Love at First sight SS Chapter 8 on page 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Nice story...
totally loved it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 7

Today!!!...our first nite..I cant believe it..is it really happenin in my life??
The room has decorated with red roses and jasmine flowers..
I Ishita Raman Bhalla...waitin fr my husband Raman Bhalla..its almost 1hr still no sign of him..My thoughts went 2FB on d day we supposed 2talk abt us...yes thats wat he told me??abt us!!
Still I m unware of his feelings..n wat was he tryin 2say me wen I asked him fr chance..chance fr our realtion..our marriage.

Flash black

Ra:Chance fr wat??yu c I ..
Before he say sumthng..I heard hr voice
Sh:O god Raman yur here!!
wit dat she came forward n took him in a hug which made me feel jealous
Ra:while reciprocatin hr hug n asked shagun yur here..@diz time..n wr r otherz??
Sh:yeah!!Ruhi wished 2hav dinner so i came wit hr..week end na they both went fr Club.Why ru here and doubtly looks @Ishita.
Ra:hearin Ruhi name excitdelty...wr is she??
Sh:There yu c..indicating corner table.
Ra:I ll bring hr yu too join us..and Ishita diz is shagun my class mate n my close frnd..n Shagun diz is Ishita my..
Ruhi:Mama ruhi called shagun.
Ra:I ll brin hr
Sh:Hi
Me:Hello..
We both occupied our seats n suddenly orange juice spilled on shagun saree n she excused hrself n went 2Wash room.I was all alone in the table n heard dat voice
Param:Hey beauty..yur alone.yu need company..
Me:I got angry n automatically my eyes went in search of Raman..who still pacifyin Ruhi
Pa:arrey cum on yur too shy my baby..n tries 2touch my arm..my tears made its way on my cheeks...Then suddenly thud!!Raman was beatin black n blue 2param n he was tryin 2escape fr Raman clutch but no use.Hotel guards came n separted param frm Raman
Pa:Yu did a mistake Mr..I ll nt leave yu
Ra:Cum on Even i dont wanna lve yu..b****d..how dare yu touch my wife..I ll cut yur hands..
Guards took param out and Raman too corrected his shirt.
Same time Shagun came n listened n shocked 2hear dat I m Raman's wife..
I was flyin in air by listenin Raman words 2dat idiot..i was nt able 2 express my happiness n rooted my spot dats wen i felt his armz on my shoulders n wit out any hestation i buried my face in his shoulders.he kept pattin my back untill i calmed myself.
Sh:Raman wat is diz?is she is yur wife?!
Ra:yeah she is..My wife Mrs.Ishita Raman Bhalla
Sh:But Raman
Raman cut hr off
Ra:Pls shagun i ll explain yu everthing ltr.yu pls lve wit Ruhi i ll cum home n explain
Ruhi:no i want yu..nt mama pls
Raman made me 2sit on d chair n took ruhi in hiz arms n kissed hr saying dat today dey ll sleep together n made ruhi 2go with Shagun..
We both are in Raman car headin towards our home..v both lost in our thoughts
Me:Does Raman loves me??He accepted me as his wife in front of so much ppl..but he was tryin 2say sumthin...
Ra:o again wat I hav done..I accepted hr as my wife in public

Guys sry fr late update..pls let me knw wat it is...next update will be by wednesday karan promise..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
wow..thts nice...
loved it...

waiting fr nxt...

updte soonish...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Nice update! Eargely waiting for the nxt!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Nice SS...read all the parts in one go..
But please dear can you make an index on the first page/post..
It is really difficult to go through all the pages to see an update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
nice update
waiting for next update
update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Exactly whats going on in Raman's mind ...he really hates her or he is going to give her chance plz update soon ..pm if possible😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
nice story...waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Hi guys I m back to IF...sorry fr d delay...Wat 2do juz 15 days back I m blessed with baby boy...as yu guys are aware till diz days was full concentrated on my health.
Allah dua se my baby is healthy.I m full free fr next 3months...maternity leave.so thought 2 complete my story which was pending.

I do no how many are yu interested and remember my story...so if yu guys want me 2continue...pls let me knw.

On yur comments...Next part will b der

Love
Aisha Sate
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
congratulation. I am sure this is the best feeling in the world being a mother. your story concept is very good . you can continue it anytime if you are ok.but of course baby comes first. may Allah bless your baby with all the happiness.

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