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Hsp.canada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: ashu9

Good to you having a blast of the day 😃😃😃
You should feed your boys whatever they want for their best behaviour 👏👏

I actually drove to India town and had all the oily food, boys behaved well as they got mango lassi & plain dosa, and some good old fashion threats that if u will bother mom today, u will have sleep alone in the attic 😉

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: Ranu1234
u are going to kill me di such a lovely update ..ponds powder and remember gokul sandal ?fond memories i can remember the smell ..

I totally totally loved the concern R&B has for her and always always does the right thing for her even when she is throwing a tantrum though in this case i feel her reason is valid how could he not call 😆 and not invite her to his house for dinner ..😡
and how he cared for her security in Ballys house was truely what makes us all gush for R&B

Him observing all her actions noting the perfume, noting the powder how she got ready for a doctor , ordering food just so real and natural.. totally totally cute

OMG also what happened to the ring 😭and why is he leaving by 4 .. here i was dreaming night dhabha and her getting better and them doing some shopping ..

Italics : 😆😆😆 People still use it at my place, my aunt is a fan of Gokul

Bold : I already started gushing and wishing secretly my man also does the same 😉😉

highlighted : Hain na ???

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Deal and Athai's Beau

4 ish she woke with a start, turned around, she saw him at the desk at all times... when she slept

but now... she sat up and saw the food trays were gone, her stuff was on the dresser...

She still wore her kurta like a dress with slits along her thighs

She felt fresh and crisp, her nostrils had dried out her fever was gone and she was hungry again...

She panicked and ran to the living room... he lounged on the couch with his looong legs stretched out on the coffee table OVER A CUSHION

so the edge does not poke into his "poor baby's" calves and was , TWIRLING his locks and reading a FAT paperback.

"Oh?" she said seeing him, a gurgling joy spilling out...😳

He lowered his book as she stormed through and turned

"Hey?' he said

Sitting up setting his feet down, she was gone... embarrassed she went checking on him...

He was changed into yet another cargo and a black Lacoste...showered...

He followed her, she busied herself looking for stuff in her tote bag...

"How are you feeling?' he asked leaning on the doorway of the bedroom

"Much better" "Thanks" "Its like I have my sense of smell back, and voice" she still sounded hoarse and raspy to him

She looked for clothes... palazzo pants with geometric patterns in magenta and a magenta blouse...

random magenta pink and black thick opaque bangles... that looked like tubes...

He approached the dresser, between a closet and the big flat screen TV

"Do u have a fever?" he asked

"Abhi ek dum nahi... we missed all the good food I mean... I was going to be there at 6"

"where is your ring?" he asked as she fidgeted with the zipper of her Minnie pouch

She froze...

"I have it" she said not looking at him😭

"Phew!" he said hiding his anger😡

"I was washing up too many times with the cold and everything so took it off"😈

"The one in your right hand didnt bother you much I take it?" he asked

She looked at him, hiding her hand behind her back.., feeling her emerald ring

AYYYO II, TERRIBLE JOB OF HOODWINKING HIM

HE HAS HAWK EYES... RAKSHASAN

He waited... she brought the hand out, opened her Coach bag, and pulled it out of a compartment...

"Here" she said... attempting to give it back?

He took it from her hand, reached for her left hand and put it on her...

"next time you run away, u must take both rings off (dont you think)?" he held her left hand...

She stepped back and he stepped forward, and she did and he stepped forward...

"Should we make a deal?'

"paying for the ring?' she asked smiling weakly

"Oh u can worry about that after the wedding" smug

bas***d, BUY NOW PAY LATER 0 % APR SCHEME?

LOAN SHARK SAALA!!

"what deal?' she croaked

"I want u to text me every morning when u get to work and evening when u return home?"

"Kyon?' she asked ARGUMENTATIVE AS ALWAYS... NEVER ... I REPEAT NEVER LET BE SAID II MEEKLY ACCEPTS ANYTHING THE DUDE SAYS

EVEN IN COLD MED INDUCED STUPOR SHE CAN ARGUE

"Or I can text you" he asked

She turned red... at the possessive decree

"Do u want to know when I shower?' she asked

AYYYO II VAI MOODAVE MOODADA DI? WONT THAT STUPID MOUTH EVER EVER SHUT?

WILL YOU GIVE IT A REST ATLEAST SOME DAY? FOR 10 MINS? I BEG YOU.

"AND the color of your bra" he said

Leaning on his hand, his elbow anchored on the closet door, his forearm rustling against her behind ear tendrils and earrings...

"where I scrubbed more as I showered?" she offered

PIG!!

"sure" he said softly, barely audible

She rotated the solitaire enough to make it dizzy and throw up on her kurta...

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE STOP IT... it begged her...

"How long u applied lotion..." he reached for her pouch and got one out... and read "Philosophy Grace"? OUT LOUD

he opened it and smelled

She reached for it... there was another one he reached for "soul owner?"he asked

"It means ME"... "Of the scrub" (foot exfoliator)

His half smile came... and stayed

"Do u want to go through everything in there?" "I have atleast 15 of these You could read the ingredients too" she mocked

He reached for a bunch of bindis... and counted... "18 II?" he demanded

"Gimme that" she grabbed

He didnt let go... he fanned them out like cards...

Pick one" he said she crushed and grabbed them all "Vidu da" she hissed

He bent down on her neck... feeding hungrily, she craned her neck sideways allowing him access to it all...

"You thought I left didnt you?" he said

"I wanted you to" she lied, undoing all the twirls he had created painstakingly in 3 hours trying to read...

He gathered her and hugged her... she let go of all her bindis and allowed herself to be picked up and taken to bed

He lay her down and lay by her...dragging all the pillows to offer him head support and back

She adjusted her head on his arm, snuggling...

"Your pouch contains nothing probably.. u dont shave... u probably use hotel soap...

and u never comb your hair... not to mention you dont get periods"

His body shook as he laughed... she stared shocked first as she tried to figure out what the hell was going on

spell bound later...NEVER having seen him laugh.

"How long do u have to go to Paris"

"Do "I" have to go?" he stressed on the "I"

"I wasnt invited" she said huskily

"Do u need (the invite) over email or a snail mail" he asked playing along

"which ever has a preview feature" she said "so I can get a taste?"

His legs began to intertwine... rubbing against her smooth buttery ones.. hairy coarse and prickly...

"another baguette perhaps?" he asked

She punched him.. He smiled...

And he bent over... as she arched towards him like whatever was inbetween was highy charged...

like the 4th grade science experiment he was the nail filings and he was the U shaped magnet,... every bit of her clung

his hand going over her bare leg from waist to knee..

she twirled his hair like she watched him do it, he guided her to a spot he liked to twirl the most and rotated it like how he likes

And groaned at the effect her finger tip created...

His phone rang... she gently extricated herself and moved... he released her half undone braid the last...

It was Bally

"Do u want to go to dinner? at his house?" he asked looking fully at his text

"Wont you mind?" she asked shocked

"If we eat?' he asked

"To eat at Bally's?"

"No" he said

"What did u make for Akka?" she asked putting clothes in the bathroom, acting unconcerned he looked at her from between his lashes

"Italian"

"Kya kya banaya, sab kuch apne aap? ya Mahavir helped you? Ya that other short guy or the 4th or the 5th"

"They have names" his lips twitched... as he watched her stutter and fumble vaguely

She entered the bath, and turned... "Khaana Kya banaya?"

"Ravioli and egg plant parmesan, ordered the Tiramisu from Maurya"

Her eyes lit up and blew out like candles...

"II come here"

"Ummm nahi" she said... looking at her feet

"Did Shravu eat?'

"Everything" he said

"Hmmm" it twisted a knife in her heart.. she wanted to be Shravu's most fab/fave cook, friend, partner in crime and everything

"Where is your phone?" he asked he had packed it last nite in her purse

She sneezed maniacally

"Mera phone dead hai ek charger tum le gaye... us Sunday ko, and doosra desk par hai,

car charger pata nahi kidhar hai Amma uses Galaxy note ... koi charger nahi hai, some people have ONE...

just ONE and spend a decade never losing it I buy a

charger WHENEVER I go to the Saket Mall with Shravu and thats atleast once every two weeks and YET

I dont have a charger" she came out of the bathroom with a page long essay... rummaging through her puch first and purse later...

"Ennoda charger kudu da"(give me my charger) she leaned on the closet... waving the phone at him

"Its in the living room" he said dryly

She went there stomping and charged her phone, there were many texts from Amma and Akka

She responded with "I am much better! Almost all better" she typed and smiled

akka texted back... "Khana kaisa hai?"

II:Ummm niice"(lying ofcourse)

Akka: kisi hot bande ke saath flirt mat kar abhi tu engaged hai

II: Abhi ek bed par leta hai, apni phone par baat kar raha hai

Akka: R&B ki tarah to hoga nahi

II: Us se zyaada handsome aur mere jitna bolta hai

Akka: Po di! U fell for the quiet one

II blushed...

Akka texted " Hey u guys are engaged, u are there he is here, kal bhi nahi aayi tu, dont u guys miss each other?"

"Ask HIM" II texted

And waited

"I did and he says "Who is Ishita?"

PIg!" II texted "Why did u ask him?" II sent a fury emoticon

"Ayyyoyo dont let Amma hear you say that, she will kill you"

"I will say it when she is not looking" II said

"ennoda charger todaade da" (Dont TOUCH my charger) (warning)

"didnt your Aunt ask you not use da?' he smiled biting his lower lip... she flung a pillow from the floor straight at him

"Athaiya kalyanam pannikko" "Get married to her" she went to the bathroom and slammed the door on him🤣

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Hsp.canada

@Hsp.canada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Doing Google on doctors is so random here!!! I wasn't aware that people did that back home also.

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harshita

@harshita27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Started reading this in the weekend. I am not a tamilian/south indian and yet I think I like your complex raman!! Awesome writing

Edited by harshita27 - 10 years ago

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Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: Hsp.canada

I first watched B&B when I was a teenager, then stopped. Again watched it when moved to US out sheer excitement, had same reaction...crap. Watched it again when Ridge died... Just after 2 episodes I said Crap again. It's one show everybody has slept with Ridge and so has Brooke. It beats Indian drama... That's why it comes in daytime...

🤣 With so much CRAP, I dont think I will be able to watch it one bit

Thanks for suggesting me not to watch it 😛😛

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: ashu9
Review for Lies and Ponds
Okay now this also pisses me off and shocks me to the core " he felt her fingers softly... reaching instinctively for the ring he gave her... it was GONE!" 😲😲😲. I am very sure in her seething rage she must have dropped it off accidentally in her cabin after the phone cal, or in Bally's room, or in the cab she travelled in, or at home in Periappa's room, or in her room, or in Bally's car, or in that huge fort, or in his SUV !!! Dude is gonna be so damn pissed now 😭😭
"He wondered how many words were stored in her brain, she had an endless litany of complaints and accusations...
Tamil, Hindi English, a mixture... a cauldron of colors... like she was... it was short of Punjabi, once she acquired it the cauldron would blow up spraying all over" also runs in my mind whenever she opens her motor mouth 🤣
U are a lying witch"👏 😲😲😲 Is it him speaking????????
"U cant be harmonal... coz u had your period last week, so u must be guilty ☺️ such a bas**** indeed he is
"AND U EAT BACON? WHO EATS BACON? HOW CAN U EAT BACON?" she demanded, I have similar doubts II, when people say they eat bacon 🤢🤢
Haan main sooongi aur tum chaley jaaogey Dilli mujhe maloom hai, u cant wait to go back... go back, Why do I see him going back 😭
I dont have to be in Delhi until 4, so I can leave at Noon, bloody 😡😡😡, see I knew it..He will go 😭😭😭
CHECKED his credentials
Looked it up on Google... and when he satisfied himself
Went in to tell her...😲, who does that!!! This dude is extra careful and ermmm alert 😕😕
Ermmm my doctor is a woman",🤣 I do this, I always do this, Thats the bestest reason I give NOT to see a doctor
Next time I will ask for the gender, 😡😡 I HATE YOU MAN
mma always said you dont go to the doctor LOOKING sick... so hair had to be combed,
she would dab some Ponds powder on II even if she couldnt change into clean clothes, This is what happens with me 😭. I shrug off my mum saying " sick people should look sick and not freshened up as if going out for a party" 🤢🤢🤢
I see him going off, settling the bill, keeping the car and the guard for her there itself and she waking up startled to all this 😭😭😭

FABULOUS!! Maza aa gaya To me it feels like reading a chapter

Read the next one You should say "DEAD" like u do😉

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Hsp.canada
Doing Google on doctors is so random here!!! I wasn't aware that people did that back home also.

Oh really?

In the US I have usually been able to find a picture, credentials and ratings etc through a hospital health system they are employed at or thru the primary care network...

I just "painted" India with the same brush, since Indian Doctors are so popular WW, and since they are staying at a 5 star hotel they probably dont have a quack on their reference list?

I try to be logical even though its fiction... may be itne logic ki zaroorat nahi hai but it makes reading more credible

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: blue5sky
Life has been so tiring and emotionally draining these few days.. not that it stops me from reading but does stop me from writing back to you 😭 and spending like forever in the thread.
everything gets analysed by the time I get here 😃. BUT you can never have too much of the good thing though! 👏👏 for great writing.

I loved Bally /II- I too have benefitted from older friends like Bally - the hindsights they selflessly share are so precious
* like Suman you are married to a night owl.
* you are the silent one the dynamite is inside ...
* usko bol na

Also loved the oh so little R&B and dad convo.He surely knows what ticks for R&B and he thinks II is just the perfect fit 😉.

R&B feels it too...he is still getting his head around her need to be clingy. Esp for a feisty woman like II it's hard. She jealous of Shravu and that's surely not sexual - that was neatly slotted in...

Poor II - so much like a girl in love. She wants to be with him so badly and is also scared her world as she knows it will change so much.
Interesting and want more...tantrum queen meets king sized ego and the two are so fatally attracted to each other. Miss each other when they are not in each others arms...but fight the minute they meet and stay away waiting for the other to reach out...
Ms Solution Provider carries a dead phone because she wants her man to charge-her!😆
R&B is now caring and worried about her that's sweet...
😊
Jaldi next one post karo...

He has to approach it real carefully you know, she is very self respecting, if she even gets the slightest inkling that HE KNOWS her Appa is causing her grief, she will completely withdraw

I mean "HOW can II reveal to the "enemy" (according to Appa he IS😆) how she feels about Appa. That would be betrayal and plain wrong😳.. R&B knows fully well Appa hates him...he can also see she is vulnerable and lost... she is afraid to admit she needs him because if she admits that means she is not being faithful to Appa.

Though she wants to marry him be with him and craves for him, she is bothered by the fact that Appa hates him completely... PLUS she knows he has always dated confident, "cool" women who dont act like babies... she wants to put on an act as long as she can😳

HE has never been a emotional anchor to any one... not to his sisters not to his Dad not to his girlfriends... this is totally new territory for him...

Both are in their first set of swim lessons, she is lying about knowing swimming... he is pretending to know CPR

Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago