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masterpiece 😲 i dont think its dat good 😆 But still thanks for ur lovely comments. 😃PHIR LE AAYA DIL ,one master piece which makes more interesting😛😃. ..Please continue soon..Thanks for PM😊
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masterpiece 😲 i dont think its dat good 😆 But still thanks for ur lovely comments. 😃PHIR LE AAYA DIL ,one master piece which makes more interesting😛😃. ..Please continue soon..Thanks for PM😊
gals u will have to wait for d next part for ur ques 😊 I am so glad i able to keep u gals hooked! 😃Originally posted by: darlingpinks
Awesome Pallavi di it was so nice.
Simmi and Mani's marriage- lekin simmi Tamiliian?Why did Ishita leave Raman?I think it was because of that Shagun or Ashok, aur kuch majboori like health issues or something like that or they didn't confess their love and she couldn't stay there?Which pic?You really have kept us hooked onSo curiousBeautiful writingPlease update soon di
wil try n update soon, glad u r waiting for it 😊Originally posted by: Anum_says
Why Ishita Left Him...
its interesting..
i cant wait for part 2...
kab update krogi..
thoda sabra karo bachcha!😉😆
COMPENSATION NEEDED ...
Hi guys!
I'm here with today's OS on Pic 36. My pic is the divider scene. This originally happened before IshRa marriage but I'm using it after marriage. Not proofread.
I'm very nervous about this as it's my first work between all the great writers whom I admire. Hope I do enough justice to it.
Need encouragement. Criticisms and appreciation both are equally welcome. Hope you like it.
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Adi and Ruhi were back in Bhalla house. Everything was sorted out. It seemed no trouble in Bhalla house till Ishita found out about Raman working for Ashok. She was hurt .Not because he was working in Ashok's company but because he didn't discuss or care to share it with her.
Raman and Ishita fought about it. As soon as Raman came from office, Ishita started her lecture. Raman had a very tiring day at work, looking after all the needs of company and doing Ashok's petty works. He was frustrated on Ashok and as usual showered all his anger on his dear wife. Instead of explaining her- the reason for his big decision, he in turn shouted on her to mind her own business.
Ishita and Raman both were angry on each other. They didn't talk for whole evening. Raman, due to his extra work, slept for some time to take rest. He woke up around 7 to see his Jhansi Ki Rani packing her suitcase. He wondered where she was going. But ignored thinking she was going to stay in Ruhi's room punishing him. After fifteen minutes he woke up. He knew he was wrong to shout on her unnecessarily .So, he decided to apologize.
He ran to Ruhi's room to find her nowhere. He ran down to hall and asked "Maa...Ishita kahan hai ?" [Maa...Where is Ishita?]
"Vo tho chali gayi puttar" [She went away son]
"Kaha...usne mujhe bataya nahi" [Where?...She didn't inform me]
"Par puttar vo tho boli tujhe bata chuki hai" [She told she has told you]
Raman in order to hide from his family about their fight, made up "Haan bataya tha.Bhul gaya." [Yeah...She told I forgot]
Mr.Bhalla "Tu bhi na Raman apni biwi ki baat hamesha sun ni chahiya" [You also Raman...you should always listen to your wife]
He faked a smile and said "Right papa".
He thought she could be in Amma's house and went there. He greeted Appa and said "Appa,Ishita kahan hai" [Appa...where is Ishita?]
Mr.Iyer replied "Chali gayi beta" [she went away]
"kab" [when]
"Abhi 10 minute pehle" [now only 10 minutes before]
"Kyu beta" [why son]
"Nahi mai use nahi mila na jaane se pehle.issliye" [I didn't meet her before going so]
"Oh,who clinic ki raaste se jaa rahi hai.Tum ab gaye to mil sakte ho" [she went in clinic's way. Now if you leave you'll meet her]
"Thank you Appa." He quickly went to his car and drove fastly. Finally somewhere he found Ishita's car. He raced to reach there quickly. She saw his car in mirror wondering what he was doing there. She chose to ignore and carried on driving. On one point, she saw the divider - the divider where they had fought and that policeman called them husband and wife. She smiled remembering that and unknowingly again did the same mistake. Her car was caught in the divider.
She came out .All the events were repeating which took place a year ago. The same policeman emerged. Bas Raman ki kami hai she thought.
"Peeke aaye ho kya madamji" [Are you drunk madam?]
"Excuse me..."
"Madamji aap yaha phirse" [madam you again]
Before Ishita could reply anything Raman came there.
"Saab aap bhi" police spoke. [Sir you too]
Raman was angry on Ishita for not stopping the car even when she saw him driving behind her.
"auratein aise he gaadi chalathi hai.na jaane kaun inko license deta hai" Raman spoke. [All women drive car like this only. Don't know who gives them license]
"Aap ko phirse yaad dila du 80% accidents mard ke haaton se hotha hai" [I'll make you remember once agin.80% accidents are caused by men]
They started arguing again. He spoke-she spoke-he spoke-she spoke and it continued. Policeman thought this would never end and decided to break this fight.
"Saab,Madam jaake apne society me ladiye na.pados me rehte hain to jaake wahi ladiye na" [sir-madam go and fight in your society. However you're neighbors]
"Hum padosi nahi, husband-wife hai.Samjhe" Both IshRa spoke together. [We are not neighbours.We are husband and wife understood]
Policeman "Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge" [What is happening? Last time I told them husband-wife, they scolded me and now I told them neighbors again they are scolding. Let me get out of here quickly before they eat my head.]
He vanished. Raman told "Ghar aana ka man hai to aao." [If you want come home come]
"Gaadi phasi hai kaise aao"[ car is struck how will i?]
"Tumhari problem policeman ko kisne bhagaya" [it's your problem you sent the policeman]
"Maine? Oh aap bhi baraabhar hissedhar he" [me? You are equally responsible]
"Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave" [Rest lecture give it to your car. I'm going]
She stood there thinking what to do. She turned back to see Raman waiting for her. She locked the car and sat inside his car. They drove home silently. Raman walked to his room and signed Ishita to do the same.
She followed him. As soon as she entered, he bolted the door and pinned her to wall. She was caught between Wall and his hands. She managed to speak Raman...
He Said "Sshhh...Why were you going? How can you go leaving me alone here? I know I did wrong but you should have given me time to explain."
She spoke "Raman ...I knew aap tension me the -"
He cut her "Tho phir kyu jaa rahi thi. You know I can't live without you Ishita. I am incomplete without you. Everyone says you are my better half but you are my life .I can't imagine a day without you, Ishita I'm sorry. I shouldn't have hidden from you. I'm very wrong. Ishita you had come in my life as Ruhi's Ishima and now you are my Zindagi."
Her eyes were moist. He continued "Ishita agar main human hu to tum oxygen.Tumhare bina main bhi nahi hoon." She gave a slight chuckle. [If I'm human you're oxygen. Without you I'm nothing]
He said "Thoda filmy hai par sacchi feelings hai yaar." [It's filmy but its real feelings yaar]
"Itna bada sppech dene ki kya zaroorat thi...Seedhe bol dete the. I love You Raman" She spoke. [Why needed of this big speech. You could have directly told.]
"I love you too Ishita" Saying he captured her lips.
They shared their first kiss. First both were a bit shy, as time passed they both fulfilled their desires. Their kiss gained passion and both their tongues were dancing together. He picked her up in his arms and walked towards their bed. He gently laid her down and jumped beside her covering the duvet on them.
Next morning
Ishita woke up to find herself Beside her Raavan Kumar naked. She hugged him. She shied a bit when her hand brushed his naked chest and blushed about yesterday night. She then placed a soft kiss on his cheeks. He woke up startled.
"Good morning jaan" she replied. He greeted her and gave a peck on her forehead and side hugged her.
She spoke "Raman kal aap galath samaj rahe the" [yesterday you're getting it wrong]
"Kya" he asked surprised [what]
"Ki mai aapko chodd ke jaa rahi hoon" [that I was leaving you and going]
"Matlab?" [means]
"Mai aapko chodd ke kahi nahi jaa rahi thi" [I was not leaving you and going]
"Toh phir ye bags aur _" [then this bags and all-]
"Mai rinki ki yaha jaa rahi thi ek hafte ke liye.Vo uski exams aa rahe hai na - iss liye meri help cha rahi thi" [I was going at rinki's place. She was having exams and she wanted my help]
"Tum ne bola kyu nahi?" [why didn't you tell?]
"Mujhe laga mujhe aapko pareshaan karna chahiya.Aise mauka phirse kab milega." [I thought this was best time to trouble you. When will I again get such an opportunity?]
"Toh mauka pe choka mara tumne" [You used the opportunity]
"Yes,Guilty kumar accha tha" [yes, guilty kumar was nice]
"Jhooti. Compensation needed" Saying he captured her lips once again and they were in another wild round of love-making...
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That's it guys. Please don't ask me Did Ishita leave her car in that condition only? ...vagera vagera because I don't know the answers properly myself. Hope you like it and it made some connection to the picture I chose. Comments are welcome
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