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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishy13

This is so adorbs! Your story is perfect relief from the Sautan Saga we are currently privileged to watch!


Thank you Krishy. Ya, I am so sick of the sauten drama I actually got my lazy ass into gear to write again 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Angel13

Beautiful OS
Very emotional one
Awww both Ishra comfessed at last out of fear care love and what not
Loved raman very gently caring toward ishu

Well written
Thanks for pm


Thanks for reading Angel 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Best confession ever! <3


Awww thanks Mrinalini 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really enjoyed this OS. The way Raman and Ishita were scared for each other was beautiful. Thank God Raman came in time to save Ishita and truly the confession could not have happened at a better time. Loved the way Raman took care of Ishita afterwards when they were back home. This was definitely a perfect confession for IshRa.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rutu83

perfect!

for ishra, i find all this flowers, lights, and other cliched "grand" gestures superfluous - a perfect confession would be just like this. something that just slips out, not planned.
..and that i love you yaar ❤️
awesome os👏
special mention- the riot scene was really well written. you succinctly captured the suffocation of it.


Thanks Rutu. That's so sweet of you. Ya, I don't think Ishra need any grand gestures, and I was going to make this a simple confession but then it turned into a riot.




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ABBY92

Really enjoyed this OS. The way Raman and Ishita were scared for each other was beautiful. Thank God Raman came in time to save Ishita and truly the confession could not have happened at a better time. Loved the way Raman took care of Ishita afterwards when they were back home. This was definitely a perfect confession for IshRa.


Thanks Abby. I found the scenes where Raman took care of Ishita after she fractured her wrist to be so endearing. The way he brushed her teeth for her, cutting the apple, fixing her sari pleats - and all the time with his snark intact. Loved it, that's why I wanted to write some caring scenes in.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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V 😳 😳 ... I am so honored to be there amongst all those whom you dedicated this OS 😳 ...

Dramatic confession so much like IshRa 👏 👏 ... I like the way you brought up riot situation and was so close to the riotic track back in March !!! The tensed atmosphere , couples with their hearts screaming the love for the other ... Admired those descriptions and I could visualize !!! Haiyeee and the hug in the middle of riots !! Wah wah ... Kept reading those lines and then he carries her in to the bedroom

Loved the way he wiped her legs .. Such cute moments ... What an OS on the whole .. Loved their conversation through out and every single thing about this OS !! Thanks for this 🤗 ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very touching confession...totally loved it😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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V - Awesome...
Fultu filmy style...
Loved the scenarios...the angst ...the bechain...& finally confession...
U should have written the after confession part too...may be a second part to this...😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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mindblowing it was...
both of them were afraid fr the other...
gud timing to say ilu...
haha... bechara ru bachcha ab mumma papa ke beech mein jagah nh milegi...


gud one...

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