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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Beautiful update..

I really loved the way u wrote Ishra conversation..👏👏

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-kri-

@-kri-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Awesome...Thanks for the PM Aani... Missing you in LU thread

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

awww what a cute part
these 2 are so adorable😳
amazingly written as always hon👏
excited for the next part😃

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: Nazz_naz
Not fair... itna chotu sa updateee...

phir b it was awesum... 👍🏼

thanks dear 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: swathibalan
Aani -Yes, the title fits this chapter but it fits your readers' predicament more.

Please note Friends should not be
1. Injected with slow poison
2. Provided with cliffhangers so that they keep pulling their hair wondering whats gonna happen next
3. Given an update which keeps nagging them while they are working on other day to day activities

Having said that, I know there are 4 more parts to go and this update must be like the calm before the storm.
But that doesnt mean I wont complain that I want more..

But what you wrote is again a very natural and amazing followup to last part.I loved the banter and the transition from a comfortable banter to shyness and awkwardness.
They always hide their confusions and emotions using banter..

Biwi getting physical on puttar was funny, reminded me of a book I just finished😆.. But am glad puttar is correcting her approach to getting physical, especially with all the talk about sinning(thats my gutter mind @ work😛).

And this time I Demand a quick update. and we know to gang up and bug you. Yes. Its a threat!

😆 9 chapters Swathi, 9 chapters thats all I can and will say again and again and LOL this UD is special I became dark lord and Sardar all in the course of one 🤣

I cant help but have some tiffs between them - you know I love couples who can have a verbal sparring session so much

As for Puttar giving her hints for becoming physical 🤣 he wants to wrestle her - cant get anymore explicit than this can he? well he can but I WONT go there 🤣

Now like I already mentioned you are a genius, get ready for the STORM 😈

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: MidnightMusings
Rehem dark lord _/\_

' A woman who knows her value and does not settle for anything less is dangerous' and that's freaking You! -.-
Such a short update. I was so deep into it and.

Yeah just like that, full stop 😭

Khair, keeping my broken heart aside ! .--💔--.

Biwi gets so physical on puttar 🤣 My heart goes for him. Imagine Ishita would have been healthy toh kya kya jhelna padhta 😆 Ohoo wrestling 😆 ☺️ I love how they tease each other. There's nothing more intimate than that. I mean there is, but yeah, just pretend you got my point!
I like how she blushes at the right places.. Equality doesnt mean you go all manly right?!? 😉

Raman being so considerate and careful just melts my heart into liquid 😆 😉

Bottom line is both sinned enough to get each other. Now tell her to put that shirt quietly! Bas!

I enjoyed this part so much -no I haven't yet forgotten how short this is- the reactions are so typical of what we see. Or maybe you wrote it so well that couldn't help but imagine it unfolding like when we 'watch' a scene.

Isse zyada jhooti taareef nahin kar sakti Aani. sorry _/\_

P.s: All of me hates all of you

p.p.s: No longer fangirling of you. hmph

🤣 I still LOVE you Lia 🤗 mwah 🤣

@bold - oooh I love that quote and thank you so much for saying its for moi ☺️ thats such a HUGE compliment ☺️

Puttar definitely would have wrestled her had these circumstances arisen when Ishita was healthy as you so eloquently put it 🤣

And of course being an equal doesnt mean you lose your feminity 😉😳

thanks love for this comment hope you wont hate me for what I do next 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: basriya
Written awesome..Pls do pm me further updates

thanks dear😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
Later

Aani (btw what's your name?) Ishita throwing tantrums to not wear Raman's shirt was really funny.. though Ishita would look really sexy wearing his shirt.. I can already imagine a few situations to what it can lead.

Just make Ishita better so that they can move on... You know what I mean😉

Aani is short for Aahana 😊

I do imagine a woman wearing her man' shirt especially his white shirt can look hot..not to mention its so intimate 😳

😆this one will stop at a certain point thats all I will say