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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
In Ishita's way supera iruku... Awesome update thank u
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Wow nice part dr.
Plz update nxt part sn.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Lovely update, but why call it a one-shot if it's divided? One shot should be whole story, na? Perhaps you may want to change the title since the story is going to continue... But lovely update. Just wish Raman does something like that in the show!@
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
excellnt...
i really wanted this in d shw...
rkb style...
ab akal aayegi sabko...
damn shagun...go to hell...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awww... awesome story line yaar.. sacch mein aise maa ke jagah.. bin maa hota tho better hai..
chee kaise maa hai yeh shagun..
if u can do pm me for the next parts..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
part-3

all family members start accusing shagun for her deed ...

toshiji : mere hi mat mari gayi thi mein apne pote ke pyaar mein andhi ho gayi thi aur apni bahu ke sath galat kerne lagi. mein ye kaise bhul gayi ki ki ye mera pota nhi tera beta hai shagun tere trah bana diya tune isse.ajj ke baad mere sirf ek poti hai aur koi nhi '

mihir : shagun mujhe laga itna sab hone ke baad to tumhe akal ayegi but tum to kisi ki sympathy ke layak nhi ho.

Raman :rehne de mihir kisse samjha raha tu ..mein iss aurat ki rag rag se wakif hun iss liye mene ye natak kiya ..kyuki mujhe pata hai ye aurat sirf paise se pyaar kerti hai aur kisi se nhi ...ye to yaha tak bhi nhi boli ki ruhi ko mere pass rehne do balki usse chod ke jane ko tyaar ho gayi ...aur ishita sirf yahi chahti rahi ki mein aur adi sath rahe ...

shagun : tum apni bhenji biwi ki tarif kerna band kero uski aur behen ki wajah se mere jinddagi barbaad ho gayi

Raman shouts enough shagun band kero apni bakwaas aur nikalo yaha se apne bete ko leke kyunki ye mera beta nhi hai sirf khun mera hai but hai ye ashok ka hi beta

ishita :raman ye app kya keh rahe hai adi apki jaan hai uske bina app kaise rehnege usse takleef mein dekh payenge

Raman : ishita bhaut sun liya mene tumhari tum apni accchai ke age kuch nhi dekhte ho tumhe to ye bhi lagata tha ki shagun badal gayi hai dekha tumne ye nagin hai ye sirf ghar todna janti ghar jodna nhi . and i m really sorry itne din chup rehne ke liye mein ye dekhna chata tha ki adi kis had tak ja sakta hai ...pata to mujhe ussi din chal gaya tha jab tum hall mein ro rhi thi tumhare uper jane ke baad mein adi ke mare mein gaya tha check kerne tab mene uski aur shagun ki baat sunni.

raman hugs ishita with tears in his eyes i mreally sorry ishita mein jitni kosis kerta hun tumhe apne past se dur kerne ke liye utna hi tumhe dukh pahuchta hun lekin ajj se sirf mein tumhare aur ruhi ke bare mein sochunga .mein apne bete ke pyaar mein andha ho gaya tha but ab aur nhi .

adi comes near raman and said papa i m sorry mujhe maaf ker do itne din mujhe bas yahi lagta reha ki mom apse pyaar kerti hai aur apne ishita aunty ke liye unhe chod diya tha ...m really sorry ishita aunty mein apni mom ki baton mein aa gaya tha .

Ishita : adi beta isme tumhari galti nhi hai tum sirf apni mom ki baat man rahe the beta tumhare papa tumse bhaut pyaar kerte hai aur kerte rehnege dont feel sad and hugs adi

adi first time feel d goodness of ishita and hugs her tightly. ruhi also comes there to hug her ishima and my ishima is best

Raman : and my wife is best and hugs three of them

all family watches with teary eyes






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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
suprb...
loved toshiji's lines...i hop atleast one tym she shld say in d shw...ki i hav nly ruhi...
raman...nagin nd ghar todna...fab she desrves it...

adi apologsd good fr him...
group hug so cute...
loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shavi2311

suprb...

loved toshiji's lines...i hop atleast one tym she shld say in d shw...ki i hav nly ruhi...
raman...nagin nd ghar todna...fab she desrves it...

adi apologsd good fr him...
group hug so cute...
loved it...

thank you... hope u like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
End is Well tha All is Well.
the story line is written for everyone Happiness.
SUPPERB.
i read Twice and ilike it to much
thurda DIL halka huwa,
love you
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Beautifully written. Finally adi know shagun truth. Happy family. Totally Loved it. Thank u.

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