All Of Me, Loves All Of You - IshRa SS | Last Chp - Page 89 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Updated comments on page 5
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay you're back!

Great piece Aani 😃 Can't wait to read the rest!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful start
am already looking forward to next part
and yes...i could actually imagine everyones faces at that talk..nyc scene portrayed

But suspense is smthng which am waiting to see how gets unfolded

Cont sOon
thnks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I finally edited on Page 2 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathibalan

Another piece of art from you Aani!! and an SS this time..



The Title and the quotes are superb!
Ramans concern, the way he yells when helpless and affected..Perfect!!
and his answer to Shagun was awesome👏
Simmi and Rinki teasing the couple.. Hilarious😆

Ru Bacchas concern and guilt.. Aww.. One of the most beautiful relationships IMO.
and she is her papas beti after all but with her Ishimas maturity. ❤️

Ishita - Her nervousness and confusion is palpable And the way you have ended this tells me more emotional turbulence is on the way☺️
Loving It

Thanks Aani - for writing so beautifully and sharing it🤗

P.S. I am glad Ishita did not Win the race for a change. Winning hearts is her forte and she has already won the ones that matter to her


Thanks a lot Swathi 🤗

I am so glad you liked this part so much hope the rest of the story continues to enthrall and excite you just as much 😳😃

And I am a realist no way with the injuries she sustained could she have won in my work. 😆 I am all for good winning, only my definition of a victory differs from that of the cvs by a considerable margin :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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take your time Bhu 😊
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take your time Nichhs 😊
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take your time Anku 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: luks28

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OMG !!! so happy to see Story written by you Aani😊 after a looong time.. Running to read it


take your time Luks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: btalwar

I got busy ... 😭 ... Res

Aani ... to begin with ... I agree whole heartedly with Lia ... as much as I was excited that you are back with another work of yours ... the fact that I have to wait for each chapter until the tale unfolds is killing me ... so I officially forbid you to write another TS/SS/FF ... 😛 .. pleej to write only OS 😆

So now that I have taken out my dil ki bhadaas ... 😳😛 ... what do I think of it ...

Well ... due to the discussions, I already knew what is going to happen and what r the premises of this piece, yet despite all this, I did not for one moment feel that I already knew it ... its like watching a brilliant movie ... I had read the review, read praises about it, yet I was engrossed in it the moment I stepped inside the movie hall ...

I especially loved the preamble to this story ... a good story needs an impressive start ... and somehow, I loved the way it started ... the mixture of confession, apprehension, nervousness and "This is it" stance ... it set the tempo of this piece so beautifully ☺️

You know when you had mentioned this idea, I always wondered, how will you corner them amongst the abundance of relatives they stay with; not to mention (Ap)Shagun ... I knew it will not be the cliche "every person went out for movie ", so I was honestly intrigued as to how and what ... and your answer to my curiosity ... ⭐️👏 ...

Raman's answer to shut (Ap)Shagun ... I could so imagine Raman mouthing these lines ... and the entire clan as well as Ishita's reaction ... 😆😆😆 ... loved it to the core; the teasing by both Simmi and Rinki ... gosh ... how I wish this happened in the series too ... khair ... that is wistful thinking ...

The last leg ... ☺️ ...aiyooo ... Aani I love you and hate you at the same time ... I could literally feel everything when I read it ... not visualize it .. feel it .. I felt the nervousness both these souls had ... of course I had an additional feeling ... the feeling that .. "Oh no, this part ends right after few lines ... dammit, I will have to wait for the next piece"

Am seriously contemplating bribing you to secretly send me the entire piece beforehand 😛😛 coz this wait is not so good for my mental health ...

Jaldi se update the next part pretty please 🤗




Thanks a lot Bhanu for this sweet comment 😃🤗

Now for the complaints part you know this was supposed to be an OS initially but then we all got talking and one thing led to another it became a TS and then a SS 😆 so dont just blame me, blame yourself and the rest of our gang too for this 🤣

Like I said the idea was to show she fell during the race where the whole family is present even the precious GKC in my tale so it would be so weird if everyone decides to go to a movie or something when she fell in front of them, also it would be cliche and I dont do them much ☺️ also you would see why everyone was needed in the next part 😳

I am so glad you liked the beginning to this tale - it has a semi-erotic, somewhat sexual undertone but by the end of it I hope it changes that line of thought 😳

Hope you love the next part just as much

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