Ishra OS'Apology & Promise' Part 1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Raman made adhi back to bhalla house hoping that ishita woukd apologize to make things better,along with shagun and mihir us accompanying them too. He s driving car with a losted mind. He really not wanted his ishita to seek apology to adhi or anyother. His mind and heart were driving towards different directions. He wondered a great CEO who can make decisions easily ,who can make anyone with his one angry look and who knows to hit and play correctly to make his what all he wishes. But today he is feeling helpless. It was not that before also he demanded ishita to seek an apology byt this time it was different. Now he cannot see his lady love bowing her head in front of others. She s my strenght...no no..i cannot ask ishita to do it. I will convince adhi in some other way. He started to drive fast with a hope ...but he was unaware if fact that his mummiji have already made ishita to seek an apology.


Bhalla house::


Ishita ,mr and mrs bhalla, romi aur simmi gathered in hall waiting for adhi. Other than mummiji all are visibly hurt and angry by mummijis decision.

Raman and others reached bhalla house. Adhi did not get inside bhalla house and even others. They understood adhi s waiting for ishita.

Raman: Ish...
Before he completes,mummiji come and hugged adhi . She turned and signalled ishita.

Ishu come forward and seek an apology from shagun and adhi too. Shagun being the melodrama queen started het wicked antics and make a try to be a good one in others eyes. She hugged ishuta and ask apology on behalf od adhi. But no one were bothered of her.Sudden act of ishu make raman stunned but he was happy that his son will be convinced for now.
Ish:: Neelu thaali leke aavo. Ishita did aarti of adhi..and request adhi to stay happy and forever in bhalla house as it is his home.

Adhi;;::
Thank u ishita aunty.
Thanks for accepting my demand.

Raman as well as ishita was little happy by adhis words in this hell frustrated situation.
But as u all know theit happiness are only for a short span.
Adhi continued...
I am not yet convinced. You want me to stay happy in this house along with others. If it should happen i want u to do something more for me.

Ishita was shocked while others excluding shagun .She was very happy and felt proud of her son that her son will demand something only in her favour.
A frustrated raman asked in a sudden .." adhi ab isse bi zyaada tum kya chahate ho meri ishita se"

Her inner heart felt contented when she heard meri ishita from raman.

Ishu:: she stopped raman.
Raman let me handle this.
Tho adhi maango tum kya maangane chahte ho.
Adhi::
Muje patha hai ki aap meri mamma ko pasand nahin karti. Aap hamesha meri mom ko taunt maarte ho. Mein iss parivarr mein kush tabh raha pavoonga jab meri mamma happy honge. So i want you to promise to me that you wont say a word against my mother and u will never hurt her.

All were hurt by adhis words. Everyone knows its shagun always hurt ishita but never ever ishita did it. Raman was controlling his anger as he remember counsellor words. But he cannot let it happen. But for the peace of everyone and thus ishita told that she will handle this ,He decided to be silent and watched the sceanario as a mute spectator. He really thanked as his loving daughter was away at vandus place...so that she s not their to witness all this.

Before ishita speaks ..it was someone else who yelled suddenly...

Bhabi..aap aisa koi promise nahin denge. Aap log ko ho kya gaye hai. Adhi bacha hai aur mein maanta hoon sab log use pyaar karta hoon ..aur mein bhi karta hoon. Par bhabi iss ghar ki sab kuch hai aur vo iss ghar ka shaan hai.
Bhabi mein aapse kuch nahin maanga hai abhi tak par aaj hak se mang raha hoon. Pls aap adhi ka iss demand ko math maniye. Agar aap aise promise karenge tho ye hi matlab ho ga na ki aap ne shagun ko hurt kiya dha. Already mummiji ki kehne par aapne bina kuch ghakti ka maafi maang liya hai,ab aur kuch mat karo please.


Simmi : Ah ishita please romi ke baat suno. mein romi ki baat se sehmath hoon.

Adhi was getting angry seeing the support for ishita in this house afterall this much happens. By sensing the tension of adhi,mummiji shouts at simmi and romi to keep the mouth shut and said let ishita decide wahat she wants,and she added she knows her bahu/ Vo samjadhar hai...and she looked at ishita.


Romi: ah teek hai,sab ko mein hi ghalat lagta hoon. Aur bhai aap hamesha mujpar chilathe hon na,aaj aapki aawas kaha gayi. Jabi kisi ke upar chilano ho,to aap sab se aage honge,Tho aaj kya huva.


Thoshi: Oye romi..thu chup kar.

Romi: Mein jaa raha hoon ,muje ye sab drama dekhne ki zaroorat nahin hai. He angrily wenbt out,when ishita stopped him...


Ishita" :: Rukko romi...

Aise rootke nahin jaate,...

Adhi: Without patience...

Meine aapse kuch maanga ishita aunty. Kya aap vo kar sakti ho, To mein ithar rahoonga.varna tho mein vapas apne mamma ko lekar mihir chachu ke ghar chalen jaayenge.

Raman and Thosiji seems extra worried by hearing adhis words.

Adhi in mind was praying that ishita should accept the demand. He rememnbers what his mom told.( Flash Back scene in mihir house::

Shagun: adhi tum jaante ho na hamari financial condition. Hume bhalla house waapas jaana hi hoga. Aap sabse achae se raho,especially ishita se.

Adhi thought if ishita did not accept this as per his words he should return back. but if that happens his mom will be worried and scold him since her happiness will be ruined by this demand.


Ishita: Adhi meine humesha chahe hein ki aap khush raho sab ke saath,Aur mein aaj bhi yahi chavoonga aur aage bhi.

Now adhi,raman and shagun and his mummiji left releived. Romi and others including mihir was disappointed at this statement.


Adhi: nice, Tho aap jaldi se promise kar lo.

Ishita: Meine ab tak meri baat khatan nahin kiya hai,Puri baat sun lo..

Agar meri ek promise se aap hamesha kush rahonge to mein vo promise dhene ke liye thayar hoon.

Aap 12 years ke ho,aur aap maante ho na aap bada ho gaya ho aur ki aap badon ki baat ko bhi samj saktha hai...hai na?

adhi: ha..

Ishita: To mein aaj aapko kuch baat samjhana chahta hoon.

Toshiji: Ishitta ye kya hai,?

Ish: please mummiji,asap maante ho na mein samjhdhaar hoon. Please let me handle this.

Ah to adhi, Mein promise karrongi...jo bi tumne kaha hai mein waisa hi karoongi,Par kya hein na adhi problem ye he ki tum mujhe pasand nahin karte ho. Aur mein jitna bhi karoo tumein vo kam hi legenge. Isliye mein chahti hoon ki aap pehle meri teen baat maanoge aur aap agar ye teen baat maanenge to mein aapko promise dhe dhoongi.

Aapne ne suna to hoga na badon ki beech mein same level ka promise hota hain. Tho aap mujshe kuch promise karo,aur badle mein bhi kar doongi,What say?

Adhi: he was literally shocked at this sudden turn of event,but he delibreately want ishita to give that promise.

Ah mein bada hoon,tho mein samjhtha hoon. Aap ka teen baat manane ke liye mein thayar hoon.

Ishita: oh how sweet adhi...Dont worry theen aasan aur choti choti baatein hai. Aapne jo promise maanga hai na ,use agar meri baat ko dheka jaaye tho vo bahuth chotti hai...


Next Part:

Ishita to demand her three wishes from adhi. Shagun and raman stunned by her wishes.

Adhi to accept the wishes and ishita to give promise.

HIGHLIGHT: "

Ishita: Adhi aap ke pappa chathe hain ki ruhi ki thara mein aapki ishimaa banoo. Par shayad ye aap nahin chahte ho.

Aaj se mein adhi ki ishimaa banane ki koi koshish nahin karenge ,aur aisa thabhi hoga jab adhi khud chahenge. I hope mein ye baat sabko cler kar rahi hoon.She sternly look at raman"


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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Amazing.
Finally JKR dekhi.
sussu adi ko Ishita ki value samzani hogi not only Sussu boy but mr.Raman & mrs.bhalla ko bhi.
Great Start.
Thanks For pm
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Really good...reveal the 3 wishes soon
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Want to knw wht ishu demamded...
Pls yar sabko maaza chakav...
Aur iss adi aur shagun ko bahar karo...


Pm me fr nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Awesummm start! Finallyy JKR in form! Loved it!
Kash serial mei ishita aisa kuch kare!

Cont soon! Eagerly waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
awesome..
toshiji..😡😡😡
am literally hating toshiji bcoz of the damn
ghar ka chirag of hers...
awww romi.. i lov u..
i loved the way he supported ishu..😊😊😊
jkr waapus aagaye.. 😊
yeahhh..😊😊😊
precap seems more interesting..
wats her 3 wishes.. i know she is soo selfless to ask anything for herself...
but very eager to kno about her 3 promises...
please do give more n more ishu n her sweet devar.. supporting her scenes
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
well written..please continue..👍🏼
perl112 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Thank u all for ur support.
will update second part today.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
so...you Started a new thread
good update
pls cont oon
waiting
and pls pm

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