked the guards who had gathered now, how long since the other cars had departed. On being informed it had been 10 minutes, he instructing Adil to dial his fathers no on his mobile as his was a secure line and taking the phone put it to his ear as it rang. He needed to speak to Lord Khan. Urgently!


Elsewhere in the villa...

The loud giggling of Rinkis 2 best friends, Sonia and Tina as well as Lord Khans 21 year old daughter Zoobi and several of her cousins vibrated around the room as Rinki sat blushing amongst them. Dimple had also joined them albeit a little later as she had supposedly been nursing a hangover from last night. Simmie was sorting through the wardrobe arranging tonight's outfits while Agent M discussed her report and forthcoming strategy with Agent JKR in a corner of the room. Agent V was in her room in a meeting with their bosses discussing some forthcoming missions.

"How romantic is Raman Bhai, didi?"

"Yes do tell! He's sooo handsome and dashing!"

"How does he woe you?"

Ishitas thought process was interrupted by the girls insistent questions and giggling

"Huh?"

"Oh come on di Rinki ko kuch tips to do!"

They burst into laughter again.

Dimple looked at the giggling girls and rolled her eyes while Simmie and Mahika grinned at Ishita.

"What?" Ishita could not believe they actually expected her to answer!

"Batao batao! We don't have fellas of our own so I'm afraid you'll have to educate Rinki on matters of the heart!" Mahika couldn't help teasing Ishita.

"And matters of cough cough!" Sonia and Tina coughed exaggeratedly and rolled on the floor laughing!

"Kya??" Ishita exclaimed worriedly. She wasn't sure if the girls were serious or just pulling her leg but just the thought of talking about Raman romantically to anyone made her blush a dark shade of pink.

Although she was bold and confident in all aspects of her life Ishita aka Agent JKR had rarely been the sweet romantic type. Not that she detested romance or anything but she simply didn't have time for it in her fast paced and focused life. It was only through recent events and after meeting Raman or should she say Agent RKB that she had begun to find out what love was. Her one brief yet unfortunate experience early on at college had left her vary of romance. However with Raman circumstances had taken such a dramatic turn that she had, after 2 years of marriage, fallen deeply and madly in love with her husband. The fact that they were both sexually insatiable for each other was like the cherry on the top of a delicious cake!

After looking around and realising that 7 pairs of eyes were eagerly awaiting for her answer and watching her every reaction Ishita blushed even redder resulting in another bout of laughter from the girls.

"Awe how cute! Didi aap to nayi naweli dulhan ki tarahan sharma rahi ho!" Zoobi piped up, coming and hugging Ishita.

"Rinki kuch seekho in say! And stop jumping around like a tomboy. Raman Bhai ka naam liya to didi sharam say paani paani ho gayi!" Simmie joined in.

"Acha di abb bata bhi do na. Kya Raman Bhai romantic hain?" Sonia asked.

"I erm...hm haan hain"

"Kitnay romantic?" Rinki wanted to know.

"Huh? Bas hain...bohat romantic"

Ishita was met with a round of whooping and whistles! As the noise piped down Dimple asked,

"Aap ka khyaal rakhtay hain?"

Ishitas thoughts went back to early this morning. She was locked in Raman's arms, his mouth playing havoc on her body as it left a burning trail wherever it went! Her, begging him to give her release, him obliging, yes my darling!

"Haan..yes meri har zaroorat ka khyaal rakhtay hain" She managed to answer without meeting anyone's gaze.

"Owe!!" Everyone sighed.

"Aap ka kaha maantay hain?" Tina wanted to know

Ishita reminisced "Harder! Faster! Yes Raman, Oh yes oh yes just there! Like that! Hmmm"

Aloud she said "Haan...har baat mantay hain!"

"Shooo sweet!" The younger girls chorused. Simmie and Mahika grinned and continued with their work.

"I have a question didi. Raman Bhai aap ko tang to nahi kartay?" One of the cousins asked.

Ishita remembered the numerous times he woke her up during the course of the night! His seductive demands on her body! His sweet sensual tortures, with his mouth...his hands...his tongue...as he made love to her! The way he managed to bring her to the brink and illicit screams of abandon from her! Oh yes he knew how to trouble her to the max!

"I...Erm...no...bilkul tang nahi kartay."

"Awe...kitnay sweet hain Bhai!!

"Haiy sooo dreamy!!"

"I want someone like that too!"

Ishita grinned as she thought what the girls would make of the images their innocent questions had evoked! If only they knew!

With a dreamy look on her face she tried to bring her attention back to the task at hand and turned towards Mahika as the girls began getting ready to go.


Elsewhere Raman was facing troubles of his own. Taking the phone from Adil and walking some distance away he started speaking as soon as the ring was answered.

"Sir My nae is Raman and I need you to listen to me very carefully. I need you to contact your drivers collecting the delegates not to do so. Tell them to leave the cars away from the airport and go on leave. My colleague will collect the delegates and take them to a safe location. Under no circumstances should they get into the cars you have sent because they are rigged with time bombs!"

"What?! But who are you? And how do you know?"

"Sir that's not important. I will explain once I meet you but at this moment it's vital that you do as I say! And sir...please don't tell anyone yet about what I've told you! We can't trust anyone. Just inform the drivers to leave the cars at the airport. I'll meet you and explain everything when you get back to the villa."

"Ok...Ill do that right away"

Raman put the phone down and saw he had a text. Mahir had confirmed Romi and Bala would come as the new drivers and he himself would be collecting the delegates. Raman just hoped they wouldn't be too late.
Edited by arnavkidevani - 10 years ago
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Awesome Update!
Yaaay Raman did come!
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Superb update
hope adil to b nice man
last part was hot
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so adil is man f lies...
rinky life in stake...
ishra both missing eachother...
in last part... did raman thr or she dreaming...
waiting 4next part...

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