TS ~My Heart Aches As Well~ *completed* - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update yaar. Finally Adi realized his fault! 😃
Continue soon! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update Sakshi and thank you so very much for English version too.this time you bring tear to my eyes the word will come to short to explain to you.The way Raman work up to explain to Adi to consider his judgement to people is good simple and easy for him to do it. And at the school he can see the genuine care and concern from Ishu side that really well excecute.the way Raman talk to Ishu infront of family too good too so they also can understand their mistake they made to Ishu and the last nail word from my Ruhi can melt Ishu heart. (All this part made me has tears in my eyes.) Overall it is really great update love it to so much. Hope you will have next part update again. Have a great weekend dear.🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
...and i cried again😭
there's no way adi can behave this sensibly - or raman for that matter 😡
lovely ts
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Posted: 10 years ago




Oh my god! I love this one.
Love the way Raman managed the entire situation. Icecream, and then the way he asked Adi to analyse people, the way he made him understand the difference between the right and wrong, it was perfect.
This is the true Raman Kumar Bhalla whom I knew when I started watching the show initially. Someone who's strong, understanding, responsible. Not the one I'm watching on television these days.
I so wish you were the writer of the show, I would loved it. 😃
Beautifully written.
Enjoyed thoroughly. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely TS Saakshi..
Read both the parts in one go..
I loved the way you described Ishita's emotions and hurt.. it was just perfect! The way she kinda detached herself from everyone and stood up for herself..it was just too good.
The second half of it where Raman tries reasoning with Adi and makes efforts to bring them closer was brilliant and it was nice to see a reformed Adi. For a change..😆

Superb one..Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update! Awesome. .n perfect!
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Posted: 10 years ago
thiss partt was really healing part after 1st one...loved it...plzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written.
Finally adi realized his fault.
loved it.
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

This is what I have been craving to read and this is what I want to see in the show. Cvs...pls have a look. We demand for such sensible behaviour.
Superb yrrr Sakshi..perfect is the word. Good job dear. Ofcourse I could connect to each sentence word and letter of this os.
I was thinking of same...silent treatment should be there and you wrote the same. Loved every emotion you portrayed. It made me emotinal and touched my heart.
Covo between ishita toshiji and ishra...wonderful.
And all the scenes you showed...so apt.
She agreed to them and kept doing her duty. Typical ishita.

Really amazing sakshi. Thnks for this os. I read twice just for sake of reading.
Keep writing
And thnks for pm
just loved ishita's dialogs




Thank you so much Ankita. I am really happy you find it worth reading. Thanks a ton for such appreciating words... It could reach your heart and that's all. It's work is done. Silent treatment is much required for Raman and the family coz there is a limit to bear anything and by Ishita's nature. She can't act all impulsive...

Thanks again buddy. means a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Piyu97





<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Oh god sakshi,</font><font size="3">Salute to your writing .</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">It actually got tears in my eyes.</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">It was beautiful. :')</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">That dialog, "main laakho mein ek nahi, laakho mein akeli hoon"</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">It's like a pin that pierced my heart hard.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">The on going track is so painful, I really feel that Ishita's silent mode should be on. It's needed, for Raman, for the family members and for her mental peace as well.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">LOVELY POST😳</font>





Aww that's so sweet of you. Thank you so much Piyu. I felt this is how Ishita should have felt when she was cornered in the crowd of her own family. Raman needs to understand her importance and should soon realise the hand behind their distance.

Thanks a million for such motivating words.
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