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Sorry for the delay. Was really busy. Anyway, do read and comment. Here is chapter 14. Hope you'll like it.

Chapter 14: Some beautiful moments of love and family


Ishra hadn't told anything about their relationship to their parents. They had decided to tell after Mimi marriage.

The next morning:

Everyone were busy in their own works. Toshiji and Amma were busy in fighting and both their husbands were trying to calm them.

Mimi were fighting because of Sonali.

Mihir-Miku listen na.

Mihika-Kya listen na jao vo sunegi tumhari baat.

Mihir was trying from yesterday, but nothing was happening. As mihir saw the other side Mihika controlled her laugh and made a straight face. Mihika had forgiven him long back. She was just enjoying his sweet manane wala side. She loved this side of him. How cute he looked then with a small pout on his face! It was hard to resist that face because all she wanted to then was hug him.

Ishita saw this. She knew her mischievous sister and had seen her chukle when Mihir had turned the other side. Her poor devar! She went there.(m-mihika, mi-mihir)

I-kyu tang kara rahi ho mere bechara devar ko?

Mi-dekiye na bhabi yeh sun he nahi rahi he and gave his cute little pout looking at mihika and that was it. Mihika bursted out laughing. Mihir was shocked and then understood.

Mi-Accha to yeh sab natak tha

M-nahi to kya buddhu.

He tightly side hugged her and Ishita left them in their love world and went searching for him- her life. Without him there is no reason to life for her. She could have just given her life- because it had no meaning without him. The moment he steps into her life- she gets her life. Be it then or now. She was shattered when she knew she couldn't give birth and Subbu had left her, but the moment he entered everything changed- of all those painful years she had started to genuinely smile. But then he left, no she left him and she was again lost- her life was with him, her every breath was a prayer for his and her daughter's well being, her every heartbeat wished them to be here, her every moment on this earth was lost in those beautiful memories. But then he didn't leave me, he came, he came back for me and filled me with life again. And then my eyes met his and spoke a hundred words to him in a few seconds.

He was there with our daughter sitting on the sofa speaking to her. She went there and joined them.

I-to kya baate horahi he

R-baap-beti ka secret sab kuch tumhe to nahi batayenge na.

I-accha. Meri Ru mujhe baatyegi na. But before Ruhi could say anything Raman intervened,

R-nahi batayegi.

I-batayegi

Ruhi went from their seeing their fight proving that they were back to normal.

R-ab sab kuch tumhare tarah pure mohalle mein nahi batayenge na.

I-ha.ha. aap kaha bateyeng sab kuch par sabse sabkuch bolvayenge na.

R-kya? Mein kaha sabse bulvata hu yaar mein to hamesha yeh sochta reh tu hu tumhari bolti kab khatam hogi. Lecture sunsun ke mera khoon hi kardogi na tum

She took a knife kept on the table and pointed it to him.

I-ab chup nahi huye to sach mein murder kardoong mein. Aap kuch bhi bolte rahteho. Aapke bhale keliye hi to kehti hu na aur aap baar baar galti kare to mein kya karu? Mujhe tang karne ke alwa aap ko kuch kaam hai kya?

Raman lifted his hands up in air and said- Hai Rabba!Baccha lo mujhe varna sach mein khoon kardegi mera. Khud itna lecture deti hai aur banda ek baat kare to bas talwar leke bait jaati hai.

I-Raman mein kaha itna lecture hu?

R-You know what Raman Bhalla likes Sambar. It's like that.

I- Aapse na baat karna bi beekar hai. Murgan!kya karu mein is insane ka?

Raman-pagal to already banachuki ho aur kya banogi. Vo to mein bas pagal hote hote bachgaya.

Her mouth formed a perfect o. She muttered- prandh, muttal and some other things in tamil.

He went close to her ear and said- aur dewaana tumhare pyaar mein

A blush crept her face.

I-aap bhi naa Raman and went from there with a smile on her face and that smile warmed his face.

After some time everyone left in the bus.

All the couples were sitting opposite to each other with Ruhi on Ishita's lap and slowly Ruhi felt asleep. Ishita put her in the sleeper seat and came back to play.

M-Hey guys it's boring. Let's play something.

Van-antakshari

M-Ok fine. Lekin you need to sing the song for the opposite person and the opposite will continue for you either with the same song or different one.

M-vandu akka aap gaye na. Jab aap college mein the tab kaise feel hota tha.

It started from Bala and Vandu.

Vandu

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Bala

Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Vandu

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Bala

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Vandu

Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me
Dono ka hi ek daam hai

Bala

Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaa
Yaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya
Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb

Vandu

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Vandu and Bala together:

Zehnaseeb, zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Hua ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

M- Hayee! Kitna romantic he mere jiju. Kuch seeko unse.

Mihir just nodded his head and it was mimi's turn.

Mihika

O uh ho o o ho..
O uh ho o o ho..

Dil ka dimaag se
Jhagda lagaaya kise
Peechhe ke darwaaze se ae..
Dabe paanv aaya kaise
Thoda sa kameena
Thoda bechara hai
Ishq bhoot sahi par yeh
Bhoot bada hi pyaara hai

Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O...

Mihir


Dekho leke aaya hai
Pocket mein sharaaratein
Tere jaisi hai zara aa
Iski bhi aadatein
Upar se garam hai
Andar se naram hai
Thoda shareef bhi hai thoda
Thoda sa besharam hai
hai hai...

Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Uffo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun

Mihika

Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O...

Mihir

Hairat ko bhi hairaaniyaan hone lagi
Ab hosh mein nadaaniyan hone lagi
Baithe hain dil ek dillagi pe haar ke
Mehangi badi manmaaniyan hone lagi

Mihika


Yaari ke bahaane kandha sehlaata hai
Phir mauka milte hi ye par phailata hai
Haathon ke paar hi iska ishara hai

Mimi together

Ishq bhoot sahi par ye bhoot bada hi pyara hai
Aye ae ae..

Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Offo! Isey.. isey daant ke bhagaaun
Offo! Ya.. ya seene se lagaaun
Sar pe bithaaun, ya thappad lagaaun
Offo O...

Uf oh.. Uf ho.. Uffo...

It was Ishra's turn:

I-Yeh Kaisa Ladka Hai R-Yeh Kaisi Ladki Hai
I-Iska Maein Kya Karoon
R-Isse Maein Kya Kahoon
I-Yeh Ladta Hai, Haan Haan
R-Akadti Hai, He He
I-Jhagadta Hai R- Bigadti Hai
I-Deewana Hai R-Deewani Hai

Ishita

Haye Haye Re Haye Yeh Ladka
Haye Haye Re Haye, He
Karta Naadaniyaan Kyun Poocho To Haye, Yo
Kabhi Yeh Hamse Ladta Hai
Kabhi Jhagadta Hai
Koi Paas Iske Na Aana
Yeh Ladka Hai Deewana, Hai Deewana

Raman

Haye Haye Re Haye Yeh Ladki
Haye Haye Re Haye
Karti Naadaniyaan Kyun Poocho To Haye
Kabhi Yeh Hamse Ladti Hai
Kabhi Akadti Hai
Karo Door Se Chhedh Khaani
Yeh Ladki Hai Deewani, Hai Deewani

Iski Baatein, Yahi Jaane
Koi Bhi To Jaane Na
Aisi Vaisi, Kaisi Hai Yeh
Koi Pehchaane Na
To Bhaago Oh Yaaron
Kar Na De Shaitaani
Yeh Ladki Hai Deewani, Hai Deewani

Ishita

Aate Jaate, Chhedhe Hamko
Ke Maane Na Yeh Kehna
Dekho Dekho Paagal Hai Yeh
Haan Bachke Zara Rehna
Yeh Aisa Hai Phir Bhi
Apna Isko Maana
Yeh Ladka Hai Deewana, Hai Deewana

Behind these were their true feelings of a depth no one could understand, a love which was unique, a beautiful world of their own.

Precap: Ruhi insists to sleep with Ishra

Here I end the update. Please give your comments. It encourages me a lot. Appreciation and criticism is welcome

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So sweet.Loved it.
MiMi fight was so good and cute.
IshRa were as usual tom and jerry.
Antakshari sequence was wow...
all songs were sweet and suited the jodi also. IshRa was best-i love that song.

loved these lines
Raman-pagal to already banachuki ho aur kya banogi.

R-kya? Mein kaha sabse bulvata hu yaar mein to hamesha yeh sochta reh tu hu tumhari bolti kab khatam hogi. Lecture sunsun ke mera khoon hi kardogi na tum

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Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

So sweet.Loved it.

MiMi fight was so good and cute.
IshRa were as usual tom and jerry.
Antakshari sequence was wow...
all songs were sweet and suited the jodi also. IshRa was best-i love that song.

loved these lines
Raman-pagal to already banachuki ho aur kya banogi.

R-kya? Mein kaha sabse bulvata hu yaar mein to hamesha yeh sochta reh tu hu tumhari bolti kab khatam hogi. Lecture sunsun ke mera khoon hi kardogi na tum

Waiting for next update


Thanks a lot yaar
Oh! That is one of my favourites too
Glad that you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesum update! Loved ishra cute nokjhok!
Song selection for all couples were perfect!

Cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update..
Cute family moments...👏👏
Thanks for pm...😊😊
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Originally posted by: avni_19

Awesum update! Loved ishra cute nokjhok!
Song selection for all couples were perfect!

Cont soon..


Thanks a lot dear
Glad that you liked it
Will cont. soon
Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago

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