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Posted: 10 years ago
countdown starts .. waiting for the new update 😉 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

read all chapters in one go..

Worth 12 hrs enjoyed every part.
Really different and interesting concept.
Charecters well set.
I pity myself for not reading from start.
Will be waiting for next part.

Raman will not speak in his defence and even if he speaks Ishita may not believe him.

So story in interestig turn.Raman has to do something big to proove.


Ha ha!

YOU JUST gave us a previously unknown piece of statistic

It takes 12 hours to read...
Roshnee/Wings is going to LOVE that

I HOPE YOU ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF IT

THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING
You dont have to feel bad at all

I started writing this for ONE person, Columbia.😃
I lucked out by getting 100,000 hits in 3 weeks😃

I did not market it, I did not send notes out, I did not spread the word in anyway
I realize Social Media Forums organizes itself in cliques, people generally gravitate towards "Liking" and "Responding" to things written by "friends" only.Some are adventurous😳

I HAVE THE MOST INTELLIGENT, GRACIOUS, KIND not to mention adventurous group of people reading this now.

I AM GLAD you began whenever you did
You should feel special for belonging to this group😃
Cheers!


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604


Ha ha!

YOU JUST gave us a previously unknown piece of statistic

It takes 12 hours to read...
Roshnee/Wings is going to LOVE that

I HOPE YOU ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF IT

THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING
You dont have to feel bad at all

I started writing this for ONE person, Columbia.😃
I lucked out by getting 100,000 hits in 3 weeks😃

I did not market it, I did not send notes out, I did not spread the word in anyway
I realize Social Media Forums organizes itself in cliques, people generally gravitate towards "Liking" and "Responding" to things written by "friends" only.Some are adventurous😳

I HAVE THE MOST INTELLIGENT, GRACIOUS, KIND not to mention adventurous group of people reading this now.

I AM GLAD you began whenever you did
You should feel special for belonging to this group😃
Cheers!


But frankly speaking I dint feel bored for a moment.
Whole thing in Ishita's POV it is really a great idea.
Now she is in revenge mode and Raman don't even have any idea what is happening except knowing Ishita will go forever.
Will be waiting for Raman's agnipariksha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved the update Nisha finally Vandu getting a hint.. Waiting for what happens next.. Nowadays like serial spoilers i comb through your comments to see what could be happening next 😆.
So @ home II says she is not sure and work she is talking about honey moon in Mauritius 🤣 poor II kya haal kar diya R&B ne..

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I knw dey r nt d dancing types...n the story is not that types as well; if they were id love a hot sizzling close dance at some corporate aftrr party... Givn the current situation it wld be such a tease 😈
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This is bad. II you're such a Gryffindor! Always jump before thinking!
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Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

This is bad. II you're such a Gryffindor! Always jump before thinking!

😆 i like the harry potter reference!
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Posted: 10 years ago
*refresh refresh refresh*
where's the update!!!!!!!''''😭
I'm waiiitttiiinnnggg
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You're such a tease! You change the title and then vanish😡
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A girl for R&B
Part 78

II jumped out of bed, not wanting to hear his "phone voice" she didnt know how it sounded, she didnt need another blow to her gut
"Hello" said Akka, holding her laugh
"Ya?" 😳
"Raman, R&B? kaha na tumne us din... this is Ishita's sister" she said cheerfully😃
"Oh! Vandita?" he said deeply😳
"Yes.. Vandita... ILOVE HOW YOU SAY MY NAME"😳

AYYOOO AKKA WHY DO U HAVE TO SAY THAT TO HIM?😭
Athim just shook his head and stepped out after handing Shravu all the darts
He began loading it all again... KIDSSS!😆


Oh BTW, why did u send such an expensive gift?"

"I lost a challenge Vandita" he said😃
"If u keep saying my name like that I am going to be unable to fight with you" Akka roared in laughter blushing☺️
II sat on the living room couch, unable to STOP hearing this nonsense

Anmma: Do u want soup kanna?
She got up and went to the kitchen, "Amma na heat panren, I will heat it"
She began busying herself😃
VANDU STOOD BEHIND HER😲

"I know, it was a challenge, but its OK u dont owe the kid anything" Akka became serious

"Dude, u lost and u owe me he said, winking" R&B reminisced😃
"Hes a terror, we should have named him Ishita" Vandu tickled her waist
II turned crimson...

"U SHUD HAVE" R&B SAID CALMLY😳

"OMG, so u agree too? That makes two, no three if u count Bala, when I talk with u I forget he even exists" Vandu TOLD HIM😲

AYYO not only u forget u are a married woman u tell him u forgot?😡

II poured soup out into a small ceramic bowl..

Akka: Amma rasam adulaye irukkatum. Leave the rasam in that bowl"

Akka:R&B, U SHUD COME HOME FOR DINNER IF U LIKE RASAM

WHO MADE IT? he asked😳

He actually asked who made it, WHY? IF ITS AMMA HE WONT EAT? IF ITS NOT SOME FANCY MAURYA CHEF HE WONT EAT?
Rakshasan... starve to death ipdiye, just like this😡

II was furious, she spilled some getting it out of the microwave

"Amma made it R&B , she is a wonderful cook"👏

"Does she also make aloo matar?" he asked softly🤣

Vandu was shocked at the question... "No.. usually Ishita makes the Punjabi food" "Why do u ask?"😲

"No, u know since rasam is a Iyer staple, aloo matar a Punjabi?" he said softly😃

"OH! Arey Ishita makes Punajbi food like its nobody's biz" Akka gushed
II grabbed her phone FURIOUSS😡

IDU ROMBA MUKYAM, ITS SO FRICKIN IMPORTANT TO TELL MY QUALITIES
HES GOING TO GET MARRIED TO ME ILLE, SO HE SHUD KNOW...
AYYO😡

"OK OK R&B why I called u was Animal Planet ne maanga aur tumne, aapne gift kar diya, its not right"

"I cant take it back"
"Bala will drop it off on the way to work with Sam's guard" she said calmly

"Vandita, please dont do that"

"I am going to say stuff so u I acn hear the different ways u say Vandita...😳.😆U are Ishita's client at the end of the day, you guys have a business relationship" Vandita became serious

IT WAS MORE THAN BUSINESS IT WAS THE MOST MIND NUMBINGLY PASSIONATE RELATIONSHIP IVE HAD, AND... WILL HAVE
WEVE SPOKEN 50 THINGS, BUT KISSED 200 TIMES..☺️. HE BLEW ME TO BITS LATER😡

II's blush transformed into despair..
Appa signalled Amma and asked "Who is it?"
Amma squirmed...

"Its Raman Bhalla pa" II snitched, saying his full name gleefully

SERIYANA SAKUNI MAMA DI NEE. APPA KITTA PROMPT AA SOLLITTAYA? Nice Nice🤣
U are a Shakuni Mama II, how could you

Appa was visibly upset seeing Akka flirt and gush
Bala just didnt care, he was busy stopping Shravu from shooting down his rasam rice and aloo curry🤣

Appa started off "WHy is she talking to HIM. This is not done... what connection SHE HAS?"

Amma squirmed

Vandita re-entered the living/dining area with the call still on
"OK... I am going to give the phone to Ishita u guys sort it out, u either take the money or the toy"
She threw the phone on II's lap as she sat on the couch with the soup bowl, criss cross, watching a random Hindi soap

"Inda di pesikko"

Every pore was on fire that moment... like someone threw a lit match on a can of pteroleum...

"I am eating, I cannot talk right now" II said angrily😡
"U can talk and eat, u do it all the time with me and Bala" Akka argued..😃
"I am holding the TV remote and Saath Nibhana Saathiya is my absolute favorite show" II was pissed😡
"Vazhiyaade, zyaada naatak mat kar"😃
Akka grabbed her bowl and set it on the coffee table

"HE IS STILL ON, HOW RUDE, HES YOUR CLIENT ISHITA" Akka hissed😳

II hated her akka the most at that very moment😡

HE MUST BE IN BED WITH MARLIESE WHILE HE FLIRTED WITH U. HE MUST BE HAVING AN ORGY WITH MARLIESE AND ANOTHER WOMAN
U MADE AN ASS OF URSELF AND NOW U WANT ME TO TALK?
I DONT CARE LET ANIMAL PLANET KEEP THAT FRICKIN TOY
I AM DONE DOING FINANCES WITH HIM
I REGRET GETTING INTO SUCH A SITUATION IN THE FIRST PLACE
I DONT WANT TO HEAR HIS VOICE OR TALK TO HIM😭
HES BETTER OFF IN HIS ORGY I AM BETTER OFF WATCHING SOAPS😭

II got up reluctantly
Akka went to join everyone for dinner

II did NOT say a word😳
Did he?
NOOO!😳
II went to her room and lay in bed... holding the phone/caller
They heard each other breathe😳

SHE DID NOT HEAR MARLIESE IN THE BACK... NO MOANS... NO GROANS... NO GIGGLES
HER TEARS CAME BACK... in relief? NO!!
in hurt? yes... of being in this situation today

HE "SOUNDED" LIKE HE HAD ALL THE TIME IN THE WORLD...PATIENT STEADY AND SMOOTH
Hers was agitated and angry... aroused... like she would rather be clawing his eyes out
They listened to each other breathe for 7? 9? minutes
"I have to go" she thought/fighting tears and hung up
They will not know what each other's phone voice sounds like... even today

Appa was upset when she went back

Amma busied herself pampering II

"U know the scandal sorrounding his father" Appa scolded😡
"Appa he seems decent, I heard about his Dad, its none of our business" Vandu argued😃
"Tomorrow can u have them over to ur house? Wont people recognize him as the man in his -----" Appa stopped not getting too crude in front of his daughter👏
"Neenga relax pannungo its OK the kids are friends, we are not friends" Bala defended his wife"👏
"Tomorrow whats stopping Vandita from becoming friends with them?"😡
"Appa Nandan's his sister's Sam's son, Nandu and Shravu are friends" Vandu explained logically😃

"Soon u will say I wish they could all come for dinner, or lunch, and then what?" Appa demanded😡
"Ayyo Appa vidungo, dont act so (CHILDISHLY? IMMATURE?)" Vandu didnt say it..
"U youngsters dont care about anything, family values, respect... nothing... like father like son, like daughter" Appa began crossing lines to prove his point😭
Vandita squirmed

II died of shame as she knew EXACTLY WHAT APPA WAS SAYING
APPA WAS NOT WRONG... AKKA HAD NO CLUE😭
II was a live example of how Bhalla recklessness had reached out and destroyed an Iyer
She was a broken torn mess, because of R&B

"Thats wrong Appa I wont agree" Vandita became angry😡
"Why wont u?" Appa argued back
"Sam is a lovely lady, so sophisticated and gracious, Tanmay? OMG!! so dignified" Akka gushed👏
"R&B is very polite too, SO QUIET HE IS... oru vaarthai pesale out of turn that other night not one word out of turn" Bala gushed👏
"Ayyo Appa the guy is extremely decent, he speaks very little and conducts himself very nicely" Akka was adamant😃

Appa was not willing to relent, but let go of the argument because it was his son in law

Amma finally spoke "We shud not interfere in Vandu's friendship, it has nothing to do with Ranjan Bhalla, Sam doesnt even live there, as a daughter it must humiliate her to hear HOW influenced people are by such opinion"👏👏

Amma the LOGICAL BEING, GOD'S ONLY CREATION... ONLY SUCH CREATION👏
Vandu was plkeased to hear that😃

"She is a daughter too, neenga apdi pesadengo, please dont talk like that"Amma continued😭

"Dont u think it must not hurt R&B Appa?" Akka asked😭

"Rich boys?" Appa sniggered😡

II cringed in shame... her own heart break somehow exponentially bigger than R&B's in that moment😡

"Appa DONT SAY THAT... they say he abandoned his family three years ago, sons have so much pride, they look up to their Dads,
ivanukku epdi irundu irukkum? HOW MUST HE FEEL?" Vandu's voice was soft and caring😭

"I cannot even imagine Vandu... hes back and helping his Dad out? now? Nalla paiyyan Good boy" Bala voted his confidence👏😭

"Its not like they came and said to us and said "R&B wants to marry Ishita" AMMA SAID😲... "Enna pero "R&B" Whatever the name is"😕

II's air supply cut off at that very thought... her eyes bulged in shock, she looked down at her bowl... her heart exploding in her chest

"EXACTLY MA... Namba enna kalyanama panna porom? We are not going to get them married or anything, a friendship at the
kids level is perfectly fine" Vandita made her point clear... almost like telling Appa "I am a grown woman, quit telling me who I shud befriend and who I shudnt😃

But will all this change when she discovers what II and R&B have been upto?😲

The soft spot for R&B and Bhallas... is that only wrt to Shravu or in general?😃
Time will tell...


AND HE IS SO HANDSOME BALA... HE TALKS IN A WHISPER... EDO PESINA ADI PATTUDUM MADIRI.. like the listener would be injured if he speaks normally☺️" Vandu returned to LOUING the guy
Appa ate quietly and left

"U must tell me when u are leaving me because I cannot take time off in April audit varadu" Athim offered generously😆

"I will leave u before or after" Vandu declared "NOT during audit"😳👏

Appa was gone, so he didnt hear
Amma slapped her arm

"Enna pesare? Ur husband is sitting right here" sternly😡
"Ayyo Amma romba cute aa irukaan, rombave cute aa pesaran, he looks so handsome and talks sooo sooo softly"😃

Adukku?" So what?" "U ARE MARRIED, Ishita WILL BE SOON AS WELL to Sree what can we do for R&B?" Amma gave her a baffled look, while gushing about Sree😕

"Ayyo Ma paavam R&B... good that Ishita will be enegaged to Sree, illena she will chew him up,
she is a tigress and he seems like a deer" Akka randomly supported some guy she crushed on 😆

"Would be like OURS love" Athimber nodded😭
Akka gave him the "look"

"She keeps saying he is a Rakshasan, 😳
but I think she is mad, I think he is an angel... looks and sounds like one" Akka was ruthless
Bala said "She must have met her match in him thats why she hates him so much"👏👏

"I dont know Bala... I would be bummed if we didnt speak with him any more, or see him any more" Vandita was sad...😭
"Adukosram? Where can we go find a girl for R&B now?" Amma laughed out loud, stuttering around the name "R&B"😲




Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago

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