reminiscing ishra moments...#2 ishra new update on pg 52 17th feb

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Spana_stylo

Just saw your schedule.. 15th feb(I think that was the most possible last date available :P) If its okay with you ...

yea i dont have any issues...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Yeah I'm okay with 15th feb.. Err.. I think, I'm some what nervous..

Because I don't want to spoil this thread with my stupid writings so...

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SAKIV

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Spana_stylo
Yeah I'm okay with 15th feb.. Err.. I think, I'm some what nervous..

Because I don't want to spoil this thread with my stupid writings so...

Buddy all this going here is romantic os's .

Known to me there is no one worser than me for writting romance.

Don't worry.You can't make worser than me.I challenge you on this.

Lets see who will make worst OS.

Just kidding.No need to be nervous.Eack work is independent.You just are making an regular OS.But only difference is some one else gave you topic.

No need to get tensed.

You are one of the best writers of forum by you making a post it will improve thread but not other way

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Buddy all this going here is romantic os's .

Known to me there is no one worser than me for writting romance.

Don't worry.You can't make worser than me.I challenge you on this.

Lets see who will make worst OS.

Just kidding.No need to be nervous.Eack work is independent.You just are making an regular OS.But only difference is some one else gave you topic.
No need to get tensed.

You are one of the best writers of forum by you making a post it will improve thread but not other way

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I agree with vikas you are one of the best writers... I added u in the list... Wait for tomorw evening... If i get new writer they will challange or i will challange you by tomrw evening

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

@SAKIV thanks for making me feel better..

*off to sleep* BBL

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

all challanges upadted on pg 1...

updates will start from tomorw...

who want pm's send buddy request to --------------------shavi2711

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: pretty_h
tomorrow will got it

waiting fr ur updte dear...

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

hi guys im glad to get a challenge from vikas I will do my best to do it nice for you sorry for spelling ir mistake. feel free to read😃.

ishra are still not confess n no kids. here we go

Os family n ishra picnic

it was saturday afternoon raman said to the family tomorrow will all go for picnic n all happy ishita was most.

next day everyone was ready all ladies in jeans n blouse men thirt n jeans but ishita wear salwar kameez. raman was not happy with her clothes.

every one enter in the bus raman said ishita will go with me in the car. she was disappointed wanted to be with others but raman dont want. raman was following the bus.

all couples sit together simi n romi sit together.

in car ishita was quiet when raman was talking to her she only say hmm yes nothing more.

in bus they were all enjoying with songs jokes shouts dance every things. ishita who can see how they were enjoying but she not. raman know how to change her mood so he start. .

madrasen cant you wear clothes like others ladies even mama has wear jean but you look at you .

what wrong I cant wear in front of papaji I should respect him.

oh hello madrassen we are going picnic n this type of clothes it better to wear who told you if you will wear this you will not respect papa nonsense.

how mean you are first you did not allow me to go with them n now you r saying im nonsense.

yes cant you see I want to be alone with you that why I ask you do be with me n you dont want to spend time with ok then go with them I stop car. in a sad tone he know what he was doing.

no no it ok I will go with you will be together later nah so it ok. she felt happy raman wanted to spend time alone with her.

he cont follow bus then signal arrive where bus left them behind. raman who got confused with other bus n follow it. ishita notice the bus n said.

raman it not our bus. it them ishita look carefully. no it not them n they all look like old peoples you loss our bus. what are you sure it not them why you did not say earlier. I told you raman but you will listen to me no so. ok i know where to go dont panic will reach where we should.

he cont the road . in bus was full on enjoyment .

ishra car stop in a middle way of forest both side only forest .

raman check n see wheel was punchuded n no petrol too.

why you stop here raman. not me the car stop here there no petrol n wheel got punched too. what how you did not check the petrol if it will be enough you have shown how bewakuf you r Ceo raman kumar. bewakuf n me how would I know all this will happen han I know I did not check but I can forget but cant you remind me why you are here. oh now you brought me only to remind all your need if we would be in bus this all would never happen. I know you are worried you are not there. ok stop this now how will go from here now no petrol how raman oh yes mihir. mihir what will he do n you think you will get network here try.

she try mihir mob it was on silent mode. toshi notice ishra car was not behind them n say to others. then mihir told them ishra will nit be amongt us raman did a surprise for ishita all was happy.

ishita send text to mihir about there prob but due to not have network it did not go. she said mihir may call them after seing her miss call. raman said he may not call as he would not like to disturb us. why disturb us when we are in trouble I dont understand. woh actually we both was not going to be with them but alone in other place. other place what are you saying raman. cant you hear I did a surprise for a romantic place but see what happen. really im touch you did for me but i why you did not told me. you know what mean a surprise. that means all knows even mihika. no nobody know only mihir but now all will know.

others arrive in the place a beautiful beach every one get down. mihika ask mihir why he keep the secret n learn a little with jiju see how he love akka. he said he refused me n I cant go against his words but will try to make mihika day a beautiful day.
he said both must have reach I dont know where bhai did the surprise but babhi must be happy. both smile.

raman now your romantic moment will be waste. who told you it goes waste my romance can start anywhere you know that nah. with a naughty face with the hot smile of him. what happen dont you want to see how romantic I can be. I know raman but. but what ishita .

n coming close near her seat. both get eyeslock n he was so close to her he caress her face with his finger which give her love feeling touch she close her eyes to let him cont the touch he kiss her forehead then both eyes n both cheeks then when he was about to do liplock he scream loudly with eyes closed

raman what happen why you are shouting like this. woh woh there your window. what is there from my window tell me. he was hugging her so tightly. when she turn n see a cockroj out on the window. she laugh a lot on him n she make it go.

raman see it gone now with laugh. he open his eyes n feel relief n angry on her due of her laughing. why are you laughing like this it happen. what a man like you scare of an insect like cockroj raman khuch bi. hahehe shut up now you will cont laughing go bring water im thirsty. go why me oh you are afraid if cockroj come again I will go.

she go to open the car box but nothing was there she was shocked what to do now n call him to tease him for his foolness again. raman come to see I cant see there are so many things please come n see. with anger he go n say cant you see with your big eyes water water. han say it water n food they are here right raman. how can that be possible I put them in the car. you keep in car but it disappear or may be cockroj have eat them right raman bhalla. how oh no it left there it all your fault. my fault now you forget to keep them n my fault how that possible. when you were enter the bus I came there then I forget it it happen im a humein being. oh if I would did the mistake then what would you say to me pagal bewakuf nah. ok sorry but what to eat n drink now. I know will eat air n drink wind what say let enter in the forest now. what forest are you pagal ho kya. you stay here I will go or if you have a better option tell me. no let go but hold my hand ok. im sure others are eating now .

vandy bala simi romi was talking on ishra n removing stuff for eat. bala say to vandu to rest due her pregnency. she told bala after wed you stop being romantic see how raman pamperded his wife but you. simi join her on saying all hubby are the same param too is the same. bala said yaar romi dont get married you will hear this too they never satisfy what we can do n your bro raman cant stop all this romance now. bala there love has just start to blosom so let them enjoy romi said. the four ask where are mimi now .

ishra in forest holding hands n walking raman some times put his hand on her waist n ask her to say the three words. she said first he should say first he said lady first some time she touch his chest when she talk. then they saw fruits but it was a little high n the trees was not enough strong for climb .he told her he will lift her n she can pluck them n he did she pluck on saying which place to move.when she was getting down there face was so close they can feel each other breath too. there body was close too he could feel her both breath touch his chest. he was out of control wanted to do love right there with her this time she was kissing him from forehead eyes cheeks then a lightly kiss on lip fast he could not believe what she did. n ask to do it properly she said let eat first .they eat raman said it tasteless she bite a bit n then he said now it good .they were sitting after eating raman head on her lap. he said sorry with her for bring her in the forest . she said it ok n said where she is with him she will be happy . her hand was on his chest doing some caress raman was was playing with her hair n some time kiss her hand too. then he ask for a kiss she said not here.

what dont tell me now animal will see us han come on give me my proper kiss . he bend her head to him but she stand fast n said first tell me the three words. he said first kiss me then. ok if you catch me I will. you are challenging me you will loss. lets see she run he after her some time between trees
he act he fall n she came to him on calling his name then feels his two strong arms around her n saw his smile face . I catch you now my kiss. you cheat I will not give you now when I will feel right I will. ok then I will not ask for it with anger act n leave her. he know she will not like to hurt him. then she come to him n hold his hand he leave her n walk.

she decided to do other thing like singing n she did she sing ( razab ja haidin socho zara yeh dewana pan deko zara tum ho akele hum bi akele hai kasamse) with hug he push her from back hug he remove her hands she stop his way he move away she climb in his back he let her go she did again twice time climb his back when she is not in front of him he smile n happy but when she is in front he cont his act. until she hide when he turn n dont see her he call her ishita ishita im sorry come out please then he too sing ( kiya karu mera jo haal hai raat dine tumhara gayal hai ) now he find her n both have a hug raman kiss her all other face then liplock both was lost in there kiss where they were moving they dont know only kiss n both fall n roll other each ever until they reach a lake both was wet but there hug did not broke he was hugging her so tightly. when they come out the water they saw a beautiful view.

flowers. beautiful butterflies a place where only for lovers place all types of fruits water melons apples mangoes so many a place where can rest sleep . both make each ever drink water there was waterfall too. then raman did fire both was sitting near the fire both put there hands near fire n put hands on each ever he pluck water melon both feed each ever after that they were lie down like a T ishita head on raman chest n his hand on her hair n her was on caressing his other hand n she said.

raman thx you so much this day I will never forget it is the most wonderful day of my life.

ishita I did not do any thing yes what I plan it not work n we reach here.

even you did not plan this here but it is beautiful I spend a lovely day here will have a lot to say to others for spend time with you that is the most beautiful things both alone only love all around.

yes you are right for me too this day will be the most memorable of my life let start it from here.

after he ask her to close her eyes n she did after a while he said open it when he open she was overhelm with his gesture all around her there was flowers which he write I Love You A Lot all around her n she was in a heart with red roses . she hug him n say loudly I love you too raman both write there names with heart on a tree like others did both hugs n kiss start n the make love he make her his new life start with flowers n good perfume there love start blosom they become one from heart till soul ishra for ever.

family got to know about them n they came to pick them later. family has pass a wonderfull day with playinv cards football mimi too has spend a romantic day bala who was happy baby did his first kick romi found sarika simi was happy to be with the family.

ishra join them too apart elders others tease them n pulling there legs. happy picnic to all.😃

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thx I hope I could reach your expectation if yes hit like button n leave comments too will wait for your critics too.

thx shavi this forest part was about do in my Os tum mere ho but I did not thx you give me this chance to do it here love you all .

vikas I will wait yours comment or critics the most.😃

my two other Os 😃

Tum mere ho

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4127791/os-ishra-tum-mere-ho-epilogue-pg-85-june-12

Woh kaun tah

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4119794/os-woh-kaun-tah-epilogue-pg-71-thank-note-pg-77

if you want to read .

hansa

thanks

Edited by pretty_h - 10 years ago

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SAKIV

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Nice one bUddy.

Raman actually planned special for his wife.

They willl never stop quarreling even in forest.

Nice one buddy.

You took the original one and midified to our convinience.

Thanks for writting buddy

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago

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Sakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Hansa. It was a lovely update dear. The whole scene in jungle was awesome. Ishra falling cuddled to each other was so romantic...

Raman did decoration with flowers. . it was so cute...

Loved it Hansa. Keep writing. great job ..

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 10 years ago

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