Yeh Moh Moh Ke Dhaage - IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: _DarkLady_

Wow! How beautiful was that! 😊

Such artistry of words and emotions, served in perfect proportions.

You captured essence of the characters so exquisitely.

Loved how you took the inspiration from the song and connected the lyrics perfectly.

Brilliant!👏

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

This turned out to be a wonderful study break, anything musically inclined and you will find me there so no surprise that the title made me click on this OS because I am currently obsessed with this song. The melody, the lyrical beauty, the voices..everything about this song is sheer brilliance.

Thank you for penning this down, it was a treat to read.

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

u always make me speechless with ur way of writing stories..

all the emotions..words...feelings make me lost in the story..

this one was so beautiful..

loved it

the song was so apt for them..

the situation where she gets to know about his job..their convo..

acknowledging that they love eachother yet not saying it was so cute...

loved it

thankyou for the beautiful story!!!

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Awesome OS. I have been following all your OS's since along time back but couldn't comment. So, here is ny first comment on your OS. Superb piece of writing. :D

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Thats such a beautifully written os aani...love ur stories..i m a big fan of ur writing

thks for the pm

Originally posted by: avni_19

OMGGG Aani..Im in love with ths piece of your writing. Beautifully written. What IshRa shared in their room right from helping her, thn getting passionate, thn confrontation and again with lile hubby wife nokjhok and then sleeping together was such a beautiful journey.

Kash serial mei aise kuch dekhne ko mile! I could literally imagine all of it happening in the serial!

Write moreee! Im loving it!

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Reserved

Originally posted by: aaminah123

I loved the thought process in this one aani. She was distressed, more so on his behalf. And the way she was hurt was well portrait. Really enjoyed reading it.

Also thank you for the ending bit where they sleep together because on the show it seems like a long lost idea.

Originally posted by: Abisekar

U amaze me... It was awesome.. loved it..

I am glad Aani that i am not miss to read this story.it is awesome Sand really mix with emotion and passion.Ishu is angry is justified cause Raman not tell her the truth and she taught he not trust her at least it clear and he know how much Ishu love him and don"t want him to go to the pain.Sometime the circumstance made us has no choice have to follow the flow.And love him he know how pomade hisJKR mood better. I am sure we will not get this kind of story in the show it is happen in the your wonderful writing world.Thank you so much and have a fantastic weekend. Sorry for late comment dear.🤗