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Jyo

Originally posted by: Jyoe

oh forgot to mention..this part..84 has to be the BESTEST so far. (all the other part are BEST and I am waiting for the BESTEST EVER!😆)..I loved that it was just II and R&B in that train..and you gave THEM that time between them. was nice to lil more about the man himself..

And I loved the way he spoke in Hindi in such polite way to the help..well brought up kid he is😊...just looses his cool when madame II is around😆..love makes you do crazy things isnt it!😆

And I loved the "ceasefire" wala bit😊. Can he get any cuter!

Haaye..mera pura weekend R&B ke baare main sochtey nikal gaya! and I still cant get enough of him...

Jaldi next update plz..pretty plz!😳

Originally posted by: Jyoe

I loved loved loved their recent encounter on the train! I am sucker for anything romantic and this was absolutely romantic for me. He being there at the right time to save II like a knight in shinining armour! Nothing filmy yet so real! Does not have to be one's lover only..any guy who you know..be it your colleague, your friend in that situation or any acquaintance would have done the same and gotten protective about a girl in that situation!😊👏 I loved that part the most! It was so real!

Even though they are still not expressing themselves about their feelings for each other, I like that they are getting so comfortable with each other..just like a real couple..!

I have been a M&B fan since the time I started reading them and even though I am way past those teenage years now, I still grin and blush like a teenager whenever I read one of them even now .😆

And reading your story is making be behave like a teenager again!😳 Reading about R&B and II and their encounters and escapades, make me ☺️

I would put your story among the top love stories I have ever read in my life!😊 and the one that I know I am going to remember for rest of my life. Some stories just leave a mark on your minds and hearts and this one i know does that!

And your R&B, the tall handsome punjabi munda who speaks less, gives those looks all the time, those half smiles, has an attitude but still polite, ready to pick up a fight anytime yet so overtly protective about the ones he loves...haaye..is straight out of M&B novel for me..my hero!☺️

Do such men exist in real life? Kahan milte hai aise log ??😳

Originally posted by: nividances

"An Iyer warrior once threatened me... I wouldn't doubt their valor" 😆

They are actually talking!

I like it when Rakshasan talks. Just enough he says. Unlike her, who just can't stop. In more ways than one they are completely opposite, but there is a tendency for opposites to attract. And they are most definitely attracted to each other...STRONGLY!

Glad to see the attraction still remained strong even when they weren't being physical (I think I forgot to comment on that earlier). Their mere presence near each other is enough for both of them to feel the heat. 😳

"she didnt turn back or wave or smile, he didnt hold his breath hoping for it"

But he still watched her as she went up. And it gave me immense satisfaction to read that. 😃

Just small hints like this from his side is what I want in future updates as well...it's enough, just right.

My sunday is made wid such romance.. Awww.. He touched her.. Rubbed his stubble wid her hands... M dead di!!!! He is REAL!!! FIND ME ONE NISHA!!! 😃 😃
This man makes me blush.. His name his stubble his ear plugs his watch his cargos his hoodie his hair.. EVRTYTHING ABOUT HIM 😳 😳 😳

This is such a bestseller...i read someone saying she wants an autographed copy, I want one to...

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Jyo

THANKS FOR THE THREE FOUR FIVE NOTES

Will respond to all of them

I am sorry to all others who I have ignored

I JUST DONT HAVE THE TIME

I AM SO SORRY

P.S. Please tell ur bosses, a friend uses Google to write romance fiction

WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT...

Ive kept my story decent enough, they could read if they want to...

Nish you know I was hovering over yesterday till 8.45..then left for dinner.. and couldn't make it after that..

got up in the morning. and just got through reading all the parts an hour back..

I m thrilled ..ecstatic feeling.. the train journey..
loved it..can't describe in words what I m feeling now.. she held her tears feeling someone come but when she saw it was him..she let the tears flow.. and he sensed something and reached out to her.. can't get over this..for me this sums what they share!!

Just wanted to drop by again to remind you that you're awesome Nisha. The passion and intensity with which you write this story amazes me...never lose it!

May this tale go on forever :D