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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deernav

Have been trying to write since morning somehow couldnt..But have read the update innumerable times already.. After the update yesterday, was imagining all sorts of things about how the confrontation would be..I imagined R & B holding II and saying ' For sex's sake lets get married' considering the earth-breaking sexual tension between them..Glad i saw an intelligent conversation again between the two.. the way u used bookmarks to let R n B know about II was amazing..And since then have been refreshing the page every ten minutes for the next update.. hope we get one soon..


Hi!

This story is as much about sex as it is about their INTELLECT as well. HOW can their confession be all about sex, nahi? SO MANY actually believe this couple exists in real, that would have been impossible if it was all about sex.
Thank you for loving intelligent conversation. As much as I love sex and sex talk I feel intelligent back and forth contains the power to arouse more than anything else😃
THANKS VERY MUCH😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swaram

Dear Nisha

As I started reading the Gulzar segment a few times , I started savouring the different aspects of your writing

The beautiful poetic elements:

her long braid swung to the front bringing with it a garden of scent... multiple strings vied for his attention..."Look at me" "Oh I am here too"

She reached for them and shoved em, "Shut up and do NOT look at him"


Her lashes tried to blanket her steaming cheeks

Your intricate detailing of everything she wore, we can visualize it as you describe it.

Loved your choice of Sungudi half saree

Your unbeatable sense of humour even in the most passionate of encounters,

This had me in splits:

"If u in as much as touch me, I am going to use Appa's umbrella and u will have to go home using the walking stick"

Your beautiful choice of songs.

Amazingly coincidentally, I was listening to Gulzar's playlist on youtube a day before and I could only think of II and R&B esp on my favourite, "Aap ki ankhon mein kuch" . I was thrilled to see it become a beautiful part of this passionate love story.

The breathtaking romantic encounters

the way you build up the momentum for every romantic encounter between these two. The witty dialogues , the tangible sexual tension and then their passionate "encounter".

Take a bow Nisha ! I have not enjoyed a story so much in a long time. 👏👏👏


THANKS SO MUCH
LOVELY ANALYSIS. I have no words to express my gratitude. I am happy it was a mix of everything and not just all sex... She is extremely funny, I read OVER AND OVER AGAIN that men get turned on by sense of humor. A good laugh can turn a man on more than a pair of big boobs
(Sorry for the French). He is extremely intelligent... he couldnt have fallen for anyone else

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arya1991

Nishaaasa!

Next chapter yeppo update panna poringa?
Wait panna mudiyala.

I've been in LaLaLand all day!
Especially anda proposalku aprama.

My poor faculty. I think I might have scarred him for life. I totally lost my verbal filter after reading the update, and said super random shit to him, aloud in class. 😆

Hum ko ab jaldi se update maangta!


In the next hour I will wrap up this interlude in II's room and then tell us all about what he was thinking between 1 AM and 6 PM

Starting tonite, it will be all about both families' reactions and the preparation of a typical Iyer wedding

Since the dude cant wait, lets see how soon he can take her home☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nisha I read this one immediately after you posted it. Have been reading it at work, during tea breaks. Thankfully, it's a lull at work this week. I have nothing to say. Everyone here has said so much already and I concur. They've voiced everything I wanted to say. I'll get an ailment very soon. If not physical then mental. You have no idea what you've done to me and I'm not settling for anyone less than r&b now, for sure.
Going to read the part again with the songs playing in the background😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thank you for the PHENOMENAL numbers between last night and this morning... 4000 hits...

I am like SRK, in the sense...COMPLETELY, TOTALLY FULLY alone in the ..."IF-FF Industry"😃 I dont belong to any actor camps I dont belong to any character camps. I dont travel between shows/Forums with my groupies, assuring me of 100 hits for every word I post.
No Godfathers. no cliques, no benefactors

He rose to the top based on sheer talent and hard work, and this story has too. Thanks to the 50+ FAITHFUL READERS THAT BEG ME TO WRITE EVERY MORNING NOON AND NIGHT, and to COLUMBIA!!!

THIS IS ASTOUNDING😃

Being a nobody SRK rose to the top and SO DID I👏
That fact, I will never forget all my life😳


Nisha talent can never be hidden.. it comes out and only talent eventually sustains itself - vidya balan,SRK,AR Rahman,Illayaraja, and so so many more..
Nobody and I re-iterate NOBODY can write as many parts in this Forum or outside and keep the interest in each and every one.. writing an OS or writing 4 parts is something but writing 3 parts every day and having us all go when is the next is something else altogether.
I am a software professional , from a good school and pride myself regarding the books I read and HONESTLY you have me hooked to this more than II is to R&B.. just plain AMAZING!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.
And your audience is so cool because they get you & even reading comments in this thread is fun !!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
Nisha, to escape boredom.. Rather to quell the rising anticipation since morning inside me, I had decided to re read the story from thread 1. I had so much packing to do.. My books clothes and the rest.. I am travelling on Sunday again.. I had packed everything in just HALF HOUR. YES. I was reading the story since the first part and packed.
Trust me.. To this day, Feb is approaching, I am still as attracted and as intrigued as I was since the beginning of this story.. I read my comments with Colu's and yours.. The teasings.. Tje reploes.. Godd!! I have really made good friends here on the forum.. All thanks to you!!
Am still at that part where he texts hef about her office being closed on a sunday after that movie encounter..
I shopped today. My mum did. I stood by her, peering into the phone for old updates. I forgot where I was, how long it took mu mum.
M glad that I found this thread.. I am such a happy soul today.. I had a gloomy week by the way.. I was down.. Depressed.. But your updates simply elated my mood.. M gonna re read in the long distance train if I should finish the two threads before Sunday morning, which I believe wont happen..
Thanks a lot Nisha!!
Am waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Conditions & Cartier
Part 128


She paused the music...
When she said "I wont change my last name" it took him a few seconds to understand the implication of it... and he smiled fully😃

"Fair Enough" he said softly... a thought appeared and disappeared though for a
nano second... "Does she not want to be associated with the name "Bhalla" for the reason I DONT either?"😭😡
"Is that it he asked?" rubbing his smooth chin on her cheek...

"Umm" she muttered... dodging his straying hands

"I want a prenup" she said😲
He went completely still...he gently leaned her on the wall

"Whattt?" 😲
"I can add you to my accounts, but I dont want to be added to any of yours. I dont want any position in Excelsior or in its Trust or want a share of your personally acquired wealth" she finished hoarsely😳👏

His hands were in his pockets, it was very hard to tell when he was upset and when he was thinking, his face was so inscrutable😭
"Will you at least let me pay for your food?" he asked softly..😡
"And all the chocolates I plan to eat" she smiled feebly, causing a river of tears
He didnt wipe the tears off... this was going to be a bone of contention... one of many bones in their marital bag😭

"Have you thought about room and board?" he asked softly
"The window bed in the sun room is mine" she said huskily☺️
"Hmm" he grunted aroused.. unable to arrest a groan😳
"That aftershave lotion as well" she quivered, she knew he wont shave again... today was a hoax to "impress her Appa"☺️
"K..."

"If there is a window in the master bed.. I mean who am I kidding that house is a house of windows.. I want the non window side" she said softly☺️
His half smile appeared "Why?"😲
"I am afraid to sleep by the window" she said hoarsely😆

The mighty II that took him down at every opportunity had silly fears?😃

"Can I charge u for guarding you?" he asked softly... his eyes going over her body... her lil cigarette like rolled up note scrunched up on her cleft, her pallu completely off her curves
The foot long sash off her waist, a ruby red peacock like pendant inverted indicating "Knock before u enter, Couple intimate"☺️

He reached for her braid and used his index finger, left index finger and traced the back of it, pausing on every link... Amma had pulled tight this morning braiding it, so it wouldnt come off during the dance😳
Amma didnt care for the behind the ear locks "un Iyer like" she would say... so every carress on every link of the braid, sent her insides tingling... she moaned
Shutting her eyes, he didnt go all the way down, he KNEW when to return and retrace his path so she could tingle the most.. ☺️
"Add your charges to the prenup" she said hoarsely grabbing his tormenting hand☺️

"Oh we dont want the lawyers to read such agreements"😉

She smiled with her eyes shut...
"Will you charge me for water?"
"only if we dont shower together" he said☺️
"Ayyyo" she groaned😳

GOOD II, GET UP EVERY MORNING AND TAKE HIM TO THE SHOWER WITH YOU AT 7 AM...
NEE KALYANATHUKKU APRAM OFFICE PONA MADIRI DAAN☺️
Good luck getting to office after the wedding babe!!😆
He stepped foward...

"I dont want a new car" she continued...
He was listening deeply...

"U can pay for my clothes" she said
Her eyes still closed
"No" he said☺️
She looked up at him
"I wont" he said firmly

"Oh?" she said
"I will only pay for lingerie" he said☺️

GOOD GRIEF... THANKS VERY MUCH... COZ THATS ALL I WILL WEAR TO WORK
RAKSHASAN

"No jewelry" she said
"Agreed" he said
He shoved his hand in his blazer pocket to fish a tiny gold box out
C it said for Cartier...😲
W said II gasping for water😳

"U have to ask Mihir to stop putting away money now" he said looking at her eyes expressionlessly.☺️
SMUG bas***d!!

A FIVE CARAT CARTIER RING? A FIVE CARAT CARTIER RING? HE HAD HEARD WHAT SHE SAID TO MIHIR THAT EVENING AT SAM'S?
"All I need is a 5 carat ring who ever brings it I am his" she had said😳
She linked her hands in the back, strangely afraid, stiffening

Something told her THIS WAS IT, YOU ARE HIS NOW👏
This dangerously sexy brooding man that is unwilling to leave you alone
" I was joking" she croaked😭
"About the wedding?" he asked seriously☺️

"I" sputtered II
AYYYO HE IS A RAKSHASAN HE WILL USE EVERY BYTE OF DATA TO HIS ADVANTAGE... DECIDE FOR YOURSELF II
DO U WANT A LIFE OF TORMENT OR A LIFE OF LONGING FOR TORMENT, OR SPEND IT GRIEVING OVER UNREQUITED DESIRES😳😃☺️

He reached for her back, held her bangled wrist...

"I am OK" she said😃
She stepped sideways and forward and back... he pried her hand free from the other one...
Her bangles and anklets sang in unison...

He held the 5 carat rock in his left hand as he pried her left hand free with his right
A couple broke off and fell to the floor as offering... over the strewn jasmine from before...
He brought her hand out and shifted the ring to his right and pushed it in, in many slow strokes ..
Something triggered in her brain... and it wasnt polite...☺️

It was a size loose nd he acted like it was too small
RAKSHASAN😳
Her hand was red... in embarrassed glory... he traced the solitaire with his thumb. She pried her hand from his grip unsuccessfully

She felt the ring with her middle finger and pinkie... COLD, GOLD... AND SOLID👏

"Why are u dressed up today?" he asked
She looked at him like "WHATTT?"
"Arent you supposed to say something flowery?" she asked accusingly
"Like what?" he asked bending down and claiming his first kiss as a engaged man☺️

His jaw smooth and creamy, unless he stroked in the opp direction, she felt a faint rasp... the woodsy scent... he reached for her tongue with his lips
She shook her head and moved on him, like a string of bells
He let her step on his shoes...
He soaked her jhumkas... and nose ring...
"why are u dressed up?" he WANTED TO KNOW
"They needed a partner for a tall guy at the Triveni dance" she mumbled gasping
He kissed her... as if there was supposed to be no other tall guy in her life☺️

When he let her go... she lay on the wall gasping...

"I dont want an open marriage" she said, airing her demons😭
"WHY NOT?" he asked seriously😆
"Because u will be dead before u begin" she said her husky voice ruining the warning☺️

"Do u want your note?" she asked, reaching for the moist crumpled bamboo extract...
"Its yours" he said

When Appa knocked frantically
"ISHITA" he yelled

He stepped back... letting her open the door

Hands in pockets
She stood in front of her dressing table mirror adjusting her clothes, hiding the note...
picked up the bangle shards and flowers from the floor, looked for a place to put it...
"This is yours" she handed him the scooped two handfuls... turned to look at him one time... one time
He leaned on the wall checking his phone messages as he tucked the flowers in his pocket
He looked up from his phone...

"WHAT IS GOING ON?" Appa demanded

R&B walked up to him slowly

"I would like to marry Ishita Sir.." he said
JUST SAID IT... JUSTTT

"Enna da sonney? What did u say?" ANGRILY

"Appa nurse" II hissed
"NURSE AA? THE WHOLE WORLD KNOWS" Appa scolded her sternly😡
"I will not approve" Appa told R&B😡

"May I ask Sam to call Mrs Iyer?" he offered softly in his characteristic inaudible tone..as if he didnt hear Appa🤣

"Two weeks" he looked at II as he said his promise⭐️☺️
She nodded feebly... weak and fragile

Appa sputtered and stumbled😡☢️

He left without looking back, only to meet Mrs Iyer at the door
"Hello Mrs Iyer" he said doing a Namaste
"Can Sam call you?" he asked😃👏
She looked like she was just hit by a truck😲





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Posted: 10 years ago
Havnt read anything cuter than this so far in the story.

cant stop gushing. we need more nisha. pleaseee. update soon
Edited by arshi21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
No words to say nishu. I simply just loved it. Each condition,the Cartier which II spoke to Mihir n R&B making a note of it and getting her the same. Asking her why she is dressed like this ,it was a typical lover boy who is very possessive abt his gf.the j
Kiss after making her wear. Appa's concern and amma's expressions. Simply mind-blowing concept.
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Posted: 10 years ago
OH MY MY!!!!!
Gosh this guy is extremely good.. I want this man di!!!!!!!
Appa is back again.. Iyer warrior.. When he shouted at RB i could imagine Appa with a sword in his hand trying to move forward to sling RB's neck.. Rofl
Amma's look 🤣
Ermmm.. RB's reply... Heheheheheh.. He is very steen n stubborn!!!
The whole world knows 🤣 🤣

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