Ss ' jeevan saathi ' updt 19 pg 126 july 15 pm later - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Hehehe loved the contrast they were imagining lol... Sweet= sour
Naive= bold
For a change its different from original concept. Ruhi wasn't a baby but a babe.
Thanks for sharing.



wow you already read it thank you so much for it yes I add ruhi she will be here again im glad you like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi a big thx to all of you which you like this concept im so happy with your comments thx a lot .

I hope will cont make good updt for you all .here we go sorry for mistake or wrong spelling.

as you guys know ruhi too is in I keet it as a suprise. you will saw her in new avatar here.

jeevan saathi

part 2

scene start in university

where mihir hide near a pillar n wait for some one.

Ishit who was walking in bad mood as raman has spoilt it. she was murmured too n some one call her.

hi chachmich.

sorry . she turn with anger n stare at the guy.

yes I said hi chachmich why Im wrong. the guy

oh hello I did not give any body to call me like this understand. she walk away.

are you sure you never give some one the permit to call you as chachmich ishita iyer. the guy ask

she return on hearing her name how can he know her name from her mind she talk.

what happen ishita uff chachmich St joseph college brillant student.

stop I know you read my file right I saw you along with that boy group . in a tone she told


wow you are really smart im impress chachmich.

I told you nobody has the right to call like this only my only friend who call me like this. she become sad .

oh that friend means a lot for you it seem right if you think of him why not close your eyes who knows he can be infront of you.

you talk just like him he too used to say this.


you remember his words but could not regonize him han. he did his hair as he used in college.

wow it you taile ki dukan tum yaar im so happy to see you . both hug n was smiling with happy face too


raman who was passing n saw both hug n look happy he was shocked n .

he talk to himself

wow mihir too good first day n hug you prove you are with me, but this girl dont look like a faster girl to get fool but both are the same grade too cont mihir let me go for my next target.

ishita " arey tail ki dukan you have change a lot that why I could not regonize you yaar.

mihir " yes I change my look but you are still the same chachmich, that why I regonize you n come here to here what n how you would deal with raman.

ishita " oh his name is raman n you walk with this type of guy .

mihir " his my bro, wait is that really you ishu or some one else.


ishita " it me your ishu who used to be so naive that others used to crash her but not any more now I become rude if any one do rude , but you have change no taile now.


mihir " yes like you should change right, heh if you are here means your sis mihika too.

ishita " yes she too she did not change but im sure she will not be rude with u as you are not the tail ki dukan now. with laugh

then both leave to retor.

raman friends ask him what happen with behenji did she believe he was the rector.

he said no she is not so naive but she will know raman bhalla soon .

at the same time mihika arrive in car when she came out from the car raman n his friends was looking at her how sexy n hot she look the way she walk just as a model.

raman told his friends this one is mine my new girlfriend im going but as a teacher do as I told you ok.

he leave them as mihika was walking n every boys eyes was on her n said wow.

she feel happy to hear how others was lost in her beauty .

raman act as a teacher n stop her on seeing .

raman " oh girl this is the time to come almost time to enter in class. as a teacher mode.

mihika " im sorry sir , with traffic I got late.

raman " it ok I can know to be ready like this too it take time right. with his killer smile

mihika " sir tomorrow I will be on time promise.

he put his arm around her shoulder n .

ok baby you can take all time but be like you are I like girl who is smart like you . he told her BR]
one his friend come to him and greet him as sir n leave .

sir what subject you do. she ask

love subject that why my eyes was only on you beautiful. he reply

oh thank you sir I must go now even you look hot for a teacher sir. she told him

she leave raman was just stare her body while he was walking n say yes she is that girl how sexy she is.

hi raman one his friend arrive.

hey romi .

what up buddy you did not came yest . romi ask raman.

yaar I was not feeling well why there was new things happen. he ask

arey there was one easy hot sexy girl yaar she said she will join here today that why I came to meet her n to show you how sexy she is yaar my heart was lost in her. romi told to him BR]
wow arey yaar I just got my sexy hot girl too I act as a teacher n she believe me too yaar. rama. said

they laugh then attend classe too.

lunch time in the cateen mihika was eating raman go to her n ask if he can sit next to her.

she say yes sir. then raman laugh n tell her he is not a teacher but last year student raman bhallah .

im mihika iyer ur junior .

both shake hands raman dont leave her hand .

ishita come there n say dont you want to hold my hand too.

on hiting his foot.

aw what is your problem han . he ask in a tone

why hold her hand only introduce with me too. ishita talk

oh jealous han ok raman bhalla name to suna hoga . he forward his hand to her .

no I did not hear it n take mihika away.

attitude han with raman bhalla. to himself

wow the hot handsome guy is alone that too on his first day. a girl from behind him talk

he turn n say oh ruhi hi baby what up . he act

dont fool me raman im not that girl whom you just talk right I know you well . she said

ruhi thank god you know Im not interested in you let be friend like we just to be you are a friend of mine you arw not my type of girl sorry but I told you from the bigenning right. he told her.



ok lets be friend again if you say .

they check their hands .

both leave the canteen too .

end of the classes

mihir met ishita n say bye to her n leave .

ishita wait for mihika but then she leave too as she was taking time .

romi meet mihika then make introduce to raman . mihika n raman laugh n say we know each ever .

mihika before leaving raman told her he will pick her at night .

romi " saley you pick her too .

raman " she is the girl whom I told you but u .

romi " she is tthe same girl of last night yaar .

both leave

at night ishita was talking with mihir on phone . she saw a car n it was raman he was flashing both girls room . mihika walk on the roof ishita call her from the window in aa lower voice . she cont going

raman who see how mihika should pass to arrive till the road he was stunned .

he ask her while not used door then they leave .

next day raman come to pick mihika iyers did not like it but she never cares for their reputation .

in unvers mihir meet mihika both hug talk too . raman did not live to see her with mihir .

day pass well ishita n mihir spend time together in library for study

raman know when he did to study n when to enjoy too .

mihika she was not at all interested for study but only to be out of home .

thx

hansa

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hope you will like it please do comment will wait for it .

next ishra will haress each ever



Edited by pretty_h - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
awesome update dear!
Mihir n ishita wow! tail ki dukaan & chashmish 😆 ...seems mihir is hero han knows ishita & mihika both😉
Precap seems interesting😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: jiyaa02

awesome update dear!

Mihir n ishita wow! tail ki dukaan & chashmish 😆...seems mihir is hero han knows ishita & mihika both😉
Precap seems interesting😃



wow thank you so much jiyaa fir this sweet comment im glad you like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
This is ur best story I read till date dr.
I didn't know u updated this one coz didn't check my inbox recently.
Ishita's dream boy like Mihir and Mihika's dream boy like Raman. Even Raman's dream girl like Mihika. What a twisting tale is this?
Opposites do attract type story na?
Update sn. Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: pretty_h



wow you already read it thank you so much for it yes I add ruhi she will be here again im glad you like it

I told you I am a fast reader... So did fastly...
Now I am off to read 2 part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Liked the story and its continuity...
But I have something else to say.
Plz check the pm I send
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
nice update
loved new jodis😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update...
Thanks for pm...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Rashmi---

This is ur best story I read till date dr.
I didn't know u updated this one coz didn't check my inbox recently.
Ishita's dream boy like Mihir and Mihika's dream boy like Raman. Even Raman's dream girl like Mihika. What a twisting tale is this?
Opposites do attract type story na?
Update sn. Tnx 4 pm



wow this is a huge compliment from you im so glad you read this one too n love thank you so much for this sweet comment rashmi

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