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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26

thank you dear. I always loved Raman's caring nature for ishu that's why I thought to pen it down,ya it was emotional as it was according to pics, personally I didn't like anyone in grey characters so thought to present in positive shade. I am glad that you liked itt


Yup Raman's always caring
I loved the way how you connected the pics
Yeah I like positive shades but I feel grey character gives intensity.(just my opinion)
But I also love positive shades but I don't like negative characters
Anyone would have to fall in love with your story.
You describe feelings perfectly and give justice to every character
Totally Awesome story

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

Omg god aarohi, wat an os yaar..lots of hugs for dis yaar! Wat a concept.. ishita shagun friends n a normal ashok!😃Loved loved loved dis, n u r a mature writer n story teller yaar. The story was heart touching, n different from d overdose of drama on d show. Well done again on dis👏have u written more stories on d forum?

di all thanx to u,if you didn't uploaded such a wonderful pics,so I never got an idear to write this one. I rey don't think so that I am a good writer, I m just trying to pen down my imagination and trying to lighten the overdose drama. ya my 1st as in ongoing on forum which name is Baawari Piya Ki and this is the Link- www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4335136
in case you are intrested
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: darlingpinks



Yup Raman's always caring
I loved the way how you connected the pics
Yeah I like positive shades but I feel grey character gives intensity.(just my opinion)
But I also love positive shades but I don't like negative characters
Anyone would have to fall in love with your story.
You describe feelings perfectly and give justice to every character
Totally Awesome story

again a tonn of thanx buddy, all thanks to pallavi di,if she didn't uploaded such a wonderful pics,I was never able to write this is. frankly speaking I was so nervous when I was posting this bcz this thread containing all the romantic os but I am glad that you all appreciate it. plz dear keep commenting,ur comments will always motivate me
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26

again a tonn of thanx buddy, all thanks to pallavi di,if she didn't uploaded such a wonderful pics,I was never able to write this is. frankly speaking I was so nervous when I was posting this bcz this thread containing all the romantic os but I am glad that you all appreciate it. plz dear keep commenting,ur comments will always motivate me


Hey emotional stories touch to our heart. Sure will be commenting cause you'll not fail to make us happy.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: darlingpinks



Hey emotional stories touch to our heart. Sure will be commenting cause you'll not fail to make us happy.

in such case this is the link of my first as www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4335136 baawari piya ki. plz read and share your views. I will be wait for your reviews
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26

in such case this is the link of my first as www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4335136 baawari piya ki. plz read and share your views. I will be wait for your reviews


Sure will read soon. And ya I will be updating my FF in a few minutes and read my other ff also:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4325616&TPN=12&#p121016148
Will be waiting for your review

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi friends

My pic 38

I won't let u go,kyu ki tum hi ho meri zindaki

Ishra room

Ishita was busy with cleaning and raman was in bathroom .raman s phone rings

Ishita:ashok yeh kyu raman ko phone karahi hu ...hello

Ashok:raman hai kya?

Ishita: bathroommei hai .kyu?koyi important thing hai kya

Ashok:woh usse kaho meeting kal keliye post pond kiya

Ishita:meeting ?aaapki saath

Ashok:mere employ mere saath nahi toh kisski saath meetingmei avunghi

Ishita:aapki employ?kya bakwaas karahi hu

Ashok:mein koyi bakwaas nahi karahi hu yeh sach actually ramane manakiya but kya karu mere toh aadath hokayi uski wada todna mushkilmei dalna and waise bhi tum biwi ho raman ki toh yeh baath pata chalna hokana ,tume toh bata hai husband and wife should not hide anything par kyaa karu...chodo ok raman ko inform karo

Ramna comes from bathroom and see ishita with his phone

Raman:kissika phone aya hai kya ?

Ishita:ha ashok ka

Raman shocked

Raman:isne kuch batha ya hai kya

Ishita:kya bathavughi voh?

Raman:mujhe kya batha

Ishita:ek boss uski employee se kya bathavunghi voh sab bathaya

Raman:employee?tum...ye...kissne kaha mera phone uttaneki

Ishita:biwihu apki

Raman:toh kya?u have a limit and don't cross it...

Ishita:limit patipatni ki beech?

Raman:par hum baki sab ki tarah nahi hu

Ishita:ha u r right mein toh booligaya humari rishta toh sirf ruhi keliye thi and it was moving from then also it was different from other every one life will be full truth,trust, sharing and all but hamri saath toh sirf joottt hai and today I understand abhi bhi humari rishta sirf ruhi keliye hai I am sorry I won't cross my limits mr rkb

Ishita goes from there

Raman:ishita rukoo... Raman tumbhina kya kardiya humishaki tarah mein usse dard pohchaya...abhi toh ek dard se nikal rahihu who bhi meri vajase

Ashok calls

Ashok:jaldi avo

Raman:ha

Afternoon raman comes house

Raman:{himself} I am sure jkr mujhse naraaz honghi kya karu usko kuch deenese kuch nahi hoka hmmm

In room

Raman:kya baath hai sab kuch ready hai meri cloth towels and all hope she is not narass

Suddenly notices neelu in room

Raman:neelu tum?

Neelu:ha bhayya bhabhi nahi haina issliye

Raman:bhabhi nahi haina matlab

Neelu:babhi toh bhabhi ka ghar chaligayi

Raman:tu ja

Raman:{himself}ho toh ishita gharpe nahi hai ...i don't thing itni badi problem hai...deekthi hai voh ayeki ya na

{he notices sms in phone}

Raman:{reads}mein jarahi hu raman humari shadi toh ruhi keliye hui and ab voh nahi hai ...

Raman:ho toh tum chaligayi .tumme kya laktha mein tumme lene ajavunghi no way I knowhow can live without her

Toshiji :ramannn aja puttar kana keliye

Raman:ha mom

In dining table

Raman:ishita a paneer nahi banaya tu

Toshiji:puttar voh yaha nahi hai

Raman:ha mummyji boolgaya

Romi:miss karahi hu ..

Raman:chupkar

Simmi :sach mein yaar ishita ki bhina it is not nice

They were having food

Raman:ishita panii

Romi :[in ladies sound} yeh lo pani raman

Raman:romi tappad marungha

Romi:toh mein kya karu aapko batha hai ishita bhabhi yaha nahi hai phir usse hi bularahi hu toh mein aisa kiya

Toshi:agar miss karahi hai toh usse bulado

Raman;nahi uski koyi zaroorat nahi hai

Raman goes from there

He goes to outside and sit in the bench he was missing his jkr very much

Raman:kya karu mein tho usse bahuth miss karahi hu ishita tumhari bina yaha bett kar koyimaza nahi araha hai yaar realy tumhari bina sabkuch adhoora hai ...usse vapas kaise bulavu yaar nahi har nahi mansaktha meine todi kaha usse vaha janeki...agar voh yaha ana hai toh ruhi ...kais e I don't know room mei chalthe hai

In ishita"s house

Vandu:ishu ramanki saath koyi jakda hoki kya

Ishita:nahi akka

Vandu:toh tum yaha kyu ayi?

Ishita:kyu mein yaha nahi asakthi

Vandu:aise baath nahi hai

Ishita:aaka mujhe toh aapki saath rahane ki mann aya and u r here toh mein aya

In raman'sroom

Raman:ishita tum aajcouch mei math sleep kar yaar...uff raman tum yeh kya kara hi hu itna miss karahi huuu kya karuu mein ek idea hai let me throw out my ecco ...it is better uska bina life is impossible

Raman goes to iyyer house

Appa:raman:tum iss wakt ...mm ishuko miss karahi hai kya?

Raman:aisa kuch nahi hai bas usse ek..important bath bathne keliya

Amma:ha vishwa jab biwi mayike chalunghi na aise important bath yaad athi haina raman

Raman:amma voh aisa na...ishita kaha hai mujhe usse milna hai

Amm:uppar vandu ki saath hai

Raman:ha

Vandu:ishu tum itni sad kyu hai

Ishita:nahi akka I am ok

Vandu:u r not ok

Vandu notices raman

Vandu:raman

Ramn:vandu kya mei apni biwise 2 min baath karsakthi hu

Vandu:aise kyu pooch rahi hu tum baath kar tumhari biwi hai and let me go

Ishita:akka aap kahi math jao

Vandu:ishuuu please mujhe batha hai something is wrong between u 2 so please sought out it

Ishita:ok aapko jana hai toh joa mujhe neend arahi hai

She lay down in the bed vandu goes raman closes the door

Raman:aajto mein meri biwi ko tightly hug karke sovunghi

He lay down there and ishita got up from there angrily and goes near the window

Raman:ho jkr ruk

He goes near her and touch her shoulder

Raman:ishita sun

Ishita:mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai raman

Raman:ishita please galathi hokayi mujhse ...maaf karona

Ishita:galathi karna ki toh aapki adath hai na and maf kar na meri issbar mein maaf nahi karunghi...apki zindaki sabse bada decision mujhse bina poocha kardiya aur u r saying voh share karna ki zaroorat nahi we r not like other hus and wife...so why u come here to call me ho I hope aapko toh small small cheese karne ki keliye koyi hahiye na aur apko jab gussa aye kissi ko gussa karnahi hai na and now I am not there so u need me as a servant and not like a wife aaj toh aap voh sabith karliya

Raman:chup bilkul chup...ha I agree galathi hokayi maaf karona ...i had hide things from u because I hope u won't agree for working under ashok

Ishita:raman yahi hai aapki problem u won't trust me and u don't know about me...mujhe kya problem hoghi raman work ashoki saath karneki,hum family keliye karthi hai that time we won't look where we r working ,we should only look that is that job is right or wrong

Raman:ishita...

Ishita:ek baar boldethi haina raman mein agree karu ya na ek baar bolthethi huna biwi haina aapki itni bhi hak nahi hai kya

They both have tears in eyes

Raman:{cry}really sorry yaar meine kabhi aisa nahi socha tmse hide karu I just think rinki shaadiki baath bolu par ab ruhi ki problems ayi so I hope not to say now and increase ur tension

Ishita:mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai raman

Raman:sorry ishita aaj morning mei joh kuchbhi hua ...guseemei bolthiy manse nahiii

Ishita:patha hai har baar gusse mei ...

Raman:par akli baar nahi I won't hide anything and will not hurt u ...never...tume ghar chodke aneki koyi reson nahi karungha always will support u and care u...and love u more than anything in the world promise and sorry kaan pakadkar sorry dekhona kaan pakda hai

Ishiat:raman aisa promise kahi baar dekha hai and issbaar please meri bachiki naam pe chooti promise math bol

Raman:issbar aise nahi karunghi todi alak hai sab time mein meri beti ki naam promise karthi hu aur todthi hu shh

Ishita:issbar kya

Raman:issbar...meri biwi promise kabhi nahi todhunghi joh sab promises yaad haina voh meine tumse bolkar akayi hai, sachmei please issbar...akribaar mujhe maaf kardo na agar mein koyi shataniyath iski baath karunghina tumme joh karna hai toh agar meri zindakise jana bhi hai toh joa

Ishita:hmm aisa mokha milanghi mujhko sach bathavo kissi ladki ko set karke aya hai kya aise wada

Raman:tumme aise laktha hai?

Ishita:hmm kyu ki aap promise todunghi aapki aadath haina

Raman:{tears in eyes}par issbar nahi kyu ki tumhari bina mujhe...srk don mei bolthi haina donko pakadna mushkili nahi na mumkin hai aisa hi hai meri jkr ki bina ek second bhi jeena mereliye mushkile nahi na mumkin hai sorry please ajavooo

Ishita was not responding

Ramna:acha teek hai agar tum nahi ana chahthi hai toh...think...take ur time mein jaarahi huuu

Ishita catches his hand he stops

Ishita:sorry

Raman:hmm kya sorry ?

Ishita:I mean thanks for making me realize how much I am imp in ur life and sorry meine joh kuch bhi kaha acha nahi bola zaroor apko hurt kiya hoka

Raman:hmmm bahuth hurt hui{hidind his laugh}

Ishita:sorry raman kaan pakadke

Raman:sorry ishita I also hurted u

They stand like in the pic,2no kaan pakadkar

Ishita:ab chale

Raman:nahi aaj yahi ruk jaathi hai na why should we waste time

Thanks

I know there will be a lot of mistakes because my right hand is injured so I can't type properly and highlybusy so can,t read it and check mistakes

I don't know how it suit for pic .please comment

Edited by lazeema - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy nice concept...
Luvvd the story...
Superbb OS...
IshRa were cute...

N hope ur injury gets healed soon...
Edited by .Harshita. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
he he he. don ka aur dialoug ka kya connection joda. loved it. I hope Raman will also pacify his jkr after her knowing ashok truth. good one and get well soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good one...
Matched with the pic very nicely.
Cute couple IshRa

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