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Neethi,
I am so so glad u agreed to do the opener. A big big thank you to you!
And I am so glad u took dis pic..dis is one of d under-appreciated scenes on the show! I actually dint think anybody wud take dis pic, n see, d opening OS is on this one!
Coming to the OS.
OH MY GOD!
This the one of the best written OSes on the forum! 👏👏👏 This is pure genius.
u have worded it so beautifully.. at times i really wonder how u guys come up with those perfect words n lines for describing dose subtle emotions..
esp some lines are soo beautiful:
His breath caught in his chest at her nearness, and the sight of her beautiful face up close, especially her lush lips wreaked havoc on his senses. He bent his head slightly to breathe in her sweet scent, but drew back as soon as he felt his carefully exercised self restraint threaten to burst.
Sure, he wanted to take it slow with her, and did not want to scare her off with the intensity of his love for her.
He was on the bed, engrossed in his files, completely oblivious of her miseries.
He stepped sideways in a bid to get away from her, but since the entire universe was conspiring to torment him, he tripped on her saaree, and the next thing he knew, she was in his arms, looking up at him through those enchanting eyes of hers.
She turned away from him in anger, not noticing that her outburst had left him wide-eyed, and began walking towards the cupboard when she felt him grab her by the elbow, and the next instant, she was plastered to his body, his face inches from hers, his warm breath sending tingles down her spine. He hesitated only for a moment, before he bent down and claimed her lips with his.
She took a look at him, and her heart soared as the truth dawned on her.
Her nails dug into his back, and he felt all the vows he had made, to be gentle with her, crumble to dust.
He laughed out aloud, as he experienced an inexplicable joy at the knowledge that his wife had gone to such lengths just to win his affections
she snuggled into his secure arms, she finally understood what contentment felt like.
I think i m gonna end up copying d entire OS here! 😆
u fused the original scene so brilliantly into this story. n dose lil tie tying, hand brushing scenes were superb add ons. I cud totally visualise d scenes..d os was soo romantic ❤️..i loved it to bits!
And i loved it in d end how ishita revealed tht it was all intended.
Overall i loved how u sketched d sequence of events.. Simmi teasing Ishita- Ishita doubting if he is attracted to her- den deliberately testing him- den her thinking negative, tripping n d outburst - finally d consummation.
Now I have to shout a big thank you to you for this! N I surely have to read the rest of ur work 😊
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