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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome! As always waiting for more. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohh Nisha its..superb ..mindblowing..Their's fight is also passionate..They are mad at eachother and they are also made for eachother...I hd read so many stories of ishita and Raman ..but this one is my most favourite..I have read it from 1st chapter...Bt due to myExam i was nt able to post a perfect rply...My day start with yr story and end with it ...

U know i had taken out print of ur story so i can read it thousand times...


thanks for the superb story and please dnt end this so soon...I want more chapters pls...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the knot! II is going to see sometime tha all that she thought about R&B is not true.. He's is a razor sharp pro. How is she going to reside him after that ... Nice touch. '
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anoo123

Nisha...

Your story is going great... Amazing work till now...

Stop fishing for compliments & stop analyzing hits,views,likes & comments...U don't need that...This story is clearly above all that...

& can u plz tone down your dislike for the show in the comments... or stop discussing the show altogether since you are not following it anyways... it's disheartening for fans like me...

Thanks...



Anu

THANKS FOR READING

Compared to the things being said on the broader Forum about the show I would say my rants are insignificant. I invested many months in the show. I WILL BE DISAPPOINTED... u know. Its like seeing your favorite object torn apart, and shredded on a daily basis..

While I do understand your concern, in my defense I will say I ONLY respond to comments from disgruntled fans, I dont review the show or the leads on a daily basis.

I have in the last two weeks voluntarily not said a thing about the show.
I started writing this, so that I dont have to say anything about the show or the people behind it😃
My characters and their names are completely different for a reason😉
But yes, I will make sure I say even less😃




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

Love the match😈

Can I say tht their public encounter was AS HOT AS the private one. Gosh so much passion in everything they do. II is sure some gusse wali maiden somehow reading earlier parts never made me think that she could be this aggressive and R&B well apart from his intelligent and unpredictable plans like the french note n books, who wud have thot he could be just as aggressive. This is their effect on each other, THEY BRING THIS AGGRESSIVESS OUT OF EACH OTHER.

And since you are the mother of this story, wanna say that your baby is gettin my fav. Baby to spend time with, as i read old updates sometimes wen not doin anything else


Ps- felt bad for poor ranjan to not get a say😆


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I know right! They are extremely intelligent and educated their love story cant be anything but interesting... plus their story is based on a professional activity so disagreements are a must. She can go to any extreme and so can he... two hot headed people
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks so much !!! I slept by 9:30 yesterday nite and woke up and see this ... kitni khush mili you have no idea ..The sun never sets in our Software Symphonies world 😃
I am so thrilled to be acknowledged my first ever and I feel very honored to be mentioned by you ..seriously :-)

The update was perfect.. i honestly love their characterization they dont give up..dont fawn over each other ,they know they have a chemistry going but will not for that purpose not tell whats on their mind.
I reread this thing again and again oh the nuisances R&B actually supporting his dad , his dad holding his shoulders.
You know we iyer girls take a lot of pride in we are educated and did it on our own and are EXTREMELY judgmental 😆 she has assumed so much about him. We dont know if this is true but to get to where the Bhallas are they would have had to work crazy and probably R&B would have never ever slept and started working at a very young age and then gone on to some great college . II has lead a protected life but is confident enough to fight what she believes in and probably thats what R&B will find endearing..not too many people he probably knows would do that..a career obsessed OCD girl.😆
they are never ever going to agree on anything IMO from kids,to house, to people since one is from the south and the other north with completely different upbringing and opinions and they will never apologize cause they will believe in it strongly but what they will is respect the other person eventually and just a look is all it will take to move on from the fight😳..
How did u do this Nisha make me say i love your story again and again.
And just reading your update with the 2 fighting , on each others throat with everyone watching and feeling the heat while these two are oblivious is sooo perfect.
THANKS!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Christmas Tree & Hazelnut Creamer
Part 60

She walked back wearily to her desk after the fight at 6:45 that evening

Baldev wanted to talk.😲
WHAT was that Iyer? he asked worried😭
WAS I WRONG?" she hissed😡

Chal lets go to a conf room, he quickly hustled her into one...😃
Banda bada theda hai, usko gussa bahut aata hai, toone kyon panga liya yaar? U shud have said workshop uninstall karte hain... U didnt let Ashwini talk😭

II REALIZED she was at fault for flying off the handle like that, but Baldev DID not know, what R&B had been upto😈
The smug bas***d... the way he had been tormenting her for weeks now...
like an invisible enemy... now sending things to Akka's house was the limit.

She COULD NOT tell him what was going on between him and her outside of work😳

Her heart skipped a beat, if there was anyway Baldev was going to figure that out II WAS SCREWED😲

"Do u realize tu client par chillayi?"😲😭
He handed her water, her face was flushed, and eyes BIG-GER...
"I know... I am sorry... do u think Ashwini will say something to More?😭 More was the IT Projects Group Head
"Arey nahi yaar she wont... but lets hope Ranjan Bansal ko call na kar de"
"Tujhe ITNA gusaa kis baat par aaya Iyer?"😃
"Bally tu soch MAHEENA ho gaya, NOTHING is moving... sab points wahin ke wahin atke hue hain...
koi training lena nahi chahta... hum fix karte hain inko woh patch memory sucker lagta hai,
can u imagine inke 20 showrooms aur 10 workshops ya jo bhi hai KAB DELIVER KARENGE PROJECT? 😭😡
WHAT IS WRONG to deploy parallely yaar, workshop system is NOT BUGGY EVEN"

II was in tears, she was not ashamed to cry in front of Bally

"Iyer tch tch... please yaar... stop it... chhod, waise mujhe khushi hai toone us bandey ko sunaya" he whispered😉
HAI NA WOH SMUG? Dont u agree? Ha? Ha?" she begged😃

"Ranjan damage control karega, pakka, waise uski apne bete se nahi banti shaayad.. I WOULD BE REALLY SURPRISED IF HE TALKS TO BANSAL
Tera rating main already likh chuka hoon, I dont want to spend another 10 hours rewriting it" he winked cutely reassuring😳😃

II snorted, and rubbed her nose... her face pink and sore..."Thanks" she muttered...
"I shud have stayed with Rajouri Garden, I shudnt have taken this on... the guy is nothing but a jerk"😡
"Handsome hai yaar banda... shave nahi karta... but hai handsome"😉

"U must be smoking pot" she said stiffly😡

"Pot par to mujhe ZYAADA handsome lagega"🤣

She shut her eyes as she imagined his smirking eyes as he moved over her on Sam's couch...grinning at her uninhibited arousal.. and moans

"I am going to give myself another month, agar woh nahi gaya... woh kidhar jaayega, baap ki company hai... useless... I will apply for lateral Bally"😭

"Zyaada mat soch, abhi ghar ja, ride doon? Kisi bechaare paidal chalne waale ka kaand kar degi nahi to" he laughed🤣
If u promise to bring the man I fought with in front of my car, then I will go now" irate
"Shhh!! Shhh!! Its OK... he was right.. toone socha, usne tujhe bola, u never told me... I would have never approved for the workshop warna"
"Woh to bahut kuch kehta hai, ab har baat follow karenge to ho gaya"

Achhhaaa? KYA KYA KEHTA HAI?"Baldev winked
"Oh! II, u turn me on... we need to get away for the weekend... I am not going to let you get out of the room, lets have mind blowing sex"
II said patting her face with tissue, as she giggled😃😳

Baldev laughed out loud...

Sense of humor badhiya hai, bus isko banaake rakh... Chill Iyer" Baldev patted her shoulders and took off to take a call👏


They met in the elevator at 8 ish that night, she deliberately walked to the farthest corner... he had his ear buds on, and was chewing gum,
he didnt even give her a second glance or so she thought, but he noticed her red face and puffy eyes...
he was the first one to get off, he just walked towards his car, she towards hers...
This will be their first of many acts of the cold war...

The following day, she would wait at the Daily Perk for her coffee, he would be there at the same time, the gal would say,
"I dont have hazelnut creamer, since u both want it, who should I give it to?"

Cancel my order please" she said and walked out...

He would be waiting for the elevator at 5th, she rode up one afternoon, and held the door open for him, he punched the UP arrow forcing the doors to shut
She cursed him whenever she saw him "He has NO FEELINGS... he publicly shouted at me...
destroying my reputation, ORU APOLOGY VARADA PAARU😡, not one apology is coming, Rakshasan" "Him and his GODDAMN inscrutable expression"😡
"I curse the day when I saw him first"😭

She cried one more time at home two days later, and then stopped...crying altogether...

~~~~~
"Can u come by to Munirka kanna?" Akka had asked
II's stomach began to churn...
She recalled the conversation about the purse and how she had lied blatantly yet again...

EDUKKU? For what?" she asked softly
"is everything OK?" "WHY IS HE SENDING YOU MONEY?" Akka was really worried..
"Akka Baldev is calling, let me call u back" she lied and hung up YET AGAIN

II didn't know to laugh or to cry.. Akka was thinking the worst
Ayyyo HE WONT TAKE WHAT I OWE HIM... LEAVE ME ALONE.. PADUTHARAN...Rakshasan
I am at my wits end here...

On a self confident and self assurance scale of 1-10 if II was 8 or 9, the day she entered Excelsior the first time... she was at 3 or a 4 NOW
it has taken a SEVERE beating in the last month... she has consistently lied the last month, from using Babita Singh, to telling Appa she got a ride from a coworker to NOT telling him she went to check on him that rainy night... to telling them she was cold that's why she was wearing her Old Navy hoodie, when she entered the house past 11...
She was eating less, worrying more, just plain preoccupied and nervous...

He had introduced her to an extremely DANGEROUS RECKLESS PASSIONATE side of her personality... this II she did NOT know... it was almost like this II WAS THE REAL II
The original, focused, ambitious, charming, determined II seemed tepid and lukewarm compared to this one...

This one was alive in every pore of her being, physically and emotionally
Its like he pushed a button and the Christmas tree lit up, every limb glowing in multi color glory, every branch bearing an ornament of his erotic acts

She loved to dress up, she loved to party, she was active and chirpy... but now she was was on some mood altering drug... like she took one month's worth of Prozac all in one day

The II October and before WOULD NEVER... REPEAT NEVER willingly walk into trouble... never willingly court danger..now she was walking with a lit match, searching for dynamite... it didn't matter to her😲😭

She had an insatiable urge to WIN... insatiable urge to make love😃
A beautiful glow on her face... (she used moisturizer 6 times a day) just when her sores would start drying and healing... it would show up all over again.

Amma Appa getting the feeling that SRIKANTH is causing her odd behavior...😭
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She waited the following week at Sultanpuri for a auto or a cab... he saw that and just drove off, their eyes met... she turned away as she saw him...
he didnt stop to check if she got a ride or not...

They met at Crosswords one afternoon in her coffee break
While she was boiling and aggravated every minute she spent at Spectrum and every minute outside of it.. THERE WAS NO EMOTION OR REACTION ON HIS FACE..
He acted like he DIDNT EVEN KNOW HER
For some reason that angered her more, she wore her love and hate on her sleeve with pride... he? He just wore his BR tee😡

She had 11 books in all, the glossy, Percy Jackson, and Harry Potter books messed with the magazines and the Financial Planning books Appa wanted
It slid from the center to the floor...
She bent down, picking them up, one slid under the shelf... she saw a pair of flip flops, the toes didnt have to caress hers she would know those toes ANYWHERE
Her stomach lurched... she looked up hurridely to make sure it was not him

IT WAS HIM...😳

She looked down... and began picking up the pile...😡
She only had 10 books now, in a hurry to give him the cold shoulder she walked off to the cash register, he bent to pick up the Lightning Thief
He put it straight up on the top shelf... so she could see and walked away

When the clerk told her she only had ten, she wnet back to search and found the 11th staring at her smugly like the insenstive b-----
that loves to make love to her...

She rode the elevator with Ranjan one morning, Ranjan compliment the sea green crepe chiffon saree she wore...
"Mom has me singing again this evening" she muttered
"U will wear a grand saree I think" he gussed
She nodded shyly

The elevator stopped at 5th, he got in with a coffee cup in hand...not even giving his Dad a look
"Did u want coffee?" Ranjan asked
She only shook her head, not wanting to talk,
Some guys argued about who was trying to get off...

His eyes slid over her form... her hair appaeared moist... her saree clinging from the morning showers outside... he could see an outline of lace inside her blouse
She lifted her leather laptop bag and hugged it...blocking his view😃

Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So much fun even in feigning ignorance.
Loved how she blocked his view! :D

Abb yehi milega itna cold shoulder dene ke baad. SOME expression toh he should give now. AT LEAST be angry or show anger but then he is Raman! Not all that easy :P


I want to see now how they will finish this cold war


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Posted: 10 years ago
I am officially on II's side. I don't care if he is SRK, Hugh Jackman, Chris Hemsworth, Ryan Gosling, Jensen Ackles, and Will Smith rolled into one! She just bought Harry Potter. Although she might be buying them for Shravan but henceforth, I'm gonna consider her fellow Potterhead and in no circumstances shall I abandon a fellow Potterhead! I'm bound by the vows of the sacred Potter Code!

I love their cold wars btw.
Edited by Wings-of-Fire - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
cold war ithna padne mein hot kyun lagtha hai 😛 keep going lady ..

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