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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Clover beautiful story dear. Feel like I watch YHM From beginning again both of them come a long way the different is your story both are confessed their love already and on TV None. Thank you so much for beautiful OS on weekend. Have a wonderful week ahead dear.😊

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peace..

@peace..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Clover, may know ur name dear? 😊

Coming to the OS:

Ur style of writing is different..u end up touching things which generally writers havent discussed on the forum as such. that way ur stories r really new to me! 😊 N Must say u r a wonderful story teller!

Some lines i really loved:

Maybe her remedy did work, he had a head full of hair today. 😆👍🏼

She inspired this strange sort of restlessness in him, which immediately freaked him out.He didn't understand it and reacted the only way he could to keep her away, by taking out his anger on her. It didn't frazzle her though. She only came back at him with ten times the force and even more dirt against him 👍🏼

He realized it was love after torturing her for days, after getting tortured by her for days, after exposing his vulnerable self to her, after seeing how vulnerable she herself was, after seeing how much love she had in her. 😊

It was lovely reading a part of the YHM storyline in ur words! 😊

btw Raman was tutoring Sona in class 12 while giving his own board exams? 😲 😆 (sorry class 12 board exams were a tough phase for me, plus we hv cbsc boards going on dese days, cudnt resist tht comment 😆)

n awee..how beautifully did u just encorporate d pic in d story 👏 I was wondering in d beginning on how u wud fit it in here..but then it came as a wonderful surprise! 😃

again loved dese line:

Again, Raman couldn't help but ask, "are you planning on doing this every year?"

The only thing that did change was the amount of possessiveness in her regarding him. It just kept increasing every year and he loved every bit of it, for his own selfish reasons.

Oh, I am in love wid dis OS..more so bcos u took d raman remembering his past route..

Thank you for dis..n esp for doing 2 OSes in a day! means a lot! 😃

Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Beautiful, heart touching! Brilliantly written and apt pic! :D

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

oh i absolutely loved this one clover!

so sweet - loved the journey ❤️

absolutely loved the i love you too

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clover

@clover

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: peace..
Clover, may know ur name dear? 😊

Coming to the OS:
Ur style of writing is different..u end up touching things which generally writers havent discussed on the forum as such. that way ur stories r really new to me! 😊 N Must say u r a wonderful story teller!

Some lines i really loved:

Maybe her remedy did work, he had a head full of hair today. 😆👍🏼

She inspired this strange sort of restlessness in him, which immediately freaked him out.He didn't understand it and reacted the only way he could to keep her away, by taking out his anger on her. It didn't frazzle her though. She only came back at him with ten times the force and even more dirt against him 👍🏼

He realized it was love after torturing her for days, after getting tortured by her for days, after exposing his vulnerable self to her, after seeing how vulnerable she herself was, after seeing how much love she had in her. 😊

It was lovely reading a part of the YHM storyline in ur words! 😊

btw Raman was tutoring Sona in class 12 while giving his own board exams? 😲 😆 (sorry class 12 board exams were a tough phase for me, plus we hv cbsc boards going on dese days, cudnt resist tht comment 😆)

n awee..how beautifully did u just encorporate d pic in d story 👏 I was wondering in d beginning on how u wud fit it in here..but then it came as a wonderful surprise! 😃

again loved dese line:

Again, Raman couldn't help but ask, "are you planning on doing this every year?"

The only thing that did change was the amount of possessiveness in her regarding him. It just kept increasing every year and he loved every bit of it, for his own selfish reasons.

Oh, I am in love wid dis OS..more so bcos u took d raman remembering his past route..

Thank you for dis..n esp for doing 2 OSes in a day! means a lot! 😃

Oh! Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment. It is always nice to hear such praise.

Coming to your first question, I would like to please keep myself anonymous for now. If I had a common name like, lets say Mary, I would definitely tell you. But my name is quiet unique, I am the only person you will find on facebook with that first name. Also, the anonymity helps me better express myself. Which is why I joined this forum. 😳

I can tell you this much, it starts with C.

Having that little surprise in the end was what I had planned, and if it was delivered then I was successful. Thank you for loving it.

And yes, Raman was tutoring Sona for her boards while studying for his own. Somehow, subconsciosly, I ended up putting that in, maybe because the boards are still going on.

And before I forget, I have one more OS I plan on writing (pic no 42, I think). So I would like the date, 8 April, for that.😊

Edited by clover - 10 years ago

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Anamika

@Impossible.Girl

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Loved it @clover

Very brilliantly written

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Absolutely beautiful clover!!

I love this scene a lot because, though its romantic in a very cliched manner, it is probably the only time we got to see Raman confess his love to her😆

Love the way you've incorporated it into your OS.. Very cute!