FF - Way Back Into Love || Last Chapter on page 142 - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Last two parts were damn good yaar..Brilliant is the word.👏👏You have a unique writing style and I m loving it.The love,the pain,the desire,the passion,emotions,you have expressed everything soo beautifully and the FLASHBACK part..their first time god that was brilliantly written.👍🏼
Thank you for adding that scene.😃Keep it up..eager to read the next part. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
sad. Very sad. Hope she gets well soon and raman and ishiya come back together :) loving it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update...
Such a brilliant one..
Awesome writing...👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
how poignant and moving was that..you nailed it Amna..what came through was just how tormented these two are without each other.

loved the little things he notices about her right from the start-during the first day at the office, how her 'soft fragrance' engulfs him; how he notices her slouched shoulders and how it clearly affects him. shows how insanely attuned Raman is to Ishita beneath the rough exterior. he is clearly pining for her but is tamping down his feelings due to the MU. nothing can bring out just how conflicted RKB is at the moment than the fact that although he can't help but notice that she has made the coffee just the way he likes it, he wonders miserably if this is a charade she is putting on or if she was play-acting all along😔

And Ishita's POV is just as agonised and jumbled as his. Not wanting to think of the 'last hour of her life' yet unable to stop herself from soaking in the solace she gets from having him by her side, mixed with the self-loathing she feels when she thinks of her baby fighting for her life..

Absolutely loved the subtle way you linked Ru's near-fatal illness with Shagun's heartless act of abandoning her baby.

yeh dil maange more but you know that, right😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shavi2311

so ruhi is ill...

ruhi is shagun's or ishra's daughter...??

raman finally convnced...

ishu slap was nt expctd...


waiting fr nxt...


Yep, she is sick. She is shagun and ra,an,s daughter which is why naonre marrow was required otherwise she could have been the donor herself.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swathin

superb update
loved both the parts
i never thought raman will actually sleep with her
for his own ego
loved her words of regretting it later
which he didn't of course
next part revealing the ruhi illness was unexpected
waiting to read more
try to update soon


Thank you! Well, they have been away from each other for a year and I thought it was appropriate when he could get her in bed on his terms.

I shall try!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iyuvi

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Last two parts were damn good yaar..Brilliant is the word.👏👏You have a unique writing style and I m loving it.The love,the pain,the desire,the passion,emotions,you have expressed everything soo beautifully and the FLASHBACK part..their first time god that was brilliantly written.👍🏼
Thank you for adding that scene.😃Keep it up..eager to read the next part. 😊


Thank you!

Im glad you enjoyed every bit of it. The flash back, isn't it awesome? I love it too. Thanks again!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi21

sad. Very sad. Hope she gets well soon and raman and ishiya come back together :) loving it


Hope so too!
Thank you :)
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Originally posted by: VENBA

Beautiful update...

Such a brilliant one..
Awesome writing...👏👏


Thank you so much venba!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: beyul

how poignant and moving was that..you nailed it Amna..what came through was just how tormented these two are without each other.


loved the little things he notices about her right from the start-during the first day at the office, how her 'soft fragrance' engulfs him; how he notices her slouched shoulders and how it clearly affects him. shows how insanely attuned Raman is to Ishita beneath the rough exterior. he is clearly pining for her but is tamping down his feelings due to the MU. nothing can bring out just how conflicted RKB is at the moment than the fact that although he can't help but notice that she has made the coffee just the way he likes it, he wonders miserably if this is a charade she is putting on or if she was play-acting all along😔

And Ishita's POV is just as agonised and jumbled as his. Not wanting to think of the 'last hour of her life' yet unable to stop herself from soaking in the solace she gets from having him by her side, mixed with the self-loathing she feels when she thinks of her baby fighting for her life..

Absolutely loved the subtle way you linked Ru's near-fatal illness with Shagun's heartless act of abandoning her baby.

yeh dil maange more but you know that, right😆


Such a long comment! Thank you 😃

They both are totally, irrevocably and truly in love but the misunderstanding changed everything, which reminds me I need to work on the plot. I so hope it makes sense when it surfaces that is.

Thanks again beyul!


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